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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 3

PRI:oh yeah Miss Sharma mein ne aap ke addmisson form taiyaar ker diya hai aur bhaij bhi diya hai..u can go and attend all ur classes from Today..Good Luck Miss Sharma..!

K:thank u sir!

PRI:u may go now..

She leaves the office.Kripa didn't know her classes.So she was walking to see if she herself can find it but in vain.Then she saw a girl running from behind Kripa.Kripa turns around and we see Mishti running.

K:Excuse me..

But Mishti goes running in front of her.Kripa again yells.

K:Hey u..!!

Mishti turns around.

M:Yes!r u talking with me..

K:Yes u..please can i ask u something..

Mishti comes running to her.

M:Please jaldi pocho jo bhi pochna hai mein jaldi mein hon...c'mon i m late..

K:woh mein Science Student hon aur mujhe classes ka nahi pata to..

M:Oh don't worry come with me..mein bhi Science student hon..chalo jaldi...

They both runs to where Mishti was going.They reached their class.

Teacher=T

T:Hi Miss Bose...Aaj kya excuse baataye gi aap..

M:woh..woh..

K(interrupts):Sorry Mam woh mein nayi ayi hon to is liye woh mujhe classes baata rahi thi,,

T:its ok..c'mon Mishti go to ur seat..and u girl come here..

Kripa goes to where the Teacher told her.

T:Well please let us know ur name..

K:Kripa Sharma..

T:oh so Kripa Sharma..u r a science student right..

K:yeah..

T:what do u think that what will u do after becoming a doctor..?

K:I want to help those who r poorer who don't even have money for their surgeries...i want to help them who have no day left for their lives..and last but not the least i want to make the people sure that Doctors also have heart and they can also think from their heart not from only brain..

The teacher claps for her as the class.

T:Very good Imagination..I Hope ur all dreams come true and this one too...i hope u will not give me any way to be angry on u...So Kripa here is ur class..go and sit where u want..

K:Thanx..

Kripa looks at the whole class.Then she took a deep breath and moves towards where Mishti's seat was.She sits beside her and the class starts.At the lunch time,Kripa and Mishti became fast friends and they both moves to Canteen.Kripa didn't know that Mishti was Prithvi's Sister.They both take seat at a table.Mishti's eye fell on Prithvi.

M(yells):PRITHVI!!

He Turns around abut couldn't see who was sitting with her as her back was facing him.Angad was also with him.

P:Hey!

A:chal wahi chalte hain..

They both gets up from their table and moves to Mishti's table.

M:s se milo ye hai Kripa..

Kripa turns around to face Prithvi.

K:Prithvi?

P:Kripa..

M:Haan ye hai Prithvi mera bhai tum ise janti ho..

K:yeah ofcourse suba hi to mile the right..

P:yeah..

K:per tumne kabhi baataya nahi ke tumhari behen bhi hai..

P:oops sorry..

K(smiles):its ok..

M:Ao betho tum dono..

K(realizes):dono..Prithvi ke ilawa aur kon hai..

She turns her face to the other way and saw Angad.

K:TUM!

A:TUM!

P:Woh Kripa please ise maaf ker do..u know na ragging to aik aam cheez hai..

K:never!

Angad winks at Prithvi.

A:aray maaf ker do na...waise bhi kon sa bohut bara kaam ker diya hai meine...its a normal thing babes.

He puts her arm on her shoulder.

K(angrily):Apna haath uthao..

A:what?

K:meine kaha apna haath sharafat se utha lo..

A:oh sorry..

He pulls her arm back.In the mean time,he got a call from a friend.He excuses himself and goes to a corner.

A:Hi Josh..kaise ho tum..Aaj college kyon nahi aye..

Then the other person on the line we see its none other than Josh!

J:Sorry..i was not feeling well..

A:and now?

J:yeah much better..

A:then why don't u come to college..

J:R u mad..

A:oh c'mon..tum ne sirf Sir Shukla ki class attend nahi ki hai now c'mon..

J:just look behind..

A:why..

J:c'mon first look..

Angad turns back and is shocked to see Josh standing behind him.

A:tu kabhi nahi sudhrega ga..

He hugs him..

J:same like u..

Both at the same time:RIGHT!

Then they both laugh and head to the table.

P:Hey Josh..

J:Hi..hi Mishti..and Hi Sweetie..

