OS: It was that moment

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spuARHI

@spuARHI

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

this is just absolutely brilliant!

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Amrita_12

@Amrita_12

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

wow! so beautifully written! totally loved it.

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saradha

@laxmisarada

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

poor lav ! but iam happy at last she found her soul mate !! thank u so..much for sharing !! well written - emotionally ! 👏👏👏👏

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Raizaada312

@Raizaada312

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Loved it. Really its the first time I've felt that another soft side of Lavanya can be depicted. Really brilliant concept.

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Alia

@.A.l.i.a.

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

It's more that one years old, but it's awesome ..

I really love how you described Lavanya emotions , and how you ended this awesome OS with a hope for her 👏

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NainaAlex

@NainaAlex

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

wow lavanya's POV...the emotions never seen before

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ara_000

@ara_000

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

luvd d OS...!
U have potrayed each nd evry emotions so dam perfctly...i jst luv d line -
''I stood there watching my dream from the eyes of a spectator..''
truly suprb...!

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DushtKanya

@DushtKanya

Alumni

+ 11

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

That was perfect <3 <3 Bookmarked! Beautiful!

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sskang

@sskang

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Loved this OS... Just read it today for the first time. Lavanya... I felt so sorry for her... but there was someone special waiting for her just around the corner literally.

BTW did you ever write a sequel to this OS. Would love to have known how Lavanya fared in life.

If not would you consider it ...???