-dhundlae aks- MAANEETFF THREAD 12 pt110 pg120 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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4 da New Thread Muski di ❤️
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waiting 4 da Update
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Edited by _HaNo_ - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dhundlae aks

PART 108
SWEETIS IF U HAVE MISSED PART 107 THAT WAS UPDATED EARLIER TODAY..HERE IS THE LINK

Maan snapped away in anger... still the fact she is misitimia not hit his head..
he angrily looked her wrist.. she was wearing the bracelet.. he snatched it away from her hand..
kaha tha na Daadi .. yeh har kisi ke haat main suit nahi karega
Daadi tried to stop him.. but he was too violent & rough. He just ran up the steps to his room.
Daadi tried to explain to Geet.. but she looked too perplexed in a different world.

Before Daadi could say anything she followed him like his shadow to his room..
she didn't know wat was it any more, she was oblivious to the whole world even to her own self. Her heart just was beating only one thing.. her puchki.. was he really puchki. She fluttered her eyes standing at the frame of the door to his room
puchki ? She questioned walking into the his room.. every moment they spend together played back in her mind, with a difference it had a face now a face that ran butterflies down her stomach. He raised his hand.. facing his back to her.
her voice was filled with anxiety.. restlessness.. so much of passion.. breathlessness.. heart ache..

Oh god the word puchki.. how much he was longing to hear it all this days..months..year now. He would have repeated it a million times all these days but when she said it .. oh god..his heart just missed a beat..
she is his mistimia.. Geet is mistimia.. he closed is eyes painfully. He actually hurt his mistimia.. he clenched his hand that was already hurt.
The thought.. she was all the while right their & he couldn't recognize her. His confidence on his own knowing vanished. He couldn't know mistimia..his failure to understand wat he wants anymore was just complete blankness. He could hear her breath .. her scent fill the room like it used to.. his hands gestured her to stop followed with his cold words.. in hatredness on self
just stay where u r
outside
she looked down his words just slit through her heart
u where not welcomed in room before nor r u now
he hated himself to have not known wat his world was anymore. This world was killing him now. This fresh feeling, wat he felt now was hurting. This pain was so real, it all seemed so untrue so much of pain of failure of recognizing that meant the most to him.
So this was u!!! tumhari asliyet
this is wat u wanted..
lekin puchki
don't u dare call me that
he screamed more in fear that he may just lose every thing.
Tum dad ki office ki ek employee ho, bus employee ban ke raho.
aapni haseyat mat boholo.. damit u r just an employee
lekin hum
her voice cracked, she didn't know wat to call their moment anymore
he turned angrily to her.. hum?? wat hum??
how can u even think there could be anything hum between us???

then he gave one of the mean looks.. or was it that ur plan
yah right thats .. oh dam God!!! this was all this abt..
he walked around pushing his hair behind.. so this is was
why u where playing around with bro today. Mujhe se dosti nahi kar payen tho
she could have slapped him right there. She clenched her fist looking away. How could he even say anything. She could accept Maan misunderstanding her not puchki.. he can't be saying all this to her. His baseless words.. mean accusation.. his heart pinching glare only irritated her now, losing the little bit of patience ..hope on wat ever was between them. She didn't want to even to understand him any more. She angrily turned away, her eyes fell on puchki..
wat was puchki doing on his bed when every thing else seemed to have changed.

He like read the question in her eyes..before he knew she took puchki away..
Maan snatched it from her hand..
why do u need it then she asked with fuming eyes
I don't need it he grind his teeth tearing the teddy into 2 pieces & throwing it apart.
It was her heart he just tore. She choked.. not able to bare the sight.. so much of hatredness for wat aakhir meri galti kya hain she thought. Just that I am madly fallen for him. When all he has for me is hateredness. She couldn't be standing a min longer under the same roof as him. She screamed at him in sheer anger of tearing her puchki.. her puchki him.. whom she desired secretly in her heart.. tearing her hope of some day he will stop misunderstanding her..
You know .. I just hate u..
her blood rushed to her heart.. piercing.. because.. she probably feels for him to the point of passion that disquiets her soul
he couldn't scream back.. he hates her.. it was mistimia..he could never say that to her. Why can't he.. I hate her he fought with himself.. wo bol sakti hain tho main kyun nahi.. ???!!!
he thought he knew wat it was.. no world without her, but all he did was fight with her hurt her to an extend she hates him.
She always did he fought back to himself..
but still why can't he stop thinking of her, that could be because she his misti
he hit the wall in anger.. hurting himself.. why does he have to say all that to her. Why can't he just control wat he feels for her. Why can't he.. he shrieked
why does it feel he would just die if he sees that eyes in pain. But all she does is give him pain.. break his trust, annoy him.


