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Posted: 19 years ago
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GREAT FANFIC!! omg i love ure fanfic..ure AWESOME!!
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Thank u..........😛

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Part 7

Kripa makes a puppy face.Angad's heart melts.

A:theek hai chalo..pass mein hi aik bohut acha restaurant hai..

They both heads to their car.They both goes to a near by restaurant.They take their seats.

A:So Kya khao gi..

K:Kuch bhi mager mujhe bohut bohuk lagi hai let it make fast please..

Angad thinks for a while and then smiles and opens the menue book.He looks through the pages and stops at one.

A:Yup got it..So kya lo gi tum Sea food khati ho na..

K:Haan..i think thats a good idea.

A:So here is ur menue...Uhh Soup of Ants , Chicken of mouquitoes , Black poisonous Scorpions...

Kripa makes faces as she was clueless what Angad was talking about.Kripa confusely snatches the menue from him and was shocked to see a blank page.Angad was fooling her.Kripa starts to hit him badly and really hard.

A:Ouch..

Kripa stops as she comes to sense that what she was doing.She don't have a right to hit him.Kripa embarassly leaves him.Angad understood his uncomfortably.The orders their lunch.Soon their foods arrives.Kripa just can't herself as the smell of the food was delicious.She quickly grabs a spoon and was about to take some rice when Angad hits his hand on her really hard that Kripa takes her hand back.

K:Ahh..

A:Tumhe kisi ne sikhaya nahi ke apni plate mein khana chahiye..

Kripa just stucks her tongue out and serves herself.After some time,they leaves after paying the bill.They both sits at Angad's red beauty when Kripa's cell start ringing.

K(on cell):Hello..oh hi mom...per mom mein...lekin....ok mein aa rahi hon bye...

A:kya hua..

K:drop me home Angad...

A:what why..u promised to spent a day with me..

K:lekin kal holi hai na..bas isi liye mom ne bula liya hai..

A:oh..ok mein tumhe chor deta hon..

Kripa nods and After 15 mins,they arrives at Kripa's house.

K:ok Angad thanx for a lovely lunch..

A:its ok..next time we will try that sea foods..

K(wines):Angad.!!

A:ok ok..

K:bye..

Kripa turns around to go when Angad stop her.

A:Kripa..

Kripa turns to him..

K:hmm..

A:woh tumhari earing..

Kripa looks at his side mirror that only one earing was there.

K:thanx..

She takes that and was about to go again when ANgad stops her again.

A:Kripa..

K:Yes Angad!

A:woh..ye tumhare liye..

Angad hands her a round box packed in gift paper.Kripa smiles and takes that.

K:Thanx..

Taking that Kripa gives a cutest smile ever.For once Angad's heart skipped when Kripa smiles so sweet.Kripa runs to her house while Angad also smiles to himself and leaves to Prithvi's house.Kripa enters the house.

K:hi mom..

G:kitni dair laga di Kripa..

K:woh mom sorry..

G:theek hai..jao pehle change ker lo..aur phir aa ker mera haath batao..

K:ok..

Kripa goes upstairs and comes down after changing.She helps her mother all day long in Holi's preparation as in Sharma house there was a elder peoples get togthering and at Bose house there was a younger peoples get togethering.

At 9 o'clock,Angad was getting bored now at Prithvi's house.

P:Angad...ab tera kya program hai Kripa ko patane ka..

A:uhh zayada kuch nahi bas kal Holi hai to kal dekhte hain ke kya hota hai..

P:ohh..well kal ke din to tum kuch na karna..

A:kyon?

P:kyon ke kal mein aur Kripa holi khelne mein busy honge..so please don't disturb us..

Angad winks at him and runs outside.

A(yells while running):yeh to tum kal dekh leina..

And he runs out to his car and goes to his home.

At Sharma House,Kripa was laying at her bed.Her back can be seen as she was waken.She was thinking about Angad,His smiling style,His walking smile and when he acts like children and make people laugh.Thinking this she also smiles.While at Khanna House,Angad was opposite of his bed.His feets were facing where he sleeps and his face was facing where his feets rest.He was also thinking about today when Kripa smiles,when she got uncomfortable,her short temper and when she was hitting him in the restaurant.

