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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
waiting come soon na with update plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
OMG...he kissed Geet...
she was his senior
love at first sight& landed in the hospital.
please update next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Scene 3 Hospital

You are Invited

10. 45 pm , 24 December 2011

Half an Hour Later

Dr.Meera was pacing restlessly after getting Maan's message she was not able to sit , Maan ..She wanted to pull all hairs of her head , she was angry ..Ye Maan , what's he doing ..Isn't it Some Joke ..

I am planning to Marry Nurse Geet of Your Hospital

Find for me where she is Now

I am coming To Pick Her Up

Ps: You are Invited to our wedding after the Christmas Mass at Church make yourself free by then

Meera was shocked ..After 1 and half our Maan''s wedding ?? !!! She really felt is it some joke But she knew Maan very well so it Cant be a Joke , so thinking about Its seriousness she felt like chocking .. Meera had been a unofficial fiance of Maan ., ,she can never forget him for what he did to her .Meera was a family friends daughter . On Every Parties Maan's parents introduce him new Girls hopefully , just to get Answer No from Maan

And one such weekend Party, Meera when she met him requested him to not say a No , but Don't say yes Too Maan frowned Meera Said She loves A Hindu Boy Karan and want to marry him , so Maan's saying nothing will bloom expectation in their parents mind and she will get time until Karan comes back from US after doing his MS and Maan agreed .And later she married Karan. And for That Meera is greatly grateful to him and really love him like a brother

Maan came with a two Guys following him with some shopping bags , "Wedding Centre " Meera could read what's written there ..she feels dizzy she tried to hold the wall for support . By them Maan came and Hugged .


Congratulate Me He ordered cheerily ,then looking at her , U not yet ready , Get ready soon You come with Us

And passed her his Mobile , could u do one favour please send messages to all in contacts , up to k i already sent after that ..please will you do it for me 'please ..

Ha he before moving ahead after handing over the phone ..

Tell me where is Geet's Duty today ..??

She is in Labour ward , Shocked Meera replied ..

Maan laughed , Wow Just great .. we are going to be regular there ..he winked at Meera

I hope '

Maan gone following direction signals on walls ..

Meera stood Numb , a moment , then whacked herself at forehead ..

Oh what i am doing , seems Geet too don't have a clue about it i am sure , she asked about 1 hour before permission to go to Church pray for Arundhati , did she returned Meera wondered ..when did Maan meet her ..??

, i should have told Geet when i got the text message itself , uff , what Geet will think about me ..,

Meera dont wanted to loose geet's friendship , she knew geet well how she react when men misbehave with her ..Maan thu tho aj peetenga ' Oh God . i must save him .

Almost everybody among staff will be knowing Maan , Dr.Dayana's son 'Oh god.. Maan Thumney Mujey Kaha Fasa Diya '! ..she ran to the direction maan disappeared




Edited by -Magicia- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Scene 3 Hospital

Knock On My Heart

10.50 pm 24th December 2011

Arundhati had Nobody , she married her love her classmate against her parents wishes and they got settled in this country .It was their mutual decision until they get success in their business they started together, they wont have kids .They together hand in hand toiled up a hill to hit the success .Negligence paid out and Arundhati had some abortions during the course . Arundhati 's part in company and in her husband's life slowly reduced as her health started to deteriorate , and above all an abortion was not at all recommended. Frequent missing of her husband explaining hectic work finally explained in detail when she received a Divorce notice on grounds never existed and merely meaningless. She did not protested because she dont wanted that man who dont deserve her ,in her life anymore .She was a fighter ,and found a new job and settled .But one day she fainted on streets while returning from work and admitted hospital . And Geet the Nurse there became her only family.

Geets duty will finish at 12 ,but she dont wanted to go really . Arundhati started to have cramps lower abdominal pains , she informed Dr.Meera the duty doctor , but Meera cant do much as she was just a junior doctor and Arundhati 's case really serious and had called Dr.Alice her senior , who had an Off that day.But she said she is busy with Her Christmas celebration and asked to wait until morning and added to chart her duty on OT ,she knew well what Arundhati needed ..still told to wait ..Meera had to agree..' .Geet's experience told her what Arundhati needed that time an Immediate C-section , already Arundhati and Child is in a really dangerous state. But as just a nurse she cant do anything but to pray , and she seek permission from dismayed Meera to allow 1 hour break.

