Dhadkan-Garv-kumud - Page 9

Part-23...Kusum:Kumud looks down. Kusum:Garv had a severe accident after we lost Tia.He was paralysed 4 many yrs.
K is shocked:then?now?
Ku:now he has recovered from it.
K is relieved. Ku:his friend's wife…1 widow is living there 2 look after him.charu
K is shocked:charu?
K remembers meeting akshat-charu in the holi party.K thinks:Akshat is dead?poor guy

K:why did u kill kshitij?
Tia starts crying. K:was'nt he loving?
T:yes.but his luv was disgusting.he was too possessive.he cud'nt even stand me seeing dadi-dada.he did'nt even tolerate saakshi dadi's affection 2wards me.he hated me having friends.bcoz he thot that wil make him lose me.so I did'nt hav friends at all.i was always alone.my only relief was garv papa.i did'nt hav any connection with papa 4 yrs.later I got papa's letter.i came 2 no about his accident,paralyses & recovery. i told him 2 send letters only 2 college.thus I was relieved with his leters I got once in a while.later….dad's friend & his son the rock star Ranveer came 2 our house while dad was'nt there.i was seeing ranveer 4 the 1st time.he sang.that time dad came & shouted at them.he threw them away.dad's friend tolerated it as he respects dad a lot & he had an inferiority complex as he's from a middleclass family.i felt sad.so I went 2 ranveer's house.

Tia tells Ranveer:sorry 4 my dad's behaviour.
R:I tolerated ur dad's behaviour only 4 my dad.
R was very angry..R:I pty u 4 living with such a horrible dad.
T felt sad:plz tell that u 4gave us
R:ok,I 4giv u only bcoz u r a nice girl.
T smiles.but R was serious.later when T went,R smiles.

Kumud:thus u both fell in luv?
T:no,we came really gud friends.later we started luving each other.but as I scared dad was against it.he even sent ppl 2 kill ranveer.luckily he got escaped.i cud'nt tolerate it.later saakshi dadi became really sick.b4 dying,she told me 2 truths….my mom was forced 2 b in the mental asylum bcoz of dad & garv papa paralyisis is caused by the accident created by the lorry driver who was sent by dad.
K is shocked. Tia cries:I cud'nt tolerate anymore.i felt that I'm in a hell.i was living there with heavy fear.dad tried 2 lock me inside a room 4 days.e did'nt bother about my sufferings.he was that selfish.i tried 2 escape from that house.but dad caught me.

Tia:leave me dad.i hate u.i luv only garv papa who adopted me.i'm going there
Ks:I won't allow u 2 b with garv;who snatched my beloved & daughter.
T:beloved?my mom was never urs.she was always my papa's.

T:he tried forcefully 2 push me inside a room.in that struggle, I pushed him.his head hit the wall & he fell dead.
T keeps crying.K sheds tears:that devil made my daughter suffer so much..

The police officer who is in charge of this case is Omkar nath.Ranveer goes 2 see him:sir,I want 2 reveal a truth that I'm the killer of Kshitij.

its great I think to save Tia Ranveer goes to the poice station and says that he murdered Kshitij 😊

Part-24....omkar:then Tia?
Ranveer:she is innocent.
O:who r u?u r the rockstar Ranveer.rite?why shud u kill kshitij.cant u liv with music?I think u don't need 2 kill a rich man 4the money 2 liv.then why did u kill?do u no tia & kshitij personally?
R:yes.i'm kshitij uncle's friend's son.
O:ok,who is Tia 2 u?
R:I luv her
O:1 way luv or she too loves u?
R:we both luvd each other
O:does'nt it mean that u r lying 2 me 2 save ur beloved ?
R:no,I'm telling the truth.i only killed him.
O:ok,now u go.we'l decide who the killer is
R:plz sir,put me in jail
O shouts:but u just go,man
R goes.

Another police:sir,according 2 the postmortam report,the murder happened at 1am.but tia says it happened at 12.it can mean that ranveer had cum at 1 to kill kshitij
O:but why? He:kshitij is supposed 2b stubborn.he might've stood against their marrIAGE.SO HE KILLED HIM.in this age,which lover is going 2 take such a big blame on him 4 his gf?
O:ya,but can a stubborn young killer admit his crime so easily?

Ranveer's dad meets Tia:Ranveer is mad about u.bcoz of that he told the police that he is the real killer.i no that he's not the killer.he lied 2 save u.plz don't put him in the jail.i beg u
He cries.Tia weeps:I did'nt no about it uncle.
Tia calls up Ranveer:why did u lie 2 the police that u killed dad.is it 4 me?why don't u think about ur dad who loves u so much.what'l b his condition if u go 2 jail?
R becomes upset & he cuts the ph.

Omkar Nath gets a spectacles from kshiij's house.P calls Abhay 2 the police station 2 no whether its his'.Kusum cries bcoz that shows that the police suspects him. A:its not mine.
P:but I doubt whether u killed kshitij as he has insulted u many times 4 seeing tia.
A:noooooo

Tia tells kumud:why don't we go 2 see garv papa?
K:no,u go.
T:don't u feel like seeing him?
K:but I cant face him
T:but papa wants 2 meet u eagerly.i no that
K's eyes r full of tears.
Tia-kumud go 2 garv's house.Tia enters the house.Esha cums:who r u?
T:dadi,I'm tia E is surprised:tia? E hugs her. T:there is another person too with me.
K cums. E looks carefully.she's surprised:kumud?
E hugs K. T:where is papa? E cries.