Day Three!!!!

Next Morning,We see Kripa dressed in a white churidaar.She slips some white bangles in her hand.She sticks a bindi on her forehead and applies a pink gloss.She was looking stunning.Kripa goes downstairs as she had to take breakfast and then leave for Prithvi's house.She quickly got downstairs,she was heading towards the breakfast table when her mom called.

G:Kripa..

Kripa turns around.Gayatri was standing with a pooja ki thali.She takes some Red colour in her hands press it in her forehand lightly.

G:Happy Holi..

K:Samme here mom..

They both hugs and leaves to take breakfast.

While at Khanna house,we see Angad yelling really loudly.

A(yelling):WHAAAAAAAAAAAATT THE HEEELLLL IS THHHHIISSSS....IIII MMMMMMMMMMMM GEEETTTTIINNGGG LLLAAATTTEEE....GGGIIIVEEEE MY CLLLLOTTTTHHHHEEESSSS BBBBBBBAAACCK JJJJJJJJJOOOOOOOOSSSSSSSSSHHH OR ELLLLSEEE I WWWIILLL KIIIILLLL UUUU..

J:WHy should i give u..dekho to kitne ache lag rahe ho..

Then we scan Angad's whole body and he was only in a blue towel wrapped around him.

A:JOSH GIVE ME MY CLOTHES BACK>>C"MON I M GETTING LATE..

J:Then tell me what is it..u love Kripa or not..

A:WHAT RUBBISH JOSH..ITS JUST A CHALLENGE..I SWEAR I DON"T LOVE HER..

J:theek hai ye lo..

A:thanx..now get out of my room.

She quickly changes into white shirt which was like a vest and a blue jeans.He not even takes his breakfast.

N:aray kuch to kha lo..

A:nahi mom mujhe jana hai..

He was tying his shoe laces.

N:lekin..

As she was about to say Angad leaves.

A(yells while running):BYEEE MOOOMMM..

N:Pagal..kabhi nahi sudhrega..

Angad quickly gets into his car while at Sharma House Kripa was also getting in his car.They both hurrily starts the car and start to drive.Finally they both arrives there at the same time.They both comes out of their cars at the same time.They both were amazed by looking at each other.

A:hi Kripa u look gorgeuos..

K:hi..u r also looking that bad..

Angad smiles and they both head inside Prithvi's loan where the party was held.They both meets Prithvi.

P:Well tum dono aaj maza karna kyon mein aaj ka din yaadgaar banana chahta hon...

A:sure..

P:aik min mein abhi aya..

A:So Kripa..kal ka kya khayal hai kal phir restaurant chalein...wohi sea foods khane..

K:ANgad..

A:sahi to keh raha hon..

Kripa was about to turn around and walk when Angad holds her by her wrist and pulls her towards him.Kripa was shocked.Angad quickly shows Kripa her purse so that she would not take it to the wrong sight.

A:Tumhara purse..

K:Yeh..

A:kal tum car mein hi bhool gayi..

They both leaves each other while Kripa takes her bag back.

K(blushes):Thanx..

A:ur welcome..

Prithvi who winked Angad from behind of Kripa to not tell her that he was coming to her to spread all the colour on Kripa.His both fists were full of red colour.He slowly and slowly stands behind her.And all of a sudden he spreads that all on Kripa.

K:aaahhh..

ANgad laughs at this.Prithvi runs from there as Kripa runs behind him.Angad also thinks something naughty.He also takes some colour.Kripa who was running round and round and happened to pass again by Angad and in the mean time Angad spread that all colour on Kripa and that colour fell on Kripa forehead where they fills sindoor.Kripa stops as she don't know about it.Now she also takes colour but instead of taking some she grabs whole plate and spread all on Angad.They both spread colour on each other while running.By seeing them Happy,Prithvi feels jealous but for today he ignores.Mishti comes from behind and also spreads colour on him.Angad and Kripa who stop play was now standing by a side talking.Angad looks at Kripa who was trying to get all colour off but it was not.ANgad looks at Kripa eyes.He keep starring at her beautiful chocolate brown eyes.After a while,he start singing now knwing anything what words were coming out of his mouth

A:Soni Soni Akhiyon vaali, Dil deja ya deja re humko tu gaali. (Angad sings while going back from her but still looking at her)
Boys Chorus: Hum tere deewane hain, hum aashiq mastane hain. (All boys start to sings behind Angad as they dance a little with Angad)
Hum tere deewane hain, hum aashiq mastane hain

K:Jhooti jhooti batiyon vaale,
Bholi soorat, dil ke ye kaale.

