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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b


Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!! - thanks very much

Poor Naina is missing her mom soo much!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔 - yes it has been days since she has been away

Why doesn't she ask Rajveer to let her call her mom again??😕 😕 😕 😕 - mostly its her ego

Naina is indeed strange as when he is there she doesn't like it and when he is not, she misses him!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😉 😉 😉 😉 - these are the first signs of attraction

Naina in Rajveer's room sure brings back old memories!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - yeh surely we can never forget those memories

The interior of Rajveer's room was beautiful and I loved it!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 - had to show class and richness

So Naina wants to be in a gondola with Rajveer!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 - she sure admires the beauty of it

That would be very romantic and I hope her wish of being in a pyaar ki kashti with Rajveer gets fulfilled soon!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - surely lets see

Naina found her passport in his room and tried to come up with an escape plan, taking advantage of Rajveer's absence!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yep since she held her way out in her hands

Naina is indeed strange as on one side she is attracted to him and on the other she wants to run away from him!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔 - its called running in denial

It was the best opportunity and Naina made the perfect use of it and escaped by climbing down a scaffolding frame!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 - she definitely took advantage before it was too late

It was so dangerous and yet Naina managed to climb down without falling!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 - yes it definitely was suicidal

She has indeed become very courageous and I think it is because of living with Rajveer!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 - perhaps in many ways he has been influential

Naina is so happy to be free and going away from Rajveer!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - finally she escaped the prison to khush to hogi hee na

But she really should not have done that in this strange country where she does not know anyone!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 - maybe yet she just couldn't think of anything better than running away

Rajveer's chasing after the traitor on a speedboat was very well described!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 - thanks a lot

The traitor escaped but not for long as no one can escape from Rajveer!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 - very true indeed

Rajveer had his men spread all around to catch the traitor!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 - of course he always has a plan

Yeh Naina bhi naa!!!! Why did she have to fall asleep??😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 - the excitement tired her out

Hadn't she slept enough in the comfort of the hotel room??😳 😳 😳 😳 - apparently not

Due to her sleeping all her money and her passport has been stolen!!!!! - yeh she was very careless there indeed

Now she doesn't know where she would go!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕 - yes she is lost

Waise she should have driven around in the taxi itself and not gone out of it!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔 - ghabrahat me dimaag kaha chalta hain sidhe se

It was indeed a foolish decision to run away in the first place!!!!!👎🏼 👎🏼 👎🏼 👎🏼 - yes it was

In this condition, she should have gone back but Naina chose to go on!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔 - as i said it wud hurt her ego to accept she has no way out but to go back

As expected, Rajveer is furious and slapped nearly all his guards for their carelessness!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 - yes he was very mad indeed

He wants her found or else none of them will be alive to see the next day and I really hope they find her soon!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 - oh yes and he certainly is dangerous to be taken lightly

Rajveer took out his anger on the things in his bedroom as Naina ran away even after he gave her everything!!!!! - already the day's business had angered him

He is sooo angry that he doesn't know what he would do if she came in front of her!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 - aksar ghusse me insaan sab kuch bhool jaata hain or bus junoon sawaar hojaata hain

He has decided to teach her a lesson but I don't think that he can ever force himself on her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - hmmm lets see

Atleast Naina got a chance to look around Venice and enjoy the view of the canals and the Italian architecture!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes one advantage

Indeed standing on the Rialto Bridge was a dream come true for her!!!!! - haan kabhi nahi socha osne ke yeh din bhi aayega

Naina wants to be free like the pigeons at San Marco's Square and Rajveer has to give her this freedom if he wants to win her love!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - freedom is certainly a necessity to gain anybody's respect

Oh God!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲Yeh Naina kaha chali gayi and now she is in an even bigger mess!!!!! - she brought it on herself

Naina is scared and wants Rajveer to be there and so do I!!!!! - yes because she knows with him at least she was safe in a way

I want him to come there fast and rescue her no matter how angry he gets over her later!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😡 😡 😡 😡 - surely. dekhte hain hero ki entry kab hogi

It is nice to see that Naina thinks of him in her worst moments!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - filhaal wahi oska sahara hain

Rajveer was not in that car as Naina had initially assumed and she is shocked to see that man!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 - yes she is horrified

