Wish Upon A Star - ArSh FF (P16, pg 58)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Anu

@DulceAmor

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: kashmayurfan
Awesome part! Aww armaan cried for her!that's really sweet! Hope shilpa gets well soon:) do cont.soon

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it and found Armaan crying sweet. 😳 That was a bit of a spur of the moment decision, I was just hoping it would add more depth to his concern for her and show how he feels a connection to her.

Quote

Anu

@DulceAmor

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: twilightmystery
aww!! without realising these two souls have come close
i think the voice in the last is of shilpa's uncle?

i wonder wat they'll do with them

i hope armaan saves her afterall he is her guardian angel

wonderful part

loved it

continue soon

I love your first line - you have summed up everything I was trying to show so beautifully. 😳 Ahh, well, I can't say if it's her uncle or not just yet, but we will indeed meet her relatives in the next update and Armaan will see for himself their attitude towards Shilpa. Thanks so much for your lovely comment. I hope you'll enjoy the next part just as much. 😳

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Anu

@DulceAmor

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: luv_kash
such a lovely update
shilpa's relatives r so mean...hope they dont create more problems for her...
loved the way u described armaan's concern n emotions...unknowingly he has come so close to her...
waiting for more arsh moments.
thnx for d pm...cont soon

You're most welcome. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I am thrilled you liked it and felt I described Armaan's emotions well. I wanted to show how affected by Shilpa's accident he was, even if he can't understand why he is feeling this way. You'll get to see her relatives in the next update, and I promise to have an ArSh moment soon. I couldn't have one here because it was getting too long, but Shona has regained consciousness now and soon I will show her reaction to all that has happened.

Quote

Anu

@DulceAmor

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Sam_KaShian
hey!!!!!!
amazing update!!!loved it!
oh i hope shilpa gets alr8 real soon!ammy is such a sweetheart :D
oh ho!who is the last entry?!mm...update soon as i am very excited to read the next part :)
and thnx 4 d pm!

Thank you so much!!! It's so good to know you enjoyed this part! Ahh, I was hoping you all would find Armaan's reaction sweet. I always imagine him as the most loving of guys and I wanted to show how big a heart he has here. 😳 Ahh, the person who spoke at the end will be made clear in the next update, and I do hope you will continue to enjoy everything that is to come.

Quote

anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

hi dear...

just came across ur ff...

n im simply loving it..

superb n amazing..

n u wrote it beautifully..

continue soon,...

n do add me to ur pm list...

Quote

Anu

@DulceAmor

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat
hi dear...
just came across ur ff...
n im simply loving it..
superb n amazing..
n u wrote it beautifully..
continue soon,...
n do add me to ur pm list...

Hey thank you so much for taking the time to read my ff and for leaving this comment. It's wonderful to hear that you have liked the ff so far. I'm humbled you think my writing was beautiful - that is such a lovely compliment! 😳 I will surely add you to the PM list.

Quote

Sammy

@sammy4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

beautiful update dear

sapna was so right..armaan is now close to her...loved the desription of armaan's feelings.

loved it

Quote

Anu

@DulceAmor

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: sweet_shilpa

Awsum update,,,

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. 😳

Quote

Anu

@DulceAmor

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: sammy4u
beautiful update dear
sapna was so right..armaan is now close to her...loved the desription of armaan's feelings.

loved it

Thanks hun! I'm delighted you liked Armaan's concern for Shona. Yes, totally, he has connected to her on some level and I hope to show more of that in the next updates. 😳

Quote

Anu

@DulceAmor

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: ATTITUDEBABY
nyc concept...cont soon

Hey, thanks for stopping by and reading my ff! I'm really pleased you liked the concept. Next update should happen before the weekend. Let me know if you want added to the PM list. 😳