***KHUSHBOO KI ZUBAN***LAST PARTpg-31 9/5 - Page 14

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Posted: 19 years ago
Mindblowing part!! I love your fan-fic!! Continuee really really really really soon!! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey lovely part ana... 👏 👏
plz cont soon.... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 15
kashish apni yaadon say bahir nikli...................tau dekha sham honay ko thi........................likin sujal abhi tak ghar nahin aya tha......................aj bachay bhi apni dado k saath saath ghar nahin thay....................veena aunty unhain apni behen k ghar lay kar out of city gai howin theen...........................kashish ka dil nahin lag raha tha..................khirki(window) say bahir dekhna shuru kia tau kiye panchi apni manziloon ki taraf ja rahay thay.......................kashish bhi unh ko dekhnay main magan ho gaye............doobta howa suraj..............uper say agay panchiyon k nazaray ko dekh kar usay bohut sakoon mil raha tha.................itnay main kissi nay us ki kamar ko apnay bazoon k gheeray main lay liya............
"sujal"................kashish nay baghir peechay muray kaha
"aray tumhain kaisay patah.........................main tau itna arram araam say chori chori ghar main enter howa tha...............phir tumhain kaisay patah k main hi hoon..................................koi choor bhi tau ho sakta hai na".........sujal nay shararat say kaha
"tau tum ho na chor"...........kashish nay kaha tau suajl nay apni aik eyebrow uper kar k usay ghoora........"meray dil k".........kashish nay yeh kehtay howay usay hug kia........
"mujhay tumhain jananay k liye kissi bhi cheez ki zaroorat nahin..................tumharay honay aa ehsaas mujhay yeh hawain pehlay hi karwa deti hain".....................kashish nay hug ki position main hi kaha
"accha..........mujhay lagta hai k tum ghar main bohut borr ho rahi ho gi.........tau chalo kahain bahir chaltay hain"sujal nay alag hotay howay kaha
"likin kahan".............kashish nay poocha tau sujal muskura dia......................"its a surprise"
"accha........chalo woh au theek hai...............likin..................mera dress select.........."..............sujal samjh gaya or kashish ki closet ki taraf bhara............
"madam.........abh app bhi apni jagha sambhaliye"............sujal nay peechay murr k muskuratay howay kaha tau kashish bhi us ki closet ki taraf barhi................(actually................peechlay 9 months say yehi ho raha tha...........sujal kashish ka dress select karta or kashish sujal ka..........is tarahan donon aik doosray ki khushi ka khayal rakhtay)
"tum yeh pehno gi"..........sujal nay aik bohut bhari kaam wali red colour ki sari nikali
"likin sujal.........yeh itna bhari hai"........................kashish nay what is happen to u? look k saath kaha
"kia tum nahin pehno gi"..................sujal nay childish andaaz main kaha tau kashish hans di
"accha baba..........theek hai.........abh khush"..................kashish nay muskuratay howay kaha
"nahin"..............sujal nay jawab diya
"woh kyoun"............
"woh iss liye.............k main nay tumharay kapray tau select kar liye.............likin main kia aisay hi jaoon ga..............meray kapray bhi select karoo na"......................sujal nay kaha tau kashish nay apnay sir pay haath rakh liya
"oh............main bhool gaye..............sorry.............abhi karti hoon"................kashish nay sujal ka kapray select kiye or phir donon nay change kia
kashish sheeshay k samnay tayar ho rahi thi k sujal nay peechay say aa k us k galay main apni bahain dalian
"aj tum bohut khoobsurat lag rahi hoo"..............sujal nay pyar say us k cheek pay aik kiss diya
"tum bhi bohut handsome lag rahay ho"......................kashish nay sujal ko sheeshay main dekhtay howay kaha
"khali khali hi"...............sujal nay kaha tau kahish confused ho gaye
"kia matlab khali khali"............kashish nay poocha
"nahin kuch nahin........................sujal nay disappointingly doosri taraf rukh pheer liya
akashish ko samjh aa gay or woh chupkay say uthi or jaldi say sujal ko cheek pay aik kiss kia..............or bhagnay hi lagi thi k sujal usau haath say pakar liya
"sujal.............haath choro"...........kashish nay kaha tau sujal nay usay apni taraf kheencha or kashish sujal ki baghoon main thi
"itni jaldi hai kia".............sujal nay poocha tau kashish gets shy
"aye haye..........tumhari inhin baatoon pay tau mujhay or pyar atta hai"........sujal nay kaha tau kashish gets blused likin us nay khud ko control main rakhnay k liye kaha
"app kahin bhool tau nahin rahay.............humain bahir jana tha..............mujhay jaldi say surprise dekhna hai"
"oops main tau bhool hi gaya tha....................kabhi kabhi main sochta hoon k tum na hoti tau kia hota"
"abh chalian"......kashish nay poocha or janay k liye agay barhi likin sujal nay usay zoor say pakar rakha tha
"aik min".................sujal nay usay doosray chek pay bhi kiss diya or phir dono chal diye

surprise kia hai
wait karoo

lol
ana
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Posted: 19 years ago
Great Part!!!
CONTINUE SOOOOOO SOONNNN!!!! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
wowwww ana its surperb awesome and marvelous and soooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhh romantic 😉 😉 😳 😳 😉 😉
plzzzz send the next part as soon as possible
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey ana gr8 part indeed... 👏 👏
plz cont soon... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
ana just zabardast.. 👏
tooo good..... 😃 😛 😊
ana main suprise ka wait kar rahi hoon.. plz jaldi likhna.... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
sorry 4 delay