Waiting to know who is the devil's advocate!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔 - lets see



Edited by awaazilicious - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -purnima-

A big welcome back to DON 🤗 Long time no see 😆😆😆😆 - yeh its fun in guest asppearances

Naina in Rajveer's room 😛 brought back old memories 😉 - i'm sure it did

aww she wanted the river view along with Rajveer "pyaar ki kashti mein" 😆😆😆 hope her wish gets fullfilled 😛😆😆 - yeh she luved it a lot and lets see when it comes true

but rite now, naina seems to be in trouble from all four sides poor girl ...god bless her 😊... - yes but in a way she brought it on her

All the best to her to save herself from the situation she is in...& also from situation she gonna be when she gonna face the fury the man himself 😳😊 - yes God save her

Girl she is in too much mess
-she definitely is





Originally posted by: hinal60

Waiting to know who is don's advocate


Welcome back



Thanks and yeh it shall be revealed soon



Originally posted by: InkyCupid

Wow awesome part, - thanks very much

loved the description of Rajveer's room. - i'm glad u did

Naina ran away and Raj was sooo mad. - yes it wud be hard to save her now

Poor Naina she felt trapped while Raj thinks he gave her the world. - they both r correct in their place

You left us at a cliff-hanger, so please do continue soon:) - sure







Thanks very much



Originally posted by: bakula_gandhi

very interesting - thanks very much

Naina has managed to escape much to Raj's furry.- yes she certainly has angered him a lot

Waiting to know who is the devil's advocate - let's see
continue soon





Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

Wow I just thought wen will u updt last night n today saw ur pm... gr8 updt ... - that i great and thanks for loving it

she escaped but still trapped ...ohh now wat will rajveer do... - yes she made a mistake and lets see what Raj does

updt ssooon super sooon pležzzz eagerly waitinggg ...pležzzz don't keep us waitingggvele looong pležzzz n thnxxx for pm - ur welcome





Originally posted by: nivi26

wow, the story has taken an intresting turn..👏



Thanks very much for loving it



Originally posted by: Vidhi1989

Yet the decision was not so wrong but it has become foolish one.. - indeed at first it looked right but it ended up wrong

Anyways good suspense and good piece of writing...👍🏼 - thanks very much


keep updating..👏👏





Originally posted by: arpita25

Hey nice update 👏 - thanks very much

Naina can do such a thing I am surprised.😲 I never thought that Naina can take such a foolish decision to escape and more to that at the place where she hardly knows anyone.😔 - well she was desperate to escape so didn't think much

She would never have been thought that she can be trapped like this. - that she didn't

First she slept and all her belongings with money were stolen and now she is at wrong place.😒 - musibaat milke aati hain

I just want Raj to come and save her no matter how much he gets angry over her later.😛 - surely the hero must come

Raj was already in bad mood and now Naina's escape has ruined the rest. - yep, lets see what happens next
Update soon dear


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Oh god, Naina escaped from there??????? 😲 😲 😲 - yeh she did

It was not to be happened.😔
😔 😔 Have she ever thought that she can be trapped like this? She was at a place where she doesn't know anyone than how can she take such a big risk? 😕 😕 😕 - she thought it was correct in the beginning

She took the whole advantage of Raj's absence being careless about her situation.😛 😛 😛 - that she did

Firstly she was missing him and now she has made full proof plan to escape as it was the best opportunity and see she used it perfectly. 😆 😆 😆 - she is two minded

I was really amazed who she didn't scare a bit.😲 😲 😲 She is doing all the dangerous stuff which she herself never imagined ever I think. 😉 😉 😉 I think for this change in to her she must thank Raj as it has happened because of his company. 😆 😆 😆 - well yeh she has developed somewhat courage by living with him for so many days

But what was the need to sleep? She slept and see all the things gone from her hands.
😔 😔 😔 Now she herself doesn't know where she should go.😕 😕 😕 She reached in a church luckily and now exploring the city by her own.😊 😊 😊 - its more adventurous

But now she is at the most unsafe place.😒
😒 😒 I just want that Raj should reach there on time to save her dignity.🤔 🤔 🤔 - yeh let's see