Kripa just looks at him.

Angad whispers something to Josh.

J:oh i see...oh sorry..i thought u was his new girlfriend..

Angad hits his elbow into Josh's stomach.

J:OWWWWWWWWWWW..oops sorry i mean to say Angad's new Girl Friend..don't take to wrong way..

K:its ok..

The bell rings.Kripa and Mishti gets up and was about to leave when--

A:aray suniye to..

Kripa turns around..

A:tumhari Book..

Kripa takes her book back from him and was about to go again.

A:aray rukiye to..

She again stops and looks at him.

A:ur bag..

Kripa takes it and was about to go when her strips got open from the back..

A:aray tehriye to..

Kripa then again stops and turns to him angrily..

K:what do u want..sari cheezen aik satah nahi de sakta kya...

A(makes a puppy face):woh..woh tumhare strips khul gaye..

K(confused):What..

A:woh..aray woh..

He points towards her back.Krips started moving back and fell embarassment in front of him.

A:well if u don't mind then i'll tied them..

Kripa just stops and moves to her way back.He tieds her strips and gives a quick kiss on her cheeks and runs from there.

K:UUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kripa then feel shy and goes to her class.The whoe day went studing and now it was the time to go back to home.Kripa was heading towards her car when Mishti calls her.

M:KRIPAAAAA..

Kripa looks behind.

K:Mishti what happen?

M:woh Kripa..my car is broken down..if u could give me a lift..?

K:oh yeah sure please have a seat...

They both sat in Kripa's car and Kripa drives the car to Prithvi's house as she knows his car way.At the way to Mishti's house,a car comes very fast and yes it was a red beauty of Angad.He comes and start to drive at the level of Kripa's car.Angad pulls down his mirror as Josh was also sitting next to him.Kripa's mirror was also down.

A:uhh..Hi..

K:u..again...

A:oh yeah..i wanna tell u that u r really beautiful..

Kripa just ignores him and start to pull her mirror up.

M:Woh bura nahi hai..

K:kon..

M:ANgad bura nahi hai..he is a nice guy but aik bohut buri adat hai ke woh larkiyon ke sath flirter hai..

K:Its ok..mein use dekhte hi samajh gayi thi...Bigara hua hai bas..

M:yeah u r right..

They both laugh at this.

To Be Continued.


Sweetz Gurl
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Posted: 19 years ago
#22
it was mindblowing wow plz continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
#23
great part!! that was awesome! continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#24
I just read ur fan fic it is great
Kashish 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#25
i loved the last few dialogues b/w mishti n kripa, they reflected so much maturity!!!rly impressive!!!
n thanks for complimenting me on my predictions!!!!!!!
next prediction: angad tries to get closer to kripa and somewhat succeeds.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 😆 greatttttt jobbbbb
👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Great part! i luv the way angad flirts with kripa! its halarious and cute!!! Cont. soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 4


M:ANgad bura nahi hai..he is a nice guy but aik bohut buri adat hai ke woh larkiyon ke sath flirter hai..

K:Its ok..mein use dekhte hi samajh gayi thi...Bigara hua hai bas..

M:yeah u r right..

They both laugh at this.The signal turns red and Angad's and Kripa's car zooms.They both start racing with each other.Sometime Kripa's car go ahead and sometimes Angad's.At last Kripa over take her car and zooms from there.Angad was shocked that how come this idea didn't hit him.

A(winks at Josh):Smart Girl!

J:Pagal ho gaya hai kya..

A(mumbering):lagta to yehi hai..

J:What?

A:huh..please let me drive the car in peace.

At Kripa's sight,They finally reached Mishti's place and they says their goodbyes to each other.Then Kripa leaves to her house.When She reached her house,she head inside and sees her mother standing doing some work.Kripa runs to her and hugs her from behind.

G:Aray aa gayi tu..kaisa raha pehla din..

K:bohut acha..

G:jao fresh ho jao mein tumhare liye khana lagati hon..

K:no mom mann nahi hai...i m really tired..

G:theek hai..

Kripa kisses her mother on her cheek and leaves to her room.She enters her room and throws herself on the bed tiredly from the morning.

At Khanna House,we see Angad walking to his rom whistling.He enters his room and throws her yellow jacket on bed and sits on his bed.He makes a call on his cell to Prithvi.

A:Hey Prithvi..