She just ran down.. away to main door when yash called for.
She composed herself.. yes sir
yash ' beta kanha ja rahi ho
she smiled weekly ghar sir
yash ' nahi nahi beta abhi nahi.. wat abt the party
I will come back for that
she tried to lie looking down
Daadi ' aisen thodi hota hain. Aap kanhi nahi jaa rahi. Challenyen humri help kijeyen.
She tried to refuse when Daadi came around & held her hand to took her inside
Daadi made her sit on the bed
' aap Maan ki wajahse pareshan ho na. Wo actually
Daadi was little reluctant..
Geet looked at her in concern
Daadi ' actually wo prachi ki engagement ko lekar thoda pareshan hain. I think it was all of sudden so he doesn't know how to react.
Geet heart just broke further...shatering piercingly painful didn't know wat to believe anymore. The strong expression of his, or the extreme denial or the fact he & prachi r once together. Or is it just that with such intense feeling one always deceives oneself & fails to understand & always ends up misinterpreting everything around them.. they way they like to see.
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Precap
silent war infront of the family.
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Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats for new thread..
Maan really broke Geet's heart..I don't know wht he thinking..
I hope now Maan don't misunderstand with Dev..because she said once that her boss is hot..

waiting for next part..
Edited by pop77 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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1st of all
sooo much 4 dz outstanding update
di u maight think I am 🤪but i dz kind of & 🥺
updatz more dan Happy 1 😆
dz update is 1 of da BEST update n dz FF 4 me
i ❤️ evry bit of it
maan being
rude 2 his mistimia Geet coz of his own self hatredness nd all was superbb
nd he tearing puchky dat ws rlly by just dz action of him he hv ruined
all her hope nd dream abt her puchki
dz time he had hurt Geet his own mistimia heart 💔
so much😭
wondering how he vll make up to her all dz 😳
Muski di u R marvelous
update soon di vll be v8ing eagely 😍

Edited by _HaNo_ - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Surprise update, loved it and luv u for updating. A bot sad but needed. It's reality when u feel hurt u always take it out the wrong way. Poor puchki torn in two pieces :(. Can't wait for silent war
Edited by Ambibamby - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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heartbreaking...i just want maan to grovel, beg, repent, feel the pain of having insulted her, mistrusted at every stage...
even if geet forgives him, i will never be able to digest the fact that she has forgiven him...what he has done cannot be undone...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww.. this time it was just too painful.. the way he hurt her, with his vicious words.. too too hurtful.. felt my heart squeeze painfully with every syllable..💔

She so innocently followed him, trying to explain from even before she knew he was Puchkii, she ddint even mind the slap.. 😔 felt like something lodged in my throat, as she stood there and he treated her so bad..

This time I hope she ignores him all the while in the party.. he tore Puchkii apart.😔 his insinuation about her character was despicable.. am as hurt as Mistimia is..😔

Superb update Muskaan.. but since we have been waiting all day so patiently.. and since this part was agonizing , you have to give us more.. please muskaan more..💔
Edited by ninand - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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are muskaan update was worth why the hell prachi is coming them as misunderstanding bet them although she is engaged
maan ne tho hadh kar di yaar phir se ultha seedha bol diya
bechari geet ka dil toot hi gaya jab dadi ne maan ka naam prachi se jod diya tha
haye muski clear their misunderstanding fast
thanx going to have another cup of coffee
bye

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