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Posted: 19 years ago
#31
Exactly u r 110%right ................so this meanz I won da bet 😆 !!!yippeeeeeeeee!!!Now plzz cont soon 😉




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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
amazing part
cont soon
wann knw y kripa's smile faded away
and in 7 days angad himself will fall 4 her
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: hot_girl_2525

amazing part
cont soon
wann knw y kripa's smile faded away
and in 7 days angad himself will fall 4 her

u said everything i wanted to say!!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
Part 5


Kripa enters her home smiling and without saying to someone anything she leaves to her room.she kept smiling while she changes into other comfy clothes.Just then her smile fades away.He remembers that he has to study an animal's opertaion.

K(to herself):YUCK!how can a doctor operates an animal...uff for once i thought that i was going to be a human's doctor not for an an animal..Oh God Help me.

She quickly runs to her table and takes out a long and big book and start to turn pages.The whole night she spents studing.

Day Two!!!!

Next Morning,Kripa was in hurry.she was wearing a white churidaar with half sleeves.Kripa collects her hotebooks and head downstairs.When she reach down,she runs to thebreakfast table where her parents were taking breakfast.She sayd her Good Morning to them and picks up a toast with better.She takes a bite of it and takes a sip of her Mango juice.Then she grabs an apple and says her goodbyes to her parents.Kripa goes and sits in her car and finishes her apple and throws it out.While in Khanna House we see Angad calmly eating her breakfast.

N:Angad tum jaldi kyon nahi jate ho..c'mon eat fast..

Ka:mom rehne do..ager ye jaldi bhi chala jaye to kon si sari calsses atten ker lega..just leave it..

A:mom aap ka aik beta to parh raha hai na...

N:aur tum..

A:flirt..

N:Angad u r disgusting..

A:thank u...

Naina leaves the table while Dilip just laughs.Ater some time Kartick and Angad leaves to their college.

At College,We see Kripa standing in the library collecting some books.While Angad enter in the college.

P:hey Angad..

They both hugs.

A girl comes from behind and hugs Angad..

A Girl:Hi Angad..

A:oh hi sheela...

S:Angad aaj tum free ho na..

Prithvi rolls her eyes and takes Angad to a side.

P(in a low woive):Angad ager tumhe Kripa ko patana hai to ye sab band karna hoga..Angad ye sab nahi chale ga..

A(in the same tone):oh yeah u r right..

They both comes to Sheela.

A:Sheela woh..woh mein aaj busy hon..

S:oh..ok then i have to leave bye..

A:bye..

She was going to give a kiss to Angad when Angad moves backward.Sheela makes a face and leaves.

P:thats the spirit..to chale..

A:kaha..i have to search ur friend Kripa..pata nahi kis ka operation ker rahi hogi..

P:oh please meine ose library mein jate dekha..

A:thanx mein to chala kyon ke aaj 2nd day hai aur os ki pasand aur na pasand ka mujhe pata hi nahi hai..ok catch u later.

P:ok..

Angad runs to the library.He enters and looks through the whole room.His gaze falls on Kripa.

A(thinking):wow what a girl..God she is looking simple but amazing..

He comes close to her and taps her shoulder.Kripa looks at him.

K:Tum..

Everybody looks at her.

K(in a low voice):Tum..yahan..

A(in the same tone):haan mein kyon kisi aur ko expect ker rahi thi kya..

K:uhh nahi..mein bas thora parh rahi thi..

A:oh c'mon tum har waqt parhti kyon rehti ho..

K:kyon ke ager mein parho gi nahi to doctor kaise banon gi...

A(trying to act):oh thank u..mujhe to pata hi nahi tha ke parhne se insaan kuch ban sakta hai thank u very much..

K:Angad stop it..

A:ok..waise tum kya parh rahi ho..

K:Kuch operation tips..kyon kuch kaam hai..?

A:God..Operation operation..tum doctor ban ker kya karogi..?

K:Sab se pehle tumhe theek karongi..

A:with medicians,with operation or with love

Kripa looks at him even Angad doesn't knew what he just said..

