Dhadkan-Garv-kumud - Page 2

Garv is such a sweeeeeeeeeeetheart, yea like kitty said we gotta have some romantic scene. Jasmine this ff is fab. good work!

awww...ur fanfic is soo cute...plzz continue soon...lol...yah garv is very sweet..he cares 4 her soo much...plzz continue sooonnnn 👏 .....r they enuff???

awww...ur fanfic is soo cute...plzz continue soon...lol...yah garv is very sweet..he cares 4 her soo much...plzz continue sooonnnn 👏 .....r they enuff lol 😆 😆 ???

Part-5....Kumud:can I sleep with my mom ?
Garv:kumud..hum aapke hain kaun?
K:husband
G:r u sure? K:u tied mangalsuthra around my neck.u put sindoor on my maang.
G:just bcoz of that I became ur husband?
K:that's enuff no?no1 wil tell that u r not my husband.
G:infront of public we r a cuple.but b4 us…
K turns back as she felt it unbearable.
G:as u wish u go with ur mom.
K's eyes rose.

K goes near kusum:mama,2nite I'm going 2 sleep with u.i really missed u all these days.
Ku smiles.

The next day at a park.Garv with worries looks at K.
G:kumud,don't u luv me?
K felt it unbearable.she kept silent. G:plz don't avoid me.
K's eyes rose. He sings:dil ne..{dhadkan}.he dreams K also singing it with him.K:tum bhi mujse pyar karlo..
G:u don't hav 2 tell me 2 luv u.i luv u kumud.
G hugs her.within a second he realses that it was a dream.K sees this with pity.G wipes his tears.

Garv-kumud r attending a pooja.Esha tells them:pray 2 god that by next yr there wil b a baby with u.
G-K's face become dull.
G:whats this mama?we just started enjoying our married life & why r u in a hurry 2 hav a grandchild.its oldfashion2 hav kids immediately.now cuples prefer kids only after sum yrs.
E:garv,don't b silly.
G goes with a sad face.K goes inside:u don't like kids?
G:ya I like.
G thinks:I want 2 b a papa.how can I tell u that I lied 2 mama bcoz I did'nt want 2 make u upset.
K thinks:did he talk like that 4 hiding his worries from me?

Garv,kumud r traveling in the car during nite.A cuple of robbers cum infront of them.

really nice...plzz continue soon 👏 👏

Part-6...The robbers make them get out of the car.They ask 4 their ornaments,watch etc.They giv everything.Then those guys:who's this superb model sab…?gf or…
Garv becomes angry.Kumud gets scared.she goes closer 2 G creaming:Garv!
When they try 2 touch her,G shouts at them & beats.
G:how dare u try 2 misbehave with my wife?if u hurt her,I'll kill u all.
A robber:whats going 2 happen if ur wife is hurt?
G:if sumthing bad is happening 2 ur life,wil u b able 2 liv?no!my wife is my life & if she's hurt,how can I liv?
K is shocked.
1 robber:u gave everything including the precious ornaments.then why r u hesitsting 2 giv ur wife?
G beats him:wil any1 giv their life 2 sum1?
The robbers r speechless.They go.K is upset. G:get inside the car kumud.nothing wil happen 2 u when I'm alive.so don't get scared.K gets inside the car.her mind is full of the words G told the robbers.K smiles at G.G does'nt see it.
That nite.K with a smile cums 2 the room.Her face becomes dull seeing G sleeping. K thinks:why do I become dim?whats happening 2 me?
K dreams of her with G.song:I'm in luv…{Dhadkan}

When K gets up from the bed,she does'nt see G .she looks on 4 sides.he sees the clock. K was shocked:10 0' clock?Oh!
Esha cums:gud morning kumud.
K:I'm sorry mummiji.i'm late.
E:its ok. K:where is garv? E:he went 2 office.i thot of calling u b4 he went.but he did'nt want me 2 do that as he wanted u 2 hav a gud sleep.
K smiles. E:2day is garv's b'day. K:really? &nb sp;E:ya.but we don't celebrate like that. K:but we must celebrate it.its his 1st b'day with me. E smiles:Garv is lucky 2 hav a wife like u. K smiles.
evening…K becomes upset:Garv did'nt reach yet..

K goes 2 the office.Gets inside Garv's room.G was surprised 2 see K there:kumud!
K:why r u so late 2day? U r still in the office?u no whats happening at home now?
G:whats happening?is everything ok?u look tensed
K:now itself we've 2 go home.otherwise it'l b a problem

awww...so cute....yayy kumud is falling in luv with him!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....plzzz continue soon... 👏 👏 👏

it was a rly good part!!! man, i loved Garv's lines n hope kumud falls for him too!!!!!!!!

i just caught up!
your fanfic rocks!
kumud is falling for garv yay!!
cont soon!
cant wait fro the next part!

part-7...Garv:ya,now itself we'll go home.
G-kumud reach home.they get inside the house.G was surprised 2 see a big party there. G looks at K with wonder:this…
K smiles:happy b'day garv. G smiles. Esha:how is the decoration?everything is done by kumud.
G smiles:thanku kumud.
G cuts the b'day cake.He gives the piece 2 E.E puts a piece into G's mouth.G looks at K.He wants 2 giv a piece 2 K.but as he's tensed whether she'l like it,his hand shivers.
K tells in her mind:won't u giv me a lovly piece Garv?its natural that he hesitates 2 giv.its bcoz of my earlier behaviour 2wards him.
E:garv,giv a piece 2 kumud..
G was tensed.he looks at K.K smiles.G keeps a piece on her hand. K:thanks garv

K:I wud like 2 sing a song 4 my husband in this happy occasion.
G was surprised. K goes near her:seene mein dil{koi aapsa}.

That nite both of them in their room. G:I dunno how thank u 4 giving me a surprise grand b'th day party.i'vent had such a nice party in my life.
K smiles. G:r u not feeling sleepy?
K says in her mind:when we r in luv,we won't b able 2 sleep.
K:I'm not sleepy
G:ok..i feel sleepy.so gudnite
G goes 2 sleep.K becomes dull. K thinks:garv still thinks that I'm not happy with him.that's why he's keeping a distance.how can I reveal my luv 4 him?

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