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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 13 years ago

#241

Lovely...dreamy update...at last they both kissed each other...without hesitation...they are one now...dance sequence is amazing...

update soon...

Thanks for pm...

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seemamary

@seemamary

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Posted: 13 years ago

#242

Very passionate update, want more.

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-Crayon-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: billy_ritu
oh teri yeh kya tha
jo bhi tha mast tha

haha..yeh toh bada rapchik comment tha 😆😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: Vidushi89
Dont tell me they kissed...!!
OMG you made them kiss...!? Am i dreaming !???
hayye...pinch me me please.
Finally, kuch toh hua hai...kuch ho gaya hai.
Lovely part.

Thanks for the pm.

Yeah they kissed..finally .unki gaadi chal padi 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: SONU_29
dreamy update

maaneet kiss each other

loved song

Thank you dear 😃

Aaah..I love these emoctions 😍

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Posted: 13 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: -maankimishti-
awesome update
aww they kissed but i feel like it will be dream
continue soon

😆😆 why are ppl thinking that it's a dream...bichare maaneet they just kissed yaar😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: Kriyanshlover
Sabke samane dance floor phe thdy are kissing each other ARE YOU SERIOUS?

dear...they were on the terrace and I wrote it 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: niticool
im speechlesss
👏

beautiful update

for the first time i have read each and every word of a song sequence

keep doing the good work dear

thanks for d pm

Awww...thanks a lot dear 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

I know making ppl laugh is difficult...but on IF with all those ROFL emoctions🤣
things become more easy 😆
haila di...critics kab se bad ppl ho gaye??😆
Aap ne toh mujhe sudhaarne ki koshish ki...us comment se ,woh suhaana din mai kabhi ahi bhool sakti
(over dramatic lines ka jawaab nautanki ke saath😉)
huh!!! over paint 😲
but you'll not be able to do any such thing...I'll cover my wall with a plaSHtic sheet 😎

now how did i miss replying to this...🤔..

here it goes...😃

yes IF has made a lot of things easier...especially with these emo..😆

critics to write ke POV se bad hai naa...😉

haaye kya din the...😍...drama without nautanki to possible hi nahi hai..

yes over pain...😃..plastic sheets can also be removed...😎..

Haaye sach me woh kya din the!! 😍

ek saal pehle woh suhaane din ,I hope world doesn't end this year 😆

if so pls let me know I have to fulfil my wishes myself only without waiting for some Maan 🤓

kam se kam you are not like Mayank Sekhar...the filmi critic of Hindustan Times...his review cracks me up ...he never gives more than 2 or 1 and half stars for films 🤣🤣

bechaare directors.😆

Awww...this emo is soo cute

Now a days I see a lot like these here...ther are choo cute!!

Hmmm...about the plastic sheets well then I'll paint you with my 10 saal puraani oil paints 😈