P:yes Angad..

A:yaar woh..Kripa ko roses pasand hain na?

P:haan..

A:aur ose aik larke mein kya pasand hai..

P:Someone Special...woh chahti hai ke jis se woh pyaar kare os se kahi zayada koi os se pyaar kare...

A:And?

P:aisa larka hona chahiye jo os ki feelings ko samjhe na ke khele..

A:hey tana mat maro..

P:to kya karon Angad...mujhe ghar aa ker realize hua ke ye sab galat hai mein apni dost ke sath galat ker raha hon..

A:Hey c'mon hum dono mein deal hua tha ke hum os ki feelings ko ich mein nahi laye ge..

P:Per ye tumhara natak kab tak chalne wala hai..

A:Prithvi baataya to tha..Seven dayz..Only Seven dayz..

P:it will be only for u but not for others..

A:tu meri side per hai ya kisi aur ki..

P:ofcourse teri per ager tu galat hai to..

A:theek hai mein samajh gaya...chalo mein ab phone rakhta hon..meri Sunaina ke sath date hai..

P:tu kabhi nahi sudhrega..

Saying this they both put the phone off.Then we see Kripa layng on her bed sleeping peacefully ,Angad on the other hand is on date with Sunaina.


Day One!!!

Next Morning,Kripa was getting ready.She was wearing a white colour salwar kameez with red flowers on it.She slip some bangles in her hand and a small silver pendant which was hided with her dupatta.She quickly goes to her car and drove to the college.

At College,when she entered the main gate.She saw Angad standing far away from her but was starring at her.She continued walking as Angad picked up the Roses from the table and walked towards her.Angad was wearing a hig neck sweater which was fitted with his body.Angad came close to her while Kripa kept walking beside him.Angad holds her dupatta to stop her.

K(shockeD):ye..ye kya bathameezi hai..

A:woh..tumhe rukne ke liye..

ANgad leave her dupatta.

A:well these flowers for u...

K:Well jahan tak mujhe pata hai na hi aaj valentine hai na hi rose day aur na hi koi khas ocassion to ye flowers kis liye..

A:tum jab jab mere samne ati ho woh din mere liye koi ocassion se kam nahi hota..

Kripa's heart skipped when she heard those words from him.Kripa takes the flowers from him trying not to smile.She was about to go when Angad again holds her dupatta to stop her but this time Kripa doesn't turned to face him.

A:aik baat to baatana bhool hi gaya..

He comes close to her ear and whispers.

A(in a low voice):u r looking extremely beautiful..

Kripa feels shy but tried to not to.

A:Aur hum dono ki pasand kitni milti hai na...tumhe bhi white pasand hai mujhe bhi..

ANgad leaves her dupatta and Kripa quickly start walking from there.Angad also didn't know what he said to Kripa as according to his plan he was going to say something else but said something else.

When the college time finishes,Kripa was heading towards her car when someone taps Kripa's shoulder.Kripa turns around to Angad there.

K:tum?

A:haan kyon koi aur lag raha hon kya..

K:nahi woh..

A:ssssssshhhhhhhh...mein tum se kuch aur kehne aya hon...i think tum achi larki ho...aur mein bhi bura nahi hon bas woh aik adat u know what i mean but its a normal thing..college mein to har koi aisa karta hai hi...

K:to?

A:can't we be friends..

K:Sure...

They both shake hands.

K:well i have to go..bye

A:wait..

K:yeah..

A:woh tum mera cell no. to le lo afterall now we are friends..

K:oh sure..

They both exchange their cell numbers.

K:ok so bye..

A:bye.

Kripa leaves as Angd thinks why is he doing this with her.She is such a sincere girl.But then he shook off this thought from his mind and goes to his home.Kripa enters her home smiling and without saying to someone anything she leaves to her room.she kept smiling while she changes into other comfy clothes.Just then her smile fades away.

To be Continued

Sweetz Gurl
Edited by sweetz_gurl - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Aww such a lovley part cont soon!!!!!!!! 😳 n i bet u Angad will realize his feeling 4 krips soon!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: me_iq

Aww such a lovley part cont soon!!!!!!!! 😳 n i bet u Angad will realize his feeling 4 krips soon!!!!!

hey don't bet me...because i myself know😆but whats new in this😆in every fanfics Angad alwasy realize his love for Kripa😆

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