Raj is damn angry over her and now he has decided to punish her but I don't think he will do something of that sort. 🥺
🥺 🥺 - perhaps he wont

He is trying his best to search her now and his guards got slaps for their careless attitude.
🤔 🤔 🤔 - they were useless

The traitor has also escaped from his trap but I think soon he will be trapped as he is Raj, no one can run away that easily from him. 😉 😉 😉 - that sure is correct

Update soon and make sure Naina will be safe.
🤔 🤔 🤔

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

Oh god, how can Naina be that much foolish? 😲 How can she even think to escape from Raj and that too in a stranger country? 😲 Didn't she think it once that it can be unsafe for her? - nope she didn't as she was desperate to leave

It was nice update but after reading it all I could think was Naina's act,😛 how can she be so childish? 😲 Raj has made her safe and secure from all the evil eyes behind her and now she herself has planned to be trapped. - thanks and yeh she fails to understand that

Raj cares of her so much but I can still feel the pov of Naina that she is not free and freedom is really very essential for every human being.😉 - surely it is important for everyone

She took all the risk which she never thought.😔 She smartly did every thing but in all these happenings I liked one thing that she was missing Raj when he was not around.😉 - well yeh she has two minds she wants to run away from him but to stay with him too

Now see she has lost even her passport and now she is in trouble at the place.😒 - yes she is in big trouble

Raj is angry over that traitor and now Naina has given him a lot of reasons to be angry.🤔 I just wish her to be safe. - oh yes he sure is very angry and lets see what happens

Update jaldi karna


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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow Naina that was indeed a great step to run away at some unknown place where you don't know anything and to no one in particular😡😡😡

It is indeed a foolish decision to run away like this and go to sleep in the cab at some unknown place😡

Obviously our Don is going to act as a mad when you are running away like an idiot girl where you dont know anyone.If you are really in a hurry to go back then my dear stupid girl please wait till then when you return back to your country till them you are not allowed to move anywhere🥱😆🥱

Lets see what our Don is going to do now😕😆😆

Continue Soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit


Hi Arwa

Sorry for replying so late but got little busy.
Naina managed to escape from Raj but I think she is in a bigger mess now..



Hey Suhana it's okay.

Yes she is in big trouble




Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18


Wow Naina that was indeed a great step to run away at some unknown place where you don't know anything and to no one in particular😡😡😡 - well she was really desperate

It is indeed a foolish decision to run away like this and go to sleep in the cab at some unknown place😡 - it is indeed

Obviously our Don is going to act as a mad when you are running away like an idiot girl where you dont know anyone.If you are really in a hurry to go back then my dear stupid girl please wait till then when you return back to your country till them you are not allowed to move anywhere🥱😆🥱 - he has the right to be angry because in a way it shows he cares for her

Lets see what our Don is going to do now😕😆😆 - sure

Continue Soon😊


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Posted: 12 years ago



Part 10

Lesson taught pt1

The sex workers had already shaken her to some extent since she had never expected to end up in such a place and to top it all the least man she had ever expected to see ended up beside her. At first her heart skipped a beat as she thought that Rajveer caught her and everything was over. Yet in a way she also felt relieved that he had come to rescue her from the terrible place. Even though she didn't know who the man was, she had known him enough in the party last night to have decided that he was bad news.

Amar couldn't believe his stars that he met her again and that too all by herself. Last night he hadn't had a better view of her since there were several interferences. Right then he simply feasted his ugly and dirty eyes upon her wet tight frame which was reflected due to the rain.

Of course it made her very uncomfortable. Then again the whole area had made her uncomfortable and she simply wanted to walk away but where was she to go in that dark and strange world? However she paid less heed to the intolerable stranger and looked elsewhere as if she expected someone else.

He was once again highly dosed onto several drugs which made him more dangerous. He should have known that she was nothing less than a low class hooker which Rajveer had bought for entertainment last night. If he would have known then he would have paid double to spend the night with her instead of the enemy. She looked delicious in the wet top which made him drool over her sexiness and he simply couldn't control his manly urges. He had to have her.

