***KHUSHBOO KI ZUBAN***LAST PARTpg-31 9/5

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Ana

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Posted: 20 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: group_1223

ana....mi name z aisha...not jyoti😳....i m glad u r gonna b continuin writin....n thx 4 likin da comments

sorry aisha dear
yaar papers nay dimaag hila dala hai
so sorry again
😵

lol
ana

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Ana

@..oneOone..

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Posted: 20 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: KulBin
hey ana dear superb ending.... 👏
cute part n sweet name.... 😛
in all very nice story.... 👏
keep writing.... 😉
all the best 4 papers..... 😊

thanx kulbin
love u sweety
thanx alot

lol
ana

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purishivani

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Posted: 20 years ago

#223

Hey GREAT STORY!!!! Man this is the first one that is soo short and thats a good thing!! I really loved it!!
Best of luck for ur papers!!!!! 😛

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group_1223

@group_1223

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Posted: 20 years ago

#224

c'mon ana...u don't ve 2 say sorry...itz ok....i guess since v r frndz now....u better follow 2 special rulez..no sorry nor thx... 😛 ...k....tc...

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Ana

@..oneOone..

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Posted: 20 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: purishivani
Hey GREAT STORY!!!! Man this is the first one that is soo short and thats a good thing!! I really loved it!!
Best of luck for ur papers!!!!! 😛

thanx shivani
ya................i like short stories as k long stories main patah hi nahin chalta k main baat kia thi...................so its better to writeshort stories with diff ideas..............rite na
u liked it and love ur's

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ana

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sara

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Posted: 20 years ago

#226

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
wowwwwww yaaarrrrrrr
the part is absolutelyyyy marvelous gr8888 job yaar
i love the part where sujal take kashish in arm with her baby girl kanchi and kashish was feelling embarrass and sujal was feeling proud at their love
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz send the next part as soon as possible
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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@anni_23

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Posted: 18 years ago

#227

Wow gr8888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888 888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888 888 FICTION ana fantastic yaar