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Posted: 18 years ago
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guys yeh meri naye story

KHUSHBOO KI ZUBAN

INTRO:its a short story............its a story aout kashish and sujal.......but but but..........it starts after there marriage

they r now living happily.........sujal is a person very hard to know..........while kashish is a very kind-hearted.........sujal or kashish ko society ka sab say happy couple kaha jata tha...........dekhtay hain kyoun

sujal abhi office gaya howa hai or kashish apni easy chair par bethay us waqt ko yaad kar rahi hai k jab uski or sujal ki shadi howi thi........

ayee dekhtay hai k woh kia soch rahi hai
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mujhay kafi deer ho gaye thi hujla-ye-aroosi main bethay howay likin majal hai kay iss arsay main kisi ze-rooh nay kamray k ander jhanka hoo............................... pooray ghar par khamoshi tari thi............................ jaisay meri amad k silsalay min sab ko itlaa kar di gaye ho k khabardar................. dulhan aa rahi hai kisii ki awaaz na nikalnay paye
kamar thak k thahta(lakri) ho gaye thi.........................main chahti thi k jald-az-jald iss bhari bojh say nijat hasil kar loon...........jo libas ki surat main mujh par lad(dall) diya gaya tha................likin ander hi ander khwahish bhi machal rahi thi k "woh" aik dafa tau dekh lain
adhi raat guzar gaye...................likin kissi k anay kay thoray say bhi asar dekhai nahin day rahay thay.......................thak har kar main nay socha k woh na sahi...................... kam-az-kam bachay hi dekh latay k unh ki doosri mama kaisi lag rahi hain.................... akhir beauti parlour par itna paisa jhonka tha
app log soch rahay hoon gain k hamaray anay k saath yeh pehlay hi say bachoon k zikar kaisa.....................tau janab yeh unki doosri shadi hai...............aur hamari pehli....................suna hai k do bachay hain................pehli biwi behad khoobsurat thi................shayad muhabat ki shadi thi......................meray saath tau shadi par razi na thay.....................apni pehli biwi say bohut muhabbat kartay thay......................laila-majno ki jodi thi...............

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Mischeivous thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
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Anaa....lovely..story...yaar..wah 👏 ..kahan say idea letihoo..continue soon Edited by Adildagr8 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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so sweet
ideas.......yahin kahin say lay leti hoon
likin i bet.......k tum say acchay nahin hain

ana
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Nahi..jee..meray...idea...tu meray friendz say inspired..hai...tum log tu meri innspiration hoo 😉 ..anywayz...jaldi next part bhi likgooo 😳 Edited by Adildagr8 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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waaah waahhhkya baat hai ANA DII superub fantasticc 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#7
ana dear bohat achche...... 😊 😊 😊
tumne itni jaldi nayi fan fic shuru kar di too good.................. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey ana very nice... 👏
seems to be again a gr8 story from u... 😉
dear cont soon... 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 👏 ...good work ana...lovely...kya urdu likhi...kasam se mere bhi upar se guzar gayi hehehe...but great concept....continue soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 hey plz can u write it in hindi or english as i find it a little dificult to understand urdu.