If she had thought that her ignorance would have sent him away, then she was mistaken because she noticed how his car still stayed put and he stared at her as if she was a decorative piece. She hadn't even found Rajveer staring at her like that. His gaze was softer rather than the obnoxious man in front of her. It was best to move on further a few steps and perhaps then he would have got the hint so she moved ahead but she was not left alone.

"Hey where are you going?" he got out of the car and blocked her way. His eyes were red due to the intoxication which made him look more of a monster. "I'll pay you your worth." He touched her face with his greasy hand. "Only after I get a taste too."

As soon as his disgusting hand reached near her upper chest she repelled against it and moved back. The man was exactly as she had pictured and it was best she got away from him quickly. "Just leave me alone." She walked further on even though she knew there was no place to go right then.

Alas Amar wasn't a man to have accepted defeat that easily so he followed. "Come on babes, I'll give you a great time if you let me play with your assets." He grabbed her hand and forced her towards him. "Itni bhi kya berukhi hain jaaneman. I haven't even started to play yet."

She struggled immensely to get out of his despicable arms but he was stronger than her. However she didn't give up and finally burst out and pushed him back nearly had thrown him against his car. "How dare you touch me?" She slapped him.

The rebound was adverse as the beast within him was enraged. His bloodshot red eyes glared at her with a menacing look as if he was going to do something very inappropriate. Apparently that was exactly what he did. By force he carried her on his shoulder and walked off to find the nearest room within the brothel. Half of his brain was totally duped onto the cocaine and the other was just his evil character.

Unfortunately her screams and pleads went to deaf ears since the others were simply too involved to have paid attention. If they would have left their station then their customers would have ran away. Yet she continued to beat him with her hands as much as she could but he didn't let go. She kicked her legs several times and yelled but still he hadn't let go. Painful tears filled her eyes and she screamed louder with the hope that someone would have saved her from the monster.

Meanwhile since Rajveer's guards had left the suite they hadn't rested for one second. The fear of being dead by their boss's hands was far more than the fear of dropping dead due to the immense heat and rush. They all knew their duties so all were alert at any signs they found. Luckily a few were on the right track and had trailed Naina's every move but were unfortunate enough to reach at the spot once she had left.

When they reached the red light area no one thought it was the correct place. It felt very inappropriate yet they still tried their chances and asked around. It wasn't easy since the women were not very co operative and only wanted one thing but soon some of them reported how one woman was seen who matched the description but was taken away by a customer.

It wasn't what they wanted yet the guards had a duty to report whatever information they got so one of them called Rajveer and informed him about the developments.

Rajveer was already on the Italian streets, in his limo because he wanted to find her himself and teach her a lesson she would have never forgotten. As soon as he found her location he immediately told the driver to turn around and gave strict instructions to his guards to not do anything until he arrived. He just couldn't believe she left him like that and had gotten into something she wasn't even aware of.

Back at the brothel, Amar had succeeded into taking Naina inside one of the rooms despite her constant wails and hammers upon his back. Of course he wasn't going to stop then as he wanted to teach her a lesson for have had slapped him like that.

Once inside he aggressively threw her onto the bed and shut the door behind him. His perilous gaze tortured her yet it excited him further. The animal he was he just wanted her then and then regardless of anything else. For him she was nothing more than a prostitute so he had a right to devour her taste.

Obviously it had scared Naina to the core. She saw his bleary intoxicated eyes which gave chills down her spine and her whole body shuddered. Yet she wasn't going to sit around and let him have his way so she quickly ran towards the door in desperate need to escape but the merciless man pulled her by her hair tight and she squealed.

"You shouldn't have resisted me like that." He growled. "It doesn't suit your profession as you're nothing than a cheap hooker who would drop at my feet at a drop of a penny. Or Amar ko jo bhi cheez pasand aajaati hain wo ose haasil karke rehta hain." He pushed her back onto the bed.

The spring mattress hurt her immensely and more painful tears dropped as she tried to bear it. She was appalled at his thoughts and was in fear of losing her dignity if she wasn't able to escape from there quickly. Just because she was stuck in the horrible place didn't make her a prostitute.

There was no time for her to have reacted because he had forcefully jumped onto her and his whole weight pushed her further down on the mattress. She bravely wrestled with him to let her go but it wasn't strong enough and he continued with his wicked deeds.