Part 16

sujal or kashish aik lambi drive pay thay
"sujal.................... hum kahan ja rahay hain"...........kashish nay akhir tang aa k kaha
"kaha tha na surprise hai..............yaar tum auratoon ko bhi na chain nahin hain...........thori deer wait karoo sab patah chal jaye ga".............sujal nay usay kaha............woh samnay dekhtay howay drive kiye gaya
"par".............kashish boli tau sujal nay usay took diya
"par war kuch nahin..............tum chup kar k bethi raho"....................sujal nay driving pay consentrate kartay howay kaha
adha ghanta guzar gaya or koi kuch na bola...................akhir sujal nay taang aa k kaha
"tum kuch keh kyoun nahin rahi"..........
"app hi nay tau chup karnay k liye kaha tha"................kashish nay moun(face) phula k kaha tau sujal ko hansi aa gaye
"accha baba...............tum bolo jee bhar k bolo..............likin surprise k baray main kuch nahin .............accha".........sujal nay iss khamoshi k kaher ko tortay howay kaha
"hmmmmmmm"....................."can i play the songs?" kashish nay sujal say poochna sahi samjha
"yeh bhi koi poochnay ki baat hai".........................kashish nay radio on kia tau us pay RJ Prem tha..........
R.J.Prem"so guys...............aj jaisa k app jantay hain k aj ka topic hai...............love birds.................tau aj kay saray songs hum nay issi tarhan say arrange kiye hain
pyaar say pehlay kia hota hai.....................haan haan haan...............u r write.............jab koi kissi k khayaloon main aanay lagta hai..............so here is the 1st song

and he play the song

"meray khawaboon main jo aaye
aa k mujhay cheer jaye
us say kaho kabhi samnay tau aaye"

after the end of this song..............the RJ prem again start talking

likin kuch loog aisa nahin bhi kartay ............................unh k liye

"pyar main so uljhanain hain
pyar maat karna
apnay dil ko pyaar say
bezar maat karna

chahat ki baatoon main
samjho tau baas dhoka hai
yeh baatain sunanay say
apnay dil ko hum nay tau roka hai"

"phir aik din app k khwab sachay ho jatay hain..................or jinhain pyaar nahin bhi karna hota................woh kissi aisay say miltay hain k dua kartay hain.............

"tera dil bhi jana bekaraar ho jaye
raab karay tujh ko bhi pyaar ho jaye"

"apni sari zindagi woh phir us hi k naam kar deta hai"

"tera naam
hum nay kia hai
jeevan apna saara sanam

pyar bohut kartay hain tum ko
ishq hai tu hamara sanam"

likin jab dono amnay samnay attay hain tau larki ka khayal kia hota hai suniye

"jab samnay tum aa jatay ho
kia janiye kia ho jata hai

kuch mill jata hai...........kuch kho jata hai
kia janaiye kia ho jata hai"

or larka usay dekh k kia sochta hai

"chupkay chupkay
sakiyon say woh
baatain karna bhool gaye

mujh ko dekh
panghat pay tau
pani bharna bhool gaye"

likin akhir dil k haaton majboor ho k woh yeh keh hi bethtay hain

"kab tak chup baithay abh tau kuch hai bolna
kuch tum bolo kuch hum bolain oh dhoolna
marjana tha yeh bhaid nahin tha kholna
oh dholna..................hay dhoolna"

so guys abhi k liye itn hi......................phir kal baat ho gi same time om FM 106.2

sujal or kashish nay yeh saray songs khamoshi say sunay or last song pay unhain apni woh mulaqat yaad aa gaye k jab sujal kashish ko lenay us k ghar gaya tha or apnay pyar ka izhaar kia tha

kashish abhi apni inhin yaadon main khoye thi k aik zorr dar break say woh haqeeqat ki duniya main aa gaye

