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Posted: 13 years ago
5 days to gooo
yaar abi bhi 5 din baki hai 25 koa cant wait jb sai sunna hai 25 koa story post hu rahi hai dont u think calender kch zyada he slow hu gaya hai by god din guzar he nai raha hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
5 Days To GOOO =) 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arzzo

5 days to gooo

yaar abi bhi 5 din baki hai 25 koa cant wait jb sai sunna hai 25 koa story post hu rahi hai dont u think calender kch zyada he slow hu gaya hai by god din guzar he nai raha hai



Calender Slow...??😆 Aur hamare side toh time ka pata hi nahin chal raha...?? Anyway,I am back... SWATi n SONiA will be also come very soon... Don't worry 25th ko kisi bhi tarah post kar denge.😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
4 Days To GOOO 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..

5 Days To GOOO =) 😳



Oh God 'Reminder Countdown' !!😲 U R just like Alarm Clock for us...😆 This count down build-up a very high pressure😳😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SIZZZLER



Calender Slow...??😆 Aur hamare side toh time ka pata hi nahin chal raha...?? Anyway,I am back... SWATi n SONiA will be also come very soon... Don't