The 'Captured' Life#2-Last part Updated-Pg 146

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Reshu

@mayapari

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#261

awesome s the smallest word dear...

speechless...

wow... wat a party n wat a thot😊

yu deserve this👏👏🤗❤️🤗🤗waiting for the next part update soon...yippe me first

Edited by mayapari - 14 years ago

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Zohamaaneet

@Zohamaaneet

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#262

thanx for updating yaar
ill give comment after reading it k

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Zohamaaneet

@Zohamaaneet

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#263

wow so new year has arrived that good
and now its seems like this year will bring more happiness to them
thanx yaar

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#264

Dev looked at her and smiled,so that we all get into the mood of the party , a

feeling of organizing a party ,everyone is busy in organizing

and decorating things ,they are getting into the mood of the party by doing

such silly things. Getting more comfortable with each other

It's a New-Year party and I don't want it to be formal ,the more informal we be

while decorating and enjoying it ,the more informal and fun would be there ,he winked.

i loved dese words a lot... i em in love with ur writings..

dere was no awkwardness after deir kiss.. i luvd dat too...

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nagajyothi

@_Jyothi_

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#265

omg... its mind blowing update...
loved it to the core...
she was a bit hairan and a bit pareshan.
loved this sentence... lol...
hayeee mera dev... he is awesome...
the way he explained to pinky was great...
finally awesome wonderful superb beautiful.. update.. huh!!!
continue soon... 😆 aur ek update jaldi se... 😳 or else 😡
thanks 4 the pm

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Anupama

@anupm04

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#266

Wow awesome

loved it it

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#267

awsem just love it

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JanakiSatish

@JanakiSatish

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#268

PART 30

Vow...namu that was great start for the new year. maan and geet kissed and finally the new feeling sinking into each of them at the right moment.
dev is a challooo. he knows that something is cooking between these two and is just giving aag to the situation.
pinky is confused...wait ...there is still more..pinky...
vow new year in maan's arms ..what better gift for geet. she has come a long way to understand and make her mind...thanx to maan.. and maan what more of a gift on new year's day.awesome