K:jis ki zaroorat hogi os se..

Kripa stands up to go..

A:aray kaha chali..

K:meri classes hain..

A:mein bhi chalon..

K:tum to aise baat ker rahe ho ke jaise tum bhi doctory ker rahe ho..

A:ofcourse wohi ker raha hon..

K:what????

A:yeah right..per tumhari tarah har waqt parhta nahi rehta..

Kripa just gives him a disgusted look and leaves while Angad follows her.They both enters a class and sit.Kripa sits with Mishti and Angad sits behind her.The class starts

M(in a low voice):itni dair lagati di kaha thi tum..

K:mein library mein thi..

M:ok..

After some time,Angad writes a note to Kripa and pass her.

A(through a note):Hey Kripa how boring class lets leave..

K(though a note):if u want to leave then can i don't want to leave and stops this note writing..

A(again through a note):Ok i know u won't listen me after the college so tomorrow is Sunday so if u r free and u like to go with me tomorrow on a bech then just tore this paper..

When Kripa read it,She smiles to herself and torns the paper.Angad also smile to himself but he himself doesn't know why.

Now the whole class goes to a Laboratory to operate an animal.After the college,Kripa was going to her car.

A(yells from far away):Hey Kripa wait..

Kripa stops and looks behind.

Angad comes to her running.

A(breathing heavily):Kripa tum ne woh page phara os ka kya matlab tha..

K:tumhe nahi pata..

A:pata hai lekin tum se sunna chahta hon..

K:mein kal tumhare sath ja rahi hon..is that ok now..

Kripa turns around as her hairs flys and touch Angad's face.Angad close his eyes while Kripa sits in her car and drives to her house.

ANgad just smiles there standing

To be Continued

Sweetz Gurl
Edited by sweetz_gurl - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
awww sweet part!!! Loved it! U gotta cont. rly soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
Part 6


Kripa turns around as her hairs flys and touch Angad's face.Angad close his eyes while Kripa sits in her car and drives to her house.

ANgad just smiles there standing.He also comes to his car and drives his car to his house.Kripa goes to her house , eats her dinner after so many dayz with her parents.Chats with her parents and shares a little laugh.After some time,the three of them head to their rooms.Kripa enters her room,she feels free from 3 dayz because tomorror was Sunday and on Monday,Tuesday was a holiday of Holi.So she was bit enjoying being relaxed.Kripa was getting more excited minute by minute.Then she remembers that Angad has invited her to spent some time with Angad.She becomes more excited and happy.There was no end of her happiness but she thought to herself for once that why she is excited that she is going with Angad,Why she is feeling for Angad when he is close to her.As these question swere roaming in her mind,Kripa sleeps.

Day Three!!!!

Next Morning,Kripa was still sleeping and it was 10 o'clock.She didn't set any alarm last night because she want some peace sleep.But in the mean time,she gets a call on her cell.Kripa irritatily picks the phone up.

K(in a sleepy tone):Hello..

A:Hey my sweet friend..

K(her eyes opens wider):uhh..Angad tum..

A:haan mein kyon koi bhoot dekh liya kya...itna chonk(surprised)kyon rahi ho yaar..

K(again in a sleepy tone):nahi .. tum ne mujhe meri neend se utha diya...kitna acha sapna dekh rahi thi..

A:hey hello...utho...tum abhi tak so rahi ho kya..

K:haa nahi..

A:To utho na meri sleeping princess..dekho zara ghari(clock)mein..dus baj rahe hain...

K:what rubbish..

Kripa looks at her clock.

K:OH NOOOO!!

A(enjoying the situation):I knew it tum aise hi karo gi...now get up fast..tumhe ready hone mein bhi time lage ga....c'mon i m waiting..

K:What??U r waiting??for what??

A:Hey hello..kon si duniya mein jee rahi ho..i have invited u for a day out..and u forgot...so bad...very bad....zara bhi reham nahi aya tumhe...

K:Angad stop acting...tumhe actor hona chahiye tha..tum bohut achi acting ker lete ho..