WHY IS ESHA CRYING?

its great I think it could be that Garv killed Kshitij and the police have took him so thats why Esha is crying 😊

oh wow!! wat a mystery!!! seriously, even i can't predict now about who is the real killer!!! do cont. soon, that was sum fantastic work!!!!

Part-25...Esha:Garv fainted last week.since 1 week,he is unconcious.charu is there in the hospital.i came here 2 take certain things 2 the hospital.
Kumud-Tia r shocked.they cry.they go 2 the hospital.K sees charu.C smiles:kumud….
Dr cums:there is a happy news,garv is out of danger
All r happy.Esha:when kumud came,garv became ok.that's the effect of true luv
K's eyes rose.T smiles. T:Dr,can we see him?
Dr:only 1 person now.
T:mama,u go
K:no,u go T:this time,u must go E:tia is true.kumud has 2 go now
K goes.K sits near G who is sleeping.K looks at him.She remembers their earlier days.song:dil ne{dhadkan}.K 's tears fall on G.K wipes her tears & go out.
K:Tia,we'll go Charu:kumud,bcoz of my presense u shud'nt go.after akshat went garv mercy by giving me shelter. Nothing else.ur position in Garv's heart is the same.i've never tried 2 get it.i'm going 2 another place.not bcoz of ur arrival.i'd decided it earlier.i waited till now,bcoz of garv's health.now he's ok.i can go.my son wil b waiting 4 me.
T smiles. K's eyes r full of tears.she goes.T goes after her.

Garv opens his eyes.E smiles with tears:Garv beta,u r ok now?
G:yes.i dunno why I felt that kumud is near me
E smiles:u r right garv.kumud had cum 2 see u
G is surprised:what?really?
E:yes,tia also came with her
G smiles. E:kumud escaped from the mental asylum.Tia has grown up & looks pretty.
G:tia had sent me her photos.but kumud…I miss her a lot.
E:kumud wil b back 2 ur life.
G smiles.

Garv is discharged.Charu goes & stays in her son's house.
G is sitting & dreaming. E:what r u dreaming?
G:I'm thinking about our future life with kumud & tia.they'l b always with me
E becomes upset:kumud wil b there with u.but tia…
G:but why?tell me mama. E's eyes r full of tears:Tia is going 2 get punishment from the court.she killed her dad kshitij
G is shocked:no!

OMkar calls Abhay,kusum,kumud,Tia,Ranveer 2 the station. O:sumhow we felt that Tia is not the real killer eventho she admitted that she's the killer. Postmortam report strengthened our belief. we suspeacted many ppl including Ranveer,abhay..now I'm going 2 reveal the who the killer is.
All r eager 2 no who the real killer is.

its gr8 i think ranveer has killed shitish continue soon

omg!! who's the killer?? who's the killer??? i rly wanna know!!! cont. soon n that was amazing!!! u r a rly brilliant writer!!!! 👏 👏

Part-26....OMkar:the real killer is…
Suddenly Garv cums:I'm the killer of kshitij
Tia:no!papa is lying 2 save me.i killed him.
Kumud –garv see each other.they r very emotional. G:the specs got from kshitij's house is mine.
O:why did u kill kshitij?
G:he's my enemy.he tortured my kumud.he tried 2 make her mad.he put my poor kumud in mental hospital eventho she was'nt mad.so I decided 2 kill him.but I cud'nt kill him.when I lost kumud & tia,I was fed up of life.The accident & its aftereffects destroyed me completely.the only relief was tia's letters.Recently I got tia's letter.
"Dear papa,I'm writing thi letter 2 tell u a big truth that I'm melting into nothing bcoz of heavy pain.why did u giv me 2 dad?u cud've brought me up.bcoz of the devil who came b4 me as my dad,I can't liv peacefully.i'vent felt happiness since I got separated from my papa & mama.My dad is killing me inch by inch.i'vent felt secure here.bcoz of dad only u had a big accident that made u paralysed.I realised that he only put mama into the mental asylum tho she was perfectly alright.He is torturing me like anything.i cant breath in this hell.so I've only option b4 me ie suicide.u won't b able 2 see me or my letter as I'm going 2 die.i'm fed up of this life.Luv urs only daughter Tia.

G:I cud'nt tolerate it.i went there during nite.i saw the doors open.i got inside & saw kshitij lying down.he became conscious.he became so angry that he came 2 attack me.

G escapes from his attack. G:u destroyed kumud's & Tia's life.i can't allow u 2 liv anymore.otherwise,tIa won't get a gud life at all.
G:I hit his head on the wall & thus he died.i was very happy with what I did as it was 4 tia.i was planning 2 inform this 2 the police.but b4 that I fainted.then I became conscious only 2 days back.I never new that bcoz of my deed,my daughter was getting punished.
Kumud-tia cry. T hugs G:papa,u did all these 4 me.

Garv gets arrested.After 5yrs,he gets released from the jail.He was surprised 2 see Tia there with Ranveer & a small baby. T:papa,we got married.this is our baby.His name is Gaku.Garv papa's Ga & kumud mama's Ku.Gaku…this is ur dada.
G smiles.G takes him & hugs.They go near the car.G was surprised 2 see K there.K:garv!
K falls on his chest.G hugs her. G:how long I was waiting 4 this moment
K:me too Ranveer:let them hav a romantic moment peacefully.we'll stand sumwhere else.
Tia-Ranveer smile.They go.G-K r alone & they share romantic moments.

THE END

wow!!! a brilliant ending!!! really worth applauding 👏 👏 👏 !!! i hope u will start a new fanfic soon,as i love this one!!!!!!