OS: It was that moment

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Maria

@JRia

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

it's so perfect 👏👍🏼

hope this had been incorporated in the serial

it would hae been so nice and dreamy and also perfect

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-memorable-

@-memorable-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

wow

one moment that changes life

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WordStalker

@WordStalker

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Wow! How refreshing (and painful) to read something from Lavanya's POV! Glad she finds her soul mate in the end. She deserves to be happy, too!

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Jina

@Happy-go-lucky

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Really, beautifully written... You described the emotions so well😊

Edited by Happy-go-lucky - 13 years ago

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sanyukta90

@sanyukta90

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Hi Lyraa,
Lavanya's feelings were so poignantly expressed in your OS.Each sentence was full of emotions. It was brilliant.Loved the happy ending👏👏👏

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

In all the FFs and SSs and OSs that i have read i had never come across any written from Lavanya's prospective, the girl who had been vengeful and spiteful and yet who had changed so drastically and become the sweet friend of her Chamkili, who had seen and understood their love even when they themselves hadn't done so.

I really liked reading something from her perspective. Liked the way u have put her thoughts out without even naming her.

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UV_Arshi

@UV_Arshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

wow..that was quite something..so moving. Thinking of it this way from Lavanya's point of view..such a brilliant thought. And so well executed! the writing is beautiful! emotions so well portrayed...my fav lines, 'it was that moment' & 'watching my dream through the eyes of a spectator'..wow..perfect! This for me is the best OS of your's that i've read so far..and they're all pretty good! 👏