A:i know that..u don't have to tell me.....Kripa tumhe taiyaar nahi hona hai kya....kitni baatein karti ho...jao baatein kam kiya karo aur kaam zayada kiya karo go and get ready..

K:Angad just shut up..

Saying that she puts off the phone while Angad just smiles to himself as he was wearing glasses of brown shades.Kripa runs to the washroom.She hurrily takes shower.Then after some time comes out covered in a pink towel.Kripa head towards her closet and takes out a short jeans and a white sleeveless shirt.She quickly wears it.She quickly applies some makeup.She was applying a pink gloss when she hears a horn.Kripa quickly throws her gloss by the side and grabs her white heal sandals.She quickly wears one and heads out of her room.She was in the middle of the stairs when she hears again a horn.She quickly tieds her sandals and was about to run when her mother calls.

G:aray Kripa kaha ja rahi hai tu..woh bhi itni jaldi taiyaar ho ker..

K:woh papa mera aik class fellow mujhe bahar le ja raha hai just for outing..

G:theek hai mager jaldi aa jana..

K:ok bye..

Without listening to Gayatri's answer Kripa runs outside.But she stops because if she will run to him then Angad will understand that she was in hurry to only meet him.Angad will take out a wrong meaning of it.So she start walking with an attitude.Angad sees her and is amazed because he saw Kripa first time in jeans.She was looking just amazing.Kripa goes to the passenger seat and takes a seat.

K:Hi Angad..

A:Hi..to akhir tum pohonch hi gayi right...

K:tum ye shukar karo ke mein pohonch gayi..

A:ok yeah yeah..so lets leave..

Angad start the car and start to drive.While driving,Kripa start checking her nails.

A:Kripa ye tum kya ker rahi ho..

K:kyon tumhe koi problem hai..

A:nahi per...u r irritating me while driving..

K:per meine to kuch kaha hi nahi aur na hi koi awaz nikali..

A:per tum jo bhi ker rahi ho os se mein irritate ho raha hon..

K:mein chahe jo marzi karon..tumhe kya..

A:per this is my car...

K:to kya...nikaal ker bahar phank do ge mujhe..

Angad stops his car.

A:niklo..

K(clueless):kya?

A:meine kaha bahar niklo..

K:mager..

A:niklo bahar..

Kripa disappointly gets out of his car.

A:aaj ka din tum yehi guzaro...

Angad starts the car and drives.While Kripa hits her leg to a stone near by.Angad while driving remembers that he is making some hatred in Kripa's heart.He has to make love not hatred.He quickly stops the car and start to drive backwards.He pulls down the mirror.

A:chalo under aa jao..

K:kyon tum jao..

A:Kripa zid mat karo chalo aa jao under..

K:theek hai ager tum itna force karte ho to..

Kripa goes and sits in her seat.While Angad drives the car.After some time,they reaches the beach.They both heads out and start to walk holding their shoes and sandles in their hands.They both sits at a rock.

A:Kripa kal Prithvi ke ghar Holi Party hai..tumhe Prithvi ne mujhe baatane ko kaha..

K:oh..

A:to tum aa rahi ho na..

K:haan zaroor..

They both sits there for a while.

K:Angad tum kitne bure ho..

A:kyon meine kya kiya..

K:meine breakfast bhi nahi kiya hai to kya ab lunch bhi nahi khilao ge..

A:oops sorry pehle kyon nahi baataya..

Kripa makes a puppy face.Angad's heart melts.

A:theek hai chalo..pass mein hi aik bohut acha restaurant hai..

They both heads to their car.

To be Continued

Sweetz Gurl 😛
Edited by sweetz_gurl - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
it was a gr8 part!!!!i rly enjoyed it!!!! thanx for the update!! and plz do cont. soon, i can't wait to see wat happens in prithvi's party!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
awwwww so cuteeeee
great jobbb 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39
Great and sweeeeet part!!! Cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#40
GREAT FANFIC!! omg i love ure fanfic..ure AWESOME!!
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