Jhooti jhooti batiyon vaale,
Bholi soorat, dil ke hai, dil ke ye kaale.
Girls Chorus: Ye aashiq lut jaane hain, dil sab de tut jaane hain.
Ye aashiq lut jaane hain, dil sab de tut jaane hain.


P:Jaa kudiye, jo kar le.
Gora badan tera rang diya. (Prithvi sings while walking around Kripa)

K:Oye mundiya, vaada raha,
Suli pe jo na tujhe tang diya. (Kripa sings while Spreading colour on her)

Boy 1:Main suli pe chad jaanva,
Tu bol abhi mar jaanva.

Girl 1: Main tujhse agar dar jaanva,
Dil naam tere kar jaanva.

A:Yaad rakhna mera kehna,
Ye Dil ek din mil jaane hain. (Angad sings and he goes to Kripa and spun her around)

Boys Chorus:Hum tere deewane hain, hum aashiq mastane hain.

Girls Chorus:Ye aashiq lut jaane hain, dil sab de tut jaane hain.

Boy 1: Kyon mujhse door khadi hai,

Girl 2: Badi masti tujhe chadi hai.

Boy 2: Kyon mujhse door khadi hai, dil ke nazdeek badi hai,
Aa lag ja gale tu kisi bahane se.....

Boys Chorus: Bahane se.... bahane se....

Girl 2: Badi Masti tujhe chadi hai, har ladki door khadi hai,
Main aagayi phir bhi tere bulane se...

Girls Chorus: Bulane se.... bulane se....

A:Soch kar tha tujhe aana,
Aakar vaapas ne jaana.

Boys Chorus: Hum tere deewane hain, hum aashiq mastane hain. (All boys drink Bhang together)

Girls Chorus: Ye aashiq lut jaane hain, dil sab de tut jaane hain. (All Girls go back while they drinking)

A:Soni Soni Akhiyon vaali,
Dil deja ya deja tu gaali.

K:Jhooti jhooti batiyon vaale,
Bholi soorat, dil ke ye kaale.

Boys Chorus: Hum tere deewane hain, hum aashiq mastane hain.

Girls Chorus: Ye aashiq lut jaane hain, dil sab de tut jaane hain.

Boys Chorus: Hum tere deewane hain, hum aashiq mastane hain.

Girls Chorus: Ye aashiq lut jaane hain, dil sab de tut jaane hain.

(SOng From Movie Mohabbatein,Soni Soni)

Angad and Kripa both dance with each other on dhol.All were dancing like crazy and spreading colours all pver the place.Prithvi first stopped and saw Angad and Kripa dancing and someone in his heart he felt jealous but again continued dancing.

To be Continued

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Edited by sweetz_gurl - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Only 2 replies...no one really liked it.. 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i loved it!!!i mean the song choice was perfect n i could actually imagine them playing holi!!!! cont. soon!! i also like the fact that prithvi will probably develope feelings for kripa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
That was Such an AWESOME part! Cont. soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 8

Angad and Kripa both dance with each other on dhol.All were dancing like crazy and spreading colours all pver the place.Prithvi first stopped and saw Angad and Kripa dancing and someone in his heart he felt jealous but again continued dancing.

At Evening,all start leaving.Angad and Kripa were still busy in applying each other colours and seeing this Prithvi was getting Angad in nerves.

P(Thinks):No..Why will Angad feel for Kripa...He is just completing his challenge...but i don't think he is really on his challenge...God...What am i talking about...Is i m falling for her or what?????

He kept on asking questions to himself when Angad and Kripa comes to him.

K:Well Prithvi i should leave now...its getting late..

A:Yeah..

K:Prithvi???

She snaps his fingers in front of him..

K:Aee Helloo..where r u..!!!

P:Huh..??oopss sorry...

