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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: softly_spoken

Oh to they met in University...

Awesome Update
Maan the topper... i like this...
been kidnapped to help senior answer in quiz competition
but someones
and voice was not letting him concentrate...
and when he saw her... he forget to blink... his heart started thumping...
pissed of senior pushed him to her and ask him to shut her up by kiss...
and when he held her he just lost in her...and moistened pink lips...
and kissed her...
and then got beaten up by those too who pushed her...
and woke up after 2 months in hospital... bechara...
but Geet was his senior ...? hmm...
he tried to trace her...
or find any ...
and pinky saw her and called Geet...
Geet was excited that he was asking about her but duty call left everything
Continue Soon


Super Like ..this comment ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

Oh to they met in University...

Awesome Update
Maan the topper... i like this...
been kidnapped to help senior answer in quiz competition
but someones
and voice was not letting him concentrate...
and when he saw her... he forget to blink... his heart started thumping...
pissed of senior pushed him to her and ask him to shut her up by kiss...
and when he held her he just lost in her...and ...
and ...
and then got beaten up by those too who pushed her...
and woke up after 2 months in hospital... bechara...
but Geet was his senior ...? hmm...
he tried to trace her...
or find any ...
and pinky saw her and Geet...
Geet was excited that he was asking about her but duty call left everything...
Continue Soon

Ya Allah ..Ye Tho Super Dooper kaaml kI Nkleee
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: -Magicia-


Super Like ..this comment ...

grr..😡Cant you wait a little more... i was editing...
yaar do you know i wrote this comment two times befor posting it yesterday... but my mouse ... such a garbage it is... pehle click nai hota... phir ek saath itne click hojaate hain...
i have asked my bro thousands time for new mouse...he said aaj kal .. shaam ko... God...
lagta hai i have to tell my father, bro isnt listening to me...
i lost all what i wrote... even yet... while petting graphics... i lost it 2 times so that is why i was just keep on saving what i wrote...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
acha i will read and edit comment for part 3
after4...gotta go...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: softly_spoken

grr..😡Cant you wait a little more... i was editing...

yaar do you know i wrote this comment two times befor posting it yesterday... but my mouse ... such a garbage it is... pehle click nai hota... phir ek saath itne click hojaate hain...
i have asked my bro thousands time for new mouse...he said aaj kal .. shaam ko... God...
lagta hai i have to tell my father, bro isnt listening to me...
i lost all what i wrote... even yet... while petting graphics... i lost it 2 times so that is why i was just keep on saving what i wrote...


Acha ..But You know ..It worth More than one like ..ok .so i dont regret ..the more u edit the more i ahve to appreciate ..
hospital 3 parts updated ...
uff formatting ..

morning ko typing finish tha abthak formatting ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Scene 3 Hospital

Welcome Christmas Morning with Wife

11.20 pm 24th December 2011

Meera Almost stopped to breath ,she shot a silent prayer

Jesus ..Please ..Dont give anymore Excitement In This Christmas night ..My Little Heart Cant Hold It ,

She heard sister Rimi giggling , by then almost all people on that corridor has stopped whatever they were doing and was enjoying the love birds ,lost in their passion ..hugging and kissing , Meera felt a tickle scorching her chests .

felt herself ready instantly on what she was seeing and She terribly missed Karan , then got angry in next second .. Quickly , thank God , Only adults were around this hour

She went near to Maan and Geet and Called Maan tilting her red face to other side ..

Maan '''.paused ..

Maan''..

MAAN''''

Maan and Geet were far away from there in their own dreamland ecstasy speeding up the blood in their veins ,

Meera felt so helpless what to do ...!

Then the alarm rang , from the ward ,some patient need attention. Meera shouted ..

Ok ..Everybody leave , She stared angrily Rimi ... Come 'Stop drooling! ...Rimi murmured cribbed something and with other nurses went inside the Ward along with Meera.

Geet tried to Push Maan ..she bite his earlobe softly seductively , and whispered . Maan they need me ..

There are so Many ..Maan replied in a Husky voice and nuzzled her neck , tickling her and his hands automatically went around her cute round flesh on her back , he hold it ,and slowly licked her neck ...

Wow your Ass grown greater .Really..!!

This time Geet pushed him Really Hard , He was about to fell, they got hold the Wall ..and chuckled , locked her in between his arms ...

Geet Pleaded indicating the ward

Please ... Just half an hour more ,

Maan pouting , looked at his watch , OK ,10 minutes ...

Please ...Please ..somebody need me ....she feared it may be Arundhati ,..She begged ...

And i Need you .. He leaned over her ,his weight on her , and rubbing their torso, trapping her between wall and his body leaving her immobile ...

Ok 20 minutes i will come down ..OK ... he looked at his eyes s yearning praying ..

He smiled .. OK ..

I will wait for you in The Parking ...

He quickly turned to leave , then took the bags from his guards and handed over to Geet ,

Get ready and Come ..I will be waiting ... paused

I want to Welcome Christmas Morning with My Wifey , he hold her chin placed a soft kiss on her forehead quickly left . He cant wait for her anymore .. and reluctantly got away from her

And Geet peeped at the bags when she rose her head he was gone .she smiled crying and then '. She immediately went to the ward

Edited by -Magicia- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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FOR THE NEW FF...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited by harshdb - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

Awesome Update
How much Kids Dr. Dayana has... i was like then i lost count.. actually new names na... difficult to notice...
Maan collide with her dream girl saved her from falling...and recognize her at once...
and tell his mom your Bahu...
he wanted to but came in his way...
Alice tried to prove Geet character less infront of Maan and his mom
good that they dint paid notice to her...
Alice Aunty... name for her...
she deserve this...
but cool is that in midst of all she gavehim the info of Geet's whereabouts...
and Maan rush to make her his wife
where did Maan meet her 7 years ago...



WWOOOWWW
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30






indeed

especially



that one...


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