"kia howa".............kashish nay ghabratay howay poocha
"madam .............app pohanch gaye hain....................tum kahan khoye thi".........................sujal nay us say poocha
"kahin nahin".............phir idher udher dekh k poocha............."yeh kaun si jagha hai...................hum pehlay tau yahan kabhi nahin aaye"
"tum ander tau chalo....................phir batata hoon........................likin its a surprise na.....................tu tum apni ankhain band kar lo".................sujal nay usay jhat say kaha
"likin".................kashish kuch kehnay hi wali hi k sujal nay usay rook diya.............
"abhi kuch nahin…………..chalo apni ankhain band karoo"……….at this kashishh closed her eyes
"tum cheating maat karna………ok sujal nay usay samjhatay howay kaha or uska haath pakar k usay ander lay gaya
ander bohut andhera tha ………………..or aik ghari ki awaz aa rahi thi ko 12 bajnay ka signal day rahi thi
"abh tum apni ankhain khol sakti hoo"…………..sujal yeh kehtay hi peechay haat gaya or kashish nay apni ankhain kholain likin andheray main usay kuch nazar na aya
"su…..sujal………………..kahan ho tum."………………..as sujal on the light or us pay phool barasnay lagtay hain
kashish aik dam khairan ho jati hai or phir khushi say apnay haath phela k ghoomnay lagti hai
sujal usay dekh k hi muskura raha hota hai
jaisay hi yeh phoolon ki barish khatam hoti hai kashish sujal k pass jati hai.
"yeh kiss liye tha"……………sujal ko hug kartay howay
"abhi tau bohut say surprise baqi hain"………………..yeh kehtay howay sujal kashish ko apnay say alag kia or who aik room ki taraf bharay
room main jaisay hi enter howay kashish aik dam stunt reh gaye
room main har taraf balloon thay or phool hi phool uski rahoon main bikhray paray thay
room k center main aik table thi jiss pay candles theen or saath hi aik bara sa heart wala cake
sujal usay table k pass lay k gaya or kashish nay cake pay dekha tau uskay kaan k paas a k sujal nay sargoshi(whisper) ki
"happy 1st wedding anniversary kashish"
kashish aik dam palti or us ko hug kia………………..
"that was a beautiful gift sujal…………………….main tau bhool hi gaye thi…………….hamari shadi ko aik saal ho gaya…………patah bhi nahin chala…………..likin tum nay yeh sab kyoun kia"
"main nay us waqt jab tumhain pyaar dena chahiye tha apni nafrat di………….tau socha kyoun na aj us ka kafara ada kar doon"………………sujal nay aram say kaha……."likin main nay tumhain wish kia likin tum nay abhi tak mujhay wish nahin kia…………pehlay hi kia or kyoun shuru kar di"
sujal nay bachoon ki tarhan apna rukh pheer liya
kashish us k peechay say usay hug kia or pyaar say kaha
"happy anniversary my sweet hubby"
sujal nay kashish ko aj pehli bar "hubby" word kehtay suna tha tau who jhat say palta or kashish k forehead pay aik kiss diya
"abh cake katain"…………kashish nay cake ki taraf ishara kia tau sujal bhi hans diya
phir donon nay cake kata or aik doosray ko khilaya
"or yeh raha tumhara gift"……………………sujal nay apni pocket main say aik box nikala or kashish k agay kia ……………….kashish nay usay khola tau us main aik khoobsurat gold pendle tha jiss pay kashish sujal likha tha…………………..
kashish nay apnay baal agay kiye or sujal nay usay who pendent pehnaya
"that so sweet"…………kashish nay pendent pay haath phertay howay kaha
"likin meray pass tumhain denay ko kuch nahin hai"……………….kashish ka face utar gaya
"mujhay tum say kuch nahin chahyee…………tum meri zindagi main ho yehi meray liye bohut hai…………..or tumharay pass kuch nahin hai…………tau meri beti jo iss duniya main anay wali hai who tuhfa kai kaam hai"
(yes guys kashish is pregnant yaar…………..or yeh uska 9th month ka mid chal raha tha)
"meri beti hamri zindagi k khushiyan laye gi……………is liye tau main nay yeh soch bhi liya hai k meri beti ka naam khushi ho ga"…………….sujal nay muskuratay howay kaha
"or agar beta howa tau"…………….kashish nay usay satanay k liye kaha
"beta howa tau dekh lain gain …………..likin mera dil kehta hai k beti hogi"………sujal nay khushi say kaha
"oh main tau tumhain batana hi bhool gaya…………….yeh hamara naya ghar hai…………or iss ghar ka naam main nay kashish villa rakha hai"……………sujal nay kashish ko kaha tau kashish ki ankhon main ansoo aa gaye
"hey………..tum ro kyoun rahi hoo"………….sujal nay uskay ansoo dekhtay howay kaha
"yeh tau khushi k hain"………kashish nay justify kia
"accha chalo abh ansoo pooch or sonay chalo…………….kal mama or sameer or sunny bhi aa rahay hain………….or kal anniversary I khushi main aik party bhi hai…………tau chalo sonay chalo"…………….sujal usay unh k room main lay k gaya or kashish ko bed pay litaya….or khusd us k pass beth gaya
kashish nay sujal k aik bazoo seedha kai or us pay sar rahkh k soo gaye or sujal pyaar say us k balloon main haath pherta raha
neend kab aaye usay patah bhi na chala

lol
ana
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey ana,

a really beautiful part waitin 4 the next one
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Posted: 19 years ago
👏 👏 ..wooow ana...zabardast,....ab gaye......subah tak sujal ka haath sun nahi ho ga?...hehehe
continue soon 😃

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