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Finally am able to comment ! pfffiouuu !! Really sorry for the delay, or upper se tumne back to back itne sare updts de die ( not that am blamming u, not at all 😆 ) but ab me har part ka analyse kaise karungi...😭 kher let me try...

Hmmm i can't do it chronologically 😕 Coz i will end up mixing all parts 😆
Ok so will do it by situations and important scenes ^^

Let's start with Pinky : Ok Pinky teasin geet was ok... Pinky is one of her kind ! u portrayed her in a very special way ^^ How can she says these kind of things so openly... personally i think it's too much... BUT i think there is more than what u r showing at the moment ! After Arnav's fiasco, maan thought that pinky did it on purpose: i doubt it, but then pinky apologizing to geet was weird... her character is fuzzy ^^ is she good or bad ? hope u will clarify it on the futur ! Because in on hand it seems like she wants maan and is cheating geet but on the other hand she was worried abt adi...

Now concerning maan's character: Oh what an improvement, u worked really well on his character ! Hats off to you 👏. First you purposly made him mysterious, u did it so well that for a while i started doubting if he was gud or bad ! Then with geet grandpa, his intentions has been disclosed... i was like oh thank god... I loved his "confession" to geet ! 😳 But still we don't know his past... and he should tell everything to geet.. not necessary now... but the fact is she should now... that's the way i think i least...rest is up to you... it would great to see geet reacting to whatever maan did in the past, it will add spices 😆... Oh and how can i forget, the way he was teaching her how to make love, slowly slowly it was just too cute 😳. Loved it ! Ok enough with maan, there is so much to say on him ^^

Now it's geet turn : ( first of all dnt shout at me ok 😕 i just want to let u know how i felt regarding her character... ) My position didn't changed, again i think that her character is too small compared too maan's impressive one ! For me she gave herself to him too early , i understand that physical attraction is difficult to deny...but phir b... She never doubted him, while there was lots of weird things abt him, then she didn't argue abt pinky's issue, she wanted to but she didn't... I felt her too weak... 😕 Now when she learnt the truth, her behavior suited the way u portryaed her ! That was well done !

About geet parents : so her dad wants to kill her ? but why ? is he mentally ill or there is smething else... and why did he kill his wife ??? arggghh ME WANTS TO KNOW 😆

Now regarding the story in general, loved the way everything happened ! 😳
Maan n geet situation has gone too fast ( for me ^^ ) but still its was gud ! 👏
U are really good at keeping suspense, u dnt disclose too much, just enough to confuse everyone 😆 ...Hats off for that ! 👏


Ok that's enough for know ^^

Oh and yeah thanx a lot for the lentgh of the updts and the frequency it's REALLY REALLY REALLY pleasing... 😊

Love ya dear Rosie ( mind if i call ya Rosie ? ) !
Zubi 😊


OOOH FINISHED UPDTING MY POST AND SAW U ENDED THE SS 😲
will read last parts and then comment !
Hope u don't find my comments boring ^^

Originally posted by: misssmily

Finally am able to comment ! pfffiouuu !! Really sorry for the delay, or upper se tumne back to back itne sare updts de die ( not that am blamming u, not at all 😆 ) but ab me har part ka analyse kaise karungi...😭 kher let me try...

Hmmm i can't do it chronologically 😕 Coz i will end up mixing all parts 😆
Ok so will do it by situations and important scenes ^^

Let's start with Pinky : Ok Pinky teasin geet was ok... Pinky is one of her kind ! u portrayed her in a very special way ^^ How can she says these kind of things so openly... personally i think it's too much... BUT i think there is more than what u r showing at the moment ! After Arnav's fiasco, maan thought that pinky did it on purpose: i doubt it, but then pinky apologizing to geet was weird... her character is fuzzy ^^ is she good or bad ? hope u will clarify it on the futur ! Because in on hand it seems like she wants maan and is cheating geet but on the other hand she was worried abt adi...

Now concerning maan's character: Oh what an improvement, u worked really well on his character ! Hats off to you 👏. First you purposly made him mysterious, u did it so well that for a while i started doubting if he was gud or bad ! Then with geet grandpa, his intentions has been disclosed... i was like oh thank god... I loved his "confession" to geet ! 😳 But still we don't know his past... and he should tell everything to geet.. not necessary now... but the fact is she should now... that's the way i think i least...rest is up to you... it would great to see geet reacting to whatever maan did in the past, it will add spices 😆... Oh and how can i forget, the way he was teaching her how to make love, slowly slowly it was just too cute 😳. Loved it ! Ok enough with maan, there is so much to say on him ^^

Now it's geet turn : ( first of all dnt shout at me ok 😕 i just want to let u know how i felt regarding her character... ) My position didn't changed, again i think that her character is too small compared too maan's impressive one ! For me she gave herself to him too early , i understand that physical attraction is difficult to deny...but phir b... She never doubted him, while there was lots of weird things abt him, then she didn't argue abt pinky's issue, she wanted to but she didn't... I felt her too weak... 😕 Now when she learnt the truth, her behavior suited the way u portryaed her ! That was well done !

About geet parents : so her dad wants to kill her ? but why ? is he mentally ill or there is smething else... and why did he kill his wife ??? arggghh ME WANTS TO KNOW 😆

Now regarding the story in general, loved the way everything happened ! 😳
Maan n geet situation has gone too fast ( for me ^^ ) but still its was gud ! 👏
U are really good at keeping suspense, u dnt disclose too much, just enough to confuse everyone 😆 ...Hats off for that ! 👏


Ok that's enough for know ^^

Oh and yeah thanx a lot for the lentgh of the updts and the frequency it's REALLY REALLY REALLY pleasing... 😊

Love ya dear Rosie ( mind if i call ya Rosie ? ) !
Zubi 😊


OOOH FINISHED UPDTING MY POST AND SAW U ENDED THE SS 😲
will read last parts and then comment !
Hope u don't find my comments boring ^^

u were on a roll dear...

Hey buddy,
m speechless, running short 4 words. A huge tight hug & kiss. Thank u.

👏👏👏