Geet came back and straight gone to Arundhati who smiled seeing Geet , in Pain , Geet Hold her hand sat beside her and said ,"don't worry Mother Mary told me Nothing will Happened to You and Baby . 'she patted on Tummy and the kid moved visibly ,and acknowledged Massi's caresses ' Geet said "Welcome Angel ". and laughed ,Arundhati smiled and bite her lips to control pain .

Sister. Rimi signalled Geet to come out .

She sadly told that Dr.Alice called few minutes before and asked about Geet , and she had to tell that Geet not here and she asked Geet to extend duty till morning as punishment for taking break and must meet her before leaving in her cabin

Geet smiled and said Oh God is great , i asked him to help me to be with Arundhati and see

( Nurses are not allowed to stay at hospital once their duty is over in that Hospital) ... Ok Rimi Your duty is over Right Go and Enjoy Christmas ..ok

she tapped gently Rimis Cheek Both Hugged and Rimi said , Ya i will leave after Sr.Roshni come ok I dont want to leave u Alone

Geet said Thank You ...

Geet turned to go back inside , but she felt a bristle pass through her spine and turned swiftly ! She felt him there ''.!

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Edited by -Magicia- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Scene 3 Hospital

Will Keep You Busy Sweet Heart

11.05 pm ,24th December 2011

There stood Maan smiling , tears in the corner of his eyes... her eyes too Moistened

Geet crossed her hands in front and hugged herself as if to control emotions ...and spoke softly

"So ..you found me "

He nodded winked still naughtily smiling advanced her crouching as a lion traps his prey.

She slowly took steps backward ,scaring and at the same time delighted in his expected actions

He found her naughtiness Ravishing

"some one was really busy that they don't wanted to turn for one second to look back "

reminding the way she stopped for a moment and left church immediately without looking him back , he was sure that she realized its him the moment he hold her and without even looking at his face .

She smiled sheepishly , he caught her , no more excuses

"duty calls " she murmured , but he could hear.

Maan took one more step ahead ..

"hmm duty , " he frowned ,his mouth drawn in a thin line in discontentment and disappointment ,geet fell all over again for his cuteness .." And You are NOT going to leave your job After Marriage"

"Brilliant , NOP" She said Appreciatively

"What if i Make you really busy like them??" hinting some pregnant woman walking around there as suggested by Doctors ,she shied ..bowed her head ,all the shades of red swipe through her face ,nose lips bright red ..

" Then ..i have to .." She whispered , Only Maan could hear her who was just a breath away now

.Maan though Oh God she is so Inviting .. He took her lips before she could complete the sentence .

She Hugged him Tightly as if she never let him go ..

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Edited by -Magicia- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Scene 3 Hospital

You are Invited

update
Maan is just super fast and super confident as well...
oh he helped Meera to get married to her Dream man.
so its time for Meera to payback...
aww Maan said they will be regular in labour ward...
Geet is friend to Meera...?
and Meera of Geet not liking misbehaving boys
Least did Meera know... Geet wouldnt mind Maan

Edited by softly_spoken - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Scene 3 Hospital

Knock On My Heart

you wrote dear... Arundhati's husband was disgusting... left her wife in this condition... to Geet... now Arundhati has someone like family... so Geet doesnt have a family of her own...? Geet went to church to for Arundhati...
and there her dreamboy saw her...
now everything s cleared...
believe me... you wrote just wow ... i love how your all links are connecting...
Dr. Alice such a cruel...
its against professional ethics to leave your patient for personal celebrations...
and she punished Geet after knowing Maan is interested in her.

Edited by softly_spoken - 13 years ago
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Scene 3 Hospital

Will Keep You Busy Sweet Heart

...Impressive... ......

i just the fact.. Geet showed no shock... asked no question... no resistance... no hesitation for him... it was just like that they are regularly meeting each other...and its just another meeting...
i cant tel in words... how b you wrote...
Geet was like she knew that he will come one day for her...
and this links to Maan's confidence you've shown previously...
i mean they had no promises... they dint even ... they dint even know each others name and still shares a surprisingly amazing bond
aww.. even she knew it was him at the churchgate...
loved how she blushed crimson when he told her that he will keep her busy like other preggy women there...
and she simply accepted... and finally the ... superb


Edited by softly_spoken - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
im too happy the way maan said meera
omg she must have fainted
thanx love sis
i loved this ss awesome
continue soon
i hope today u will finish this ff


Edited by zohafarheen - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
ohh gosh love sis maan is too naughty i can say
wat if i keep u busy omg me fainted now
and geet i thought she wont speak to him
but she is blushing by his comment
love u for this ff as a gift of christmaz

Edited by zohafarheen - 13 years ago

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