K:What happen..?

P:oh that just nothing...i was just thinking...nothing else..

K:oh ok..so i m leaving...Meet u day after tomorrow..

P:Day After Tomorrow??

K:Yeah..u forgot that tomorrow is also a holiday..

P:Oh God..Sorry i forgot..SO Take care..

K:u too..

P:And when u reach ur house firstly clean ur face because ur parents will see u like this they will probably not identify u that u r their daughter?

K:Prithvi uuu..

Angad and Prithvi laughs.

P:Sorry just kidding..

K:u better be..Bye..

A:Bye Prithvi...

P:Bye..

They both leaves from Prithvi's house.ANgad and Kripa reaches outside.

A:So Miss Kripa Sharma..Kal ke koi planning wannings hain..?

K:oh no...mein aaj bohut thak gayi hon to kal rest karongi aur mera aik Cansyment hai ose pura karongi..

A:oh the same one about Nasal Cavity...to search how much pharynx are there in Nasal?

K:Yeah!!!

A:God..i also have to do that..can i come tomorrow to ur house to help u..?

K:yeahs sure why not..

A:Great!then meet u tomorrrow...

K:ok bye..

A:Bye..

They both leaves to their houses.Kripa reaches home and quickly goes to her room to take shower so that the colours may not get dark to her skin.On The other hand ANgad reaches home and runs to stairs when Naina stops him.

N:Angad.

Angad just stops there where he was and looks behind.

N:Meine tumhe kaha tha ke jaldi ana..aur zara apni ghari(watch)mein dekho ke kitne baj rahe hain..

A(mumbering):Filhaal to meri band bajne wali hai..

N:What?

A:Uhh nothing..woh mom mein ghari pehen ke nahi gaya..

N:Angad tumhe waqt ki koi parwa nahi hai...first look at urself in the mirror then talk to me...

A:woh mom Holi khelne ke liye rang to chahiye na..

N(talking in disgust):GoDD!!!tum humesha baat ko palat dete ho..mein tumhe waqt ki baat ker rahi thi aur ye holi beech mein kaha se aa gayi..

A:Sorry mom ainda aisa nahi hoga..

N:Angad humein Pooja ke liye jana tha...aur sab tumhare bare mein pooch rahe the..

A:ohh Mom..dikne mein kaisi hai Pooja..

N:Smart....WHAT!!!ANGAD!!!!

Angad runs from there to his room while Naina also leaves.Angad quickly goes to take a shower.At Kripa's room,she comes out and slips on her bed.Kripa looks down and sees a paper.She picks it up and reads.

Hi Kripa,

You Don't know me but i know you very well . Kripa, Angad is playing with ur emotions.He is not the right person.He plays with every girls emotions and you r also the target of him.Please Kripa,Be away from him or else you will feel guilty for what u r doing.Think about my every word which i have said to you and thats the truth.It was my duty to tell u and now its all upon you.!!

Ur Well Wisher.

Kripa closes the letter in shock.She didn't know what to do next.The words just echo's in her ears"Angad is playing with ur emotions"Kripa closes her eyes but again the words echo's in her ears"He is not the right person.He plays with every girls emotions and you r also the target of him"Kripa just tears the paper and throws it away.

K(thinks):No ANgad aisa nahi ker sakta...ager ose kuch bhi karna hota to pehle hi mujhe chor deta..itne dino tak mere saath na rehta...

Kripa all night thinks about it and soon falls asleep.

Day Four!!!

Next Morning,We see Kripa collecting some things.She opens her closet and takes her college bag out.She takes out 2 big Books and places it on the bed.She takes out a Big size chart and a pencil which she placed under her hairs.After some time Angad also reaches there.He was holding some books,a chart and many things to compose his Cansyment.He manages to ring the bell.Gayatri opens the door.

G:Jee.!!kis se milna hai aap ko?

A:Aahh..woh mera naam Angad hai..mein Kripa ka dost hon..woh mera bhi Cansyment hai is liye mein bhi aa gaya..

G:oh under ao Beta..

A:thanx..

Angad comes in and was amazed by seeing the whole house.

G:Beta Kripa ka room uper first room left hai..

A:ok thanx..

