Wish Upon A Star - ArSh FF (P16, pg 58)

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roshni_A

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

unusual...interesting...really liking it...hope that girl would not be shilpa...continue soon...

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Anu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: roshni_A
unusual...interesting...really liking it...hope that girl would not be shilpa...continue soon...

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. I'm glad you liked it. 😳 It was Shilpa who was knocked down. How badly she got hurt will be revealed in the next part, which should be up within some days.

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Tanja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

it was lovely...the way u expressed every thing was just so beautifull..cant wait to read the next part :D

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Tanja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

the second part was also amazing.. !

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Anu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Aww Tani, darling, thanks so much!!!! I'm glad you had a chance to read it. It's so good to know you liked it. Your comment really made my day. Thanks for reading it hun. 🤗

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fri42911

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

awesome part!!!!!

ARSH had quite similar tragic past.

Shilpa had lost her parents and arman lost love of his life.

i hope shilpa'll be fine.

please continue soon.

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kashmayurfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Nice part!luved it! Hope shilpa is alright! Do cont.soon..thanxx for the PM

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Sammy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

amazing ff dear...loved the way you describe their feelings...do continue soon..do pm me plz

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ayaan Gill

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Nice ff,,

Add me to ur pm list,,

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Anu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: fri42911
awesome part!!!!!
ARSH had quite similar tragic past.

Shilpa had lost her parents and arman lost love of his life.

i hope shilpa'll be fine.

please continue soon.

Thank you!! Glad you thought it was good. Yup, I decided to use that as my basic framework, though I altered a few things here and there and I guess their character traits are a lil different too, but I always thought there was much potential with the ArSh background and I thought it would be fun to use it as a template. 😳
The next update should (hopefully) be tomorrow. Will PM you as soon as it's up. 😳