Don (RN) Pt12 'Realisation pt2' pg35

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hinal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

Waiting to know who is don's advocate

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Suhana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Hi Arwa

Sorry for replying so late but got little busy.

Naina managed to escape from Raj but I think she is in a bigger mess now..

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InkyCupid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Wow awesome part, loved the description of Rajveer's room.

Naina ran away and Raj was sooo mad.

Poor Naina she felt trapped while Raj thinks he gave her the world. You left us at a cliff-hanger, so please do continue soon:)

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bakula_gandhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

very interesting

Naina has managed to escape much to Raj's furry. Waiting to know who is the devil's advocate

continue soon

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tehzeeb25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Wow I just thought wen will u updt last night n today saw ur pm... gr8 updt ...she escaped but still trapped ...ohh now wat will rajveer do...updt ssooon super sooon pležzzz eagerly waitinggg ...pležzzz don't keep us waitingggvele looong pležzzz n thnxxx for pm

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Oh god, Naina escaped from there??????? 😲 😲 😲
It was not to be happened.😔 😔 😔 Have she ever thought that she can be trapped like this? She was at a place where she doesn't know anyone than how can she take such a big risk? 😕 😕 😕
She took the whole advantage of Raj's absence being careless about her situation.😛 😛 😛
Firstly she was missing him and now she has made full proof plan to escape as it was the best opportunity and see she used it perfectly. 😆 😆 😆
I was really amazed who she didn't scare a bit.😲 😲 😲 She is doing all the dangerous stuff which she herself never imagined ever I think. 😉 😉 😉 I think for this change in to her she must thank Raj as it has happened because of his company. 😆 😆 😆
But what was the need to sleep? She slept and see all the things gone from her hands.😔 😔 😔 Now she herself doesn't know where she should go.😕 😕 😕 She reached in a church luckily and now exploring the city by her own.😊 😊 😊
But now she is at the most unsafe place.😒 😒 😒 I just want that Raj should reach there on time to save her dignity.🤔 🤔 🤔 Raj is damn angry over her and now he has decided to punish her but I don't think he will do something of that sort. 🥺 🥺 🥺
He is trying his best to search her now and his guards got slaps for their careless attitude. 🤔 🤔 🤔 The traitor has also escaped from his trap but I think soon he will be trapped as he is Raj, no one can run away that easily from him. 😉 😉 😉
Update soon and make sure Naina will be safe.🤔 🤔 🤔

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desaiprachi07

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Oh god, how can Naina be that much foolish? 😲 How can she even think to escape from Raj and that too in a stranger country? 😲 Didn't she think it once that it can be unsafe for her? It was nice update but after reading it all I could think was Naina's act,😛 how can she be so childish? 😲 Raj has made her safe and secure from all the evil eyes behind her and now she herself has planned to be trapped. Raj cares of her so much but I can still feel the pov of Naina that she is not free and freedom is really very essential for every human being.😉 She took all the risk which she never thought.😔 She smartly did every thing but in all these happenings I liked one thing that she was missing Raj when he was not around.😉 Now see she has lost even her passport and now she is in trouble at the place.😒 Raj is angry over that traitor and now Naina has given him a lot of reasons to be angry.🤔 I just wish her to be safe.
Update jaldi karna

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Nivedita Basu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

wow, the story has taken an intresting turn..👏

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871474

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Posted: 12 years ago

#169

Yet the decision was not so wrong but it has become foolish one.. Anyways good suspense and good piece of writing...👍🏼

keep updating..👏👏

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arpita25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#170

Hey nice update 👏
Naina can do such a thing I am surprised.😲 I never thought that Naina can take such a foolish decision to escape and more to that at the place where she hardly knows anyone.😔 She would never have been thought that she can be trapped like this. First she slept and all her belongings with money were stolen and now she is at wrong place.😒 I just want Raj to come and save her no matter how much he gets angry over her later.😛 Raj was already in bad mood and now Naina's escape has ruined the rest. Update soon dear

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