Angad runs to stairs and reaches her room.He doesn't knocks the room because he can't.He opens the door when Kripa yells.

K:Angad...

A:What!!

K:Move..

A:What?

K:Move to other side..

A:oh Sorry..

He turns to other side.

Kripa was trying to close her zip from behind when Angad came in thats why she yelled to turn around.Kripa quickly closes the zip of her kameez.

K:Angad tum knock nahi ker sakte the kya..

A:to kya tum room lock nahi ker sakti thi..

K:Angad ye mera room hai mein chahon to jo merzi karon..

A:to ye mere haath hain mein jo chahon karon meri merzi..

K:Ok GODDD!!

A:I m Angad..

K:I know..

A:If u know that don't say GOD..because i m not..

K:Angad will u please Shut ur mouth!!

A:Yeah..sure but close urs first..It smells really badly..

Kripa's mouth drop open.While Angad throws her things on the couch and jumps on her bed.

A:wow..nice room..

K:Angad..tum yahan baatein ya khelne aye hoo..

A:Nahi..Cansyment ke liye aya hon..

K:oh to niche utro..

A:Naah...Kripa u know mujeh aise room ache nahi lagte..Jan tak ye pillow wahan gira na ho..

He throws both Pillow on the floor.

A:aur ye tumhare sandles yahan ache nahi lagte jab tak ye wahan gire na hon..

He throws her sandles near the couch.Kripa was shocked at what Angad was doing.

A:aur ye cusions to yahan pare ache hi nahi lagte..

He throws them too near the door.The room almost looks messy.

K(Angrily):Kya hua ruk kyon gaye..tumhe to woh pillow wahan pare ache nahi lagte na...aur ye..ye jo sheet bachi hai na woh bhi utha ker phank do..

Kripa turns around really angrily.

A(Thinks):Oh no ye meine kya ker diya...

He goes near to Kripa and taps on her shoulder.

A:Sorry i didn't mean to hurt u...dekho ab meine ye sara kamra kharab kiya hai to theek bhi mein ker deta hon..

Kripa looks at him.

A:Sorry!!

K:Its ok..

A:OK to kahan se shuru karein..haan..

He start to put all the things on their place.After half an hour.

A:So ho gaya na..

K:yeah..well tum cheezen bigarne aur phir ounhe sahi jaga rakhne mein mahir ho..

A:woh to mein hon...chalo ab kaam shuru karien..

K:haan chalo..

They both sits on the bed and opens their chart on the bed.She start to look for something.

A:Kya hua kya dhond rahi ho..

K:woh pata nahi meine pencil kaha rakh di..

Angad smiles to himself.

A:Tumhari pencil tumhare baalon mein hai..

Kripa looks at her hair and smiles to herself.

K:thanx..

They both start their work on Nasal Cavity.They opens their books and reads.Kripa was half working on the chart and half reading while Angad was just reading.

K:Angad tum kya ker rahe ho..

A:Football khel raha hon khelo gi..?

K:Haha very funny..tumhe apna Cansyment nahi karna hai..

A:wohi to ker raha hon..

Kripa just leaves him for what he was doing and does her work.At 6 o clock,Kripa looks at the clock and sees its 6.

K:oh God..time ka pata hi nahi chala..

A:oh haan..

K:chalo mera Cansyment to ho gaya..aur tumhara..

A:Yeah almost...hogaya..

K:SO kuch kha lein..

A:chalo pass hi mein restaurant hai..chalte hain..

K:haan chalo lekin pehle mein apni cheezen collect ker lon warna sari gum jayen gi.

She folds her chart and closes her books and place them at her table.She picks up all those Papers and puts them in between a book while Angad also does the same and hold them together.

A:Ready?

K:haan chalo..

They leaves to a restaurant and eats their lunch and dinner together.Angad was forgetting that this was all a part of his challenge.

To Be Continued

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Edited by sweetz_gurl - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 😆 yaaaaaay greatttt parttttttt
cont soooooooooon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great 👏 👏 👏

Moderator's Note:
Edited because of the countless emotions.
Edited by shahidlover24 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice part mindblowing plz continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
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a very sweet n cute part!!! do cont. soon, yay!!! angad's falling for kripa!!!

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