As his dirty canine teeth dug into her skin, her screams became louder yet she couldn't move her arms because they were trapped within his. She kicked hard to push him off but he didn't yield and dug in further. It was pure torture and by then she was horrified because half of her top was torn and if it continued further then she knew it was the end and her life was over.

Just at that thought a strong arm pulled Amar off her and before she could understand what happened she found him across the stone floor of the room. Then mixed emotions filled within her when she saw her savior. At first she was thrilled and relieved that finally Rajveer had found her and she was going to be saved. But at the same moment she felt fear because she was unaware of what he was going to do with her in his anger. Of course she knew he was angry that she had escaped.

Amar was enraged but the intoxication gave him blurred vision so he was unable to see clearly to make out it was Rajveer who attacked him. Whoever it was he knew they had come with a death certificate since he wasn't going to spare him.

Although Rajveer's demeanor appeared calm, the rage was filled in his deadly eyes. Naina's disobedience was put aside for a while and he only concentrated on the disgusting creature lying in front of him. He had known Amar for a long time to know he was the kind to perform such low acts yet it was highly unacceptable when it came to things connected to him.

Then Naina's silent sobs reached his ears so he turned towards her and the rage silenced down. She lay there almost bare and he couldn't see the pain. He quickly took off his coat of his suit and offered her so she could cover up.

"Whoever you are you better leave before it's your last wish." Amar threathened, "if that rascal Rajveer can buy this wh**e then I can also take her delight."

Rajveer lost his patience at that and attacked him. "Don't you dare say a foul word about Naina you *******." He thrashed him as if he was a potato sack.

The nightmare wasn't over for her because she witnessed Rajveer's real anger. His fight with Amar was not only ugly but nasty too. She saw a lot of blood flowing out of Amar and the way Rajveer beat him nonstop really scared her. In a way she felt elated to see someone fought for her dignity but then again she couldn't accept a devilish character either. Even if she was saved from Amar she knew she wasn't going to be saved from Rajveer's wrath.

Since Amar wasn't in his senses anymore he wasn't able to fight back and eventually lost consciousness and lied on the floor.

Rajveer wasn't finished with him yet. He leaned over him, "Next time you decide to put your repulsive eyes on Naina, remember this lesson I taught you." He grabbed Amar's collar even when he was unconscious. "Sirf teri hee gandi soch ek izzat daar larki ko aisi randi bana sakta hain." His hand dropped his head onto the floor and he got up. Then he wiped Amar's blood off his hands and looked over at the meek figure in front of him.

Everything had overwhelmed Naina to such extent that she went into shock. There were shivers all over her body as she just sat there and stared at the scene. It was hard for her to digest anything so she just became a statue.

He noticed how her upper body was exposed so he walked over and covered the coat properly over her. Then he held her shoulders and stood her up. The fear in her eyes still remained which told him she was in immense shock. It was best for him to take her away from there so his comforting hand wrapped around her shoulder as he escorted her out of the hell.

All throughout the journey back to the hotel, there was a mysterious silence inside the limo. At intervals he looked over at her and saw she remained in the same state. Her hair was in a mess due to the rain but he loved how several strands stuck to her cheek. It gave her a sensuous look which made her look very attractive. Her eyes appeared wet but he saw how the shock hadn't allowed the water to flow out. That was hazardous and he had to do something to calm her down before she burst out terribly.

The wet clothes made her feel cold and the leather car seats were also uncomfortable. She felt too conscious because of her bareness. His coat felt warm and she wrapped her arms around as if it was her safety net. Yet she wasn't in a proper responding state to have realized where they went and who sat next to her.

Once their hotel arrived, he quickly ordered his guards to escort them up towards the suite without any onlookers. It was important for him to get her away from public because her shock needed peace and solitude. Of course he carefully walked her inside, with his hand around her to make sure she felt safe.

All that time the incident hadn't disappeared from her eyes so she just couldn't react. She simply stayed close to him and walked on as if she had no life left within her. Normally she would have repelled against his touch but right then she wanted to be no place else.

He understood her state. She was bound to be terrified because she was nearly raped and for a woman her dignity was the biggest thing. Then again he thought her dignity only belonged to him so how could have anyone else taken it away from him. She belonged to him and everything connected to her belonged to him too.

Everyone else remained quiet too because the situation was too intense. When they entered the suite, he ordered all the guards to leave and stand guard outside. He needed to be alone with Naina to calm her down.

The softness of the couch alerted Naina and she realized they had come back to the hotel. The one place she had tried all her best to escape and she was back there by the end of the day. She felt cold so she wrapped the coat around her again and also because she wanted to hide her torn top.

After a few seconds Rajveer appeared in front of her holding a glass of water. He looked down upon her with a lot of affection and care because even if he was cruel he wasn't that stone hearted to have not cared for a victim of a nightmare. It was true he didn't believe in the emotion called LOVE' but he was still human and not an animal. He sat down beside her. "Drink some water, you'll feel better." He offered her the glass.

Her body was already cold and the cold glass froze her fingers. She looked over at him and his affection towards her brought out tears. She had disobeyed him and she had thought he would have scolded her and locked her up but there he was taking care of her and nursing her wounds. She had disappointed him but he sat there calmly. It sure felt commendable and her opinions had begun to change towards him. Perhaps he looked tough from the outside but had a softer side hidden inside somewhere.

It wasn't planned but her heart instructed her mind to have taken the step and she instantly burst into his arms. Her eyes finally had released the trapped waterfall and it flew non stop. "I'm really sorry that I ran away like that." She cried out loud and held him tight.

Her closeness created magic which left him stunned. There had been times when he had gone closer to her but that time it felt different. It felt as if she was rightfully his and his arms wrapped around her securely. "Sssh...it's okay. You're safe now." He comforted her by rubbing her back. All his anger had died down because he felt very sorry for what happened to her. It was true her defiance had led to it but right then he knew she needed him so he was there.

Not only was she afraid of what had happened with her. She was also afraid of what Rajveer was going to do with her so she thought of apologizing before anything drastic happened. Yet when she remained in his arms she got a known feeling as if it was her rightful place. His male scent from his shirt alerted her senses and she wanted to remain there forever. She didn't care whether her bare skin touched against him or whether she made him wet too. She just knew she loved his soft structure and wanted to mold within it.

However a gush of wind passed against them which brought Naina back to reality. She realized what she had just done and felt ashamed. It wasn't something her ego would have allowed because she had nearly just acquainted with the enemy. She had to hate the insufferable man in front of her but her heart wasn't ready for it anymore. He had saved her life and she had to be grateful for that. No matter what he had done to her, he still had done a noble deed that night.

He noticed the stiffness within her which showed him she was uncomfortable. It was true he had kidnapped her which was an evil deed yet he hadn't forced himself on her and he never would. At least in that he could have been called a gentleman. He had challenged her that she would come to her by her will and he saw the initial stages of it. He was going to wait for his victory for sure. After all she still remained like a trophy which he wanted to earn with full respect. He moved back to give her less uneasiness.

The opinions had definitely begun to change about him yet she wasn't aware whether it was wise to truly believe he had a heart. If he had then he wouldn't have trapped her like that still, instead he would have let her go. "I'm really tired." Her voice was near to a whisper.

"Here let me walk you to your room." He attempted to get up but she stopped him immediately.

"I'm fine, I'll go by myself." Without another glance back at him she walked away to her room and shut the door behind. She leaned against the engraved brown door and fell to the floor and cried out again. She was trapped from all corners and she just couldn't trust anybody. Everyone had something attached to them and her position was such that she couldn't live with him and she couldn't live without him either.

Rajveer heard her sobs behind the door but he just couldn't bow down and comfort her anymore. She had made a mistake and she had to repent it. He left for his room as she knew she would be fine by next morning. It was only then he was going to teach her the lesson which was left undone.

Later at night

The spring mattress scorched her back and she struggled to get off it yet a heavy weight prevented her to even move. Loud growls and shrills were heard but the vision was blurry. It tortured her and she wanted to move but it wasn't easy as if she was under some stone. The weight became heavier and soon she felt as if her whole body had become numb. There was no escape and it hurt immensely. She yelled out for help but nothing happened and the pain became stronger.

The visions disturbed her and she wanted to run away. Why wasn't the weight taken off her? She tried all her might but nothing happened and she felt as if an animal bit into her several times. Was it an attack from a wild animal? Someone had to save her from the monstrosity but it felt as if there was no aid and it was the end of her life.

Just then she woke up with cold sweat. Her heart beats were out of order and she just couldn't control her anxiety anymore. It felt as if the hotel room enclosed upon her and she was going to be buried into a cocoon. She couldn't breathe.

With haste she rushed towards the door and ran out in the hall to get some air. It was dark everywhere so she felt more trapped. It didn't help at all. She didn't know what to do. The only piece of light she saw came out from under a room door but her heart skipped a beat. She knew it was HIS room and it was like stepping into the lion's den itself and getting herself killed. But right then she felt as if she needed his safety net again so with courage she entered his room without knocking.

A folder blocked Rajveer's view so he hadn't paid attention at first but when he heard the door shut he looked away from it and saw something unexpected. He had always pictured her in his room but not in that fearful state. He saw her teary eyes and the way her body shuddered told him something was wrong once again. He noticed how she had worn the night gown he had chosen for her which gave him the pleasure of seeing her in it. Perhaps she had begun to accept him slowly due to which she had entered his room at that hour. Whatever it was he was simply glad.

"Sorry to disturb you but I'm afraid in my room. Can I please sleep here tonight?" She asked innocently as if she requested for some candy from a shop keeper. In every way she knew it was wrong but right then she needed his support. "The nightmare is not leaving me." She tried all her ways to have had convinced him.

Inside he jumped around as he got what he always wanted. She had come to his room with her own will and wanted his comfort. Gradually she was going to come closer to him and give him everything he had imagined with her. "Of course you can sleep here." He moved the cream covers and stepped down from the king sized bed.

There was hesitance but she took the step towards the other side of the bed and sat down slowly. The richness of the mattress and the soft cotton sheet and covers simply made her fall in love with it. If it felt so good then how would it have felt sleeping on it? She tucked herself inside the covers and laid her head upon the cloud like pillow and she surely felt as if she was in heaven. It was next to royalty.

All of her moves were observed by him and he had sensed she had appreciated the comfort. It was the first step towards him and he knew it wasn't far before she willingly would have him beside her too on a bed similar to that. With that thought he took one pillow with the intention of sleeping on the large couch nearby.

It irked her that she had to accept how much she needed him to be close by, but she requested anyhow. "If you don't mind please can you remain beside me, I'm really scared."

Her pleads, appeared sweet to him even though he hadn't felt like that about anyone till date. He couldn't believe that his wish was going to be fulfilled that soon. He sat onto the bed and moved in beside her just like she wanted. More like just how he wanted. "Don't worry; I'm here so go to sleep without any fear."

The comforts of his words and the mattress were enough to help her forget all that had happened. His sweet essence mixed in the covers relaxed her and she soon fell into deep slumber.

For some time Rajveer remained in the same position because he simply couldn't get his eyes off her beautiful sleeping face. The way she had left a few strands upon her cheek once again, curled up his stomach and he had the urge to kiss her rosy cheeks. Yet he was afraid that if she woke up then she would go away from him again. He couldn't let that happen when the chance had walked towards him. He wondered whether he had done the right thing by have had kidnapped her but then again he knew he had to have everything he desired. He had the power so he was going to use it to his benefit. He couldn't let her go anymore.

Furthermore he sat with his back leaned against the headboard and sometimes he stared out in space and sometimes he looked back at her. Each time he concentrated on different parts of her face. Her pinkish lips twitched here and then which aroused him terribly and he wanted to kiss them in the same position. He wanted her to bite his lips with her teeth the way she bit her's. As it was she still owed him the kiss he had won in the fencing challenge. Of course he had the power to have it whenever he wanted but he wanted it with her will because it was too much for his ego to accept his defeat. Her eyes were shut but he still could imagine that look she had given to him when she had entered the room. For a few seconds he had noticed a dark passion hidden within them and if she had wanted she could have dropped all the barriers right then.

Anyhow she was there beside him just like his possession, which he could stare at for eons and not get tired. He stared away again and that time he noticed the painting hung opposite. It was colourful and the single gondola flowed with a romantic couple snuggled into each other. Although he didn't know the meaning of love he still felt good looking at it and then he looked back at Naina.

A vision formed in front of him which he created by his own interpretation. He imagined himself on the same Italian canals as in the painting and instead of the couple he saw himself and Naina lost in each other.


To be continued...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Naina does long for Rajveer to come and rescue her even though that would mean getting caught again!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Oh God!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲Of all the people Amar had to land up there and good that Naina knows that he is bad news!!!!

Amar is really sick and thinks that Naina is a prostitute!!!!!!🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢

It is good to see that Naina had noticed that Rajveer's gaze was softer than Amar and he never looked at her like that!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina tried to move away from Amar but he is not one to let her go!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

I loved it when Naina slapped him but she should have tried to make a run for it after that!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Poor Naina!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Amar tried to rape her and it was torture for her and she felt like her life was over!!!!

Amar is worse than an animal and I just want to kill him!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

How I wish that Rajveer would come like her knight in shinning armour and rescue her!!!!!

Good that Rajveer's guards had tracked Naina to the red light area and they had reported to Rajveer about this!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

What does Rajveer want to do to Naina when he finds her??😕 😕 😕 😕Force himself on her??🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

I loved it when Rajveer came like Naina's knight in shinning armour like always and dragged Amar off her!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Kya timely entry maari and Naina was so happy and relieved to see him!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Rajveer showed Amar his place and I loved it when he beat Amar nonstop!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

It was good that Naina realized that Rajveer was fighting for her and her dignity!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Good to see that he didn't lose his cool on Naina who was already in shock!!!!

I don't know why Rajveer left Amar alive!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

He should have killed Amar for trying to rape his Naina!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Naina must be looking a mess but Rajveer finds her attractive even in that state!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Rajveer truly loves her!!!!❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

I loved the way Rajveer look care of her as she really needed him at that time!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Poor Naina is back to square one but then she should never have tried to escape with such a harebrained plan as this!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

It was good to see Rajveer take care of her as she really needed his support!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

I loved it when Naina hugged him and cried in his arms!!!!🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

She really need to let it out and it is good to see she felt it was her rightful place as it really is!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Rajveer was only to happy to have her in his arms!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

I guess Naina has now realized that it is Rajveer's goodness that he has not touched her till date without her permission!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

So Naina can't live with him and can't live without him either!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Poor Naina is crying so much but even then Rajveer is planning to teach her a lesson!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Naina is having nightmares and she couldn't sleep properly!!!!

Naina asked Rajveer if she could sleep in his room, if only she knew ke Rajveer ke mann mein toh ladoo phoot rahe hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

He is happy to see Naina in the nightgown he had chosen for her but then Naina's wardrobe is of his choice!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

She wears the dresses he has given her and so how is the nightgown any different??😕 😕 😕 😕

It was terrible to see her in this condition and she really needed Rajveer's security!!!!

Rajveer is truly a gentleman and was going to sleep on the couch leaving his bed to Naina!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

He was overjoyed when Naina asked him to remain beside her and he is always there for her!!!!

Rajveer enjoyed watching Naina sleep and controlled himself with difficulty!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Good that at least he wondered if he had done the right thing but he has to have Naina!!!! 😳 😳 😳 😳

Now Rajveer is imagining himself and Naina in a gondola and it is so romantic!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊



Edited by Shaina_b - 10 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Everytime i have to say this 😆😆 welcome back to DON 🤗 Long time no see 😆😆😆😆 😆 Just kidding 😛😛

On a serious note, wonderful UD as always 👏👏⭐️ & Thank god like always Rajveer had been Naina's knight in shining armor 😳😳... He might be mean himself but he will never let any1 else harm her 😛😛...Rajveer's anger was scary ... good to see he didn't loose his cool on poor girl ...already she was so in shock ...

Naina asking if she cud sleep in his room 😛😛 Only if she knew, he is more than happy to help 😳😆

Hope he drops the idea of teaching her a lesson😕😕...it seems little scary how exactly he is planning to do that 🤔...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Yeahh u finally updtd ... Gr8 updt ... So now naina is kinda trusting him ... Updt sooon super sooon plezzz ...eagerly waitinggg ...don't make is wait more plezzz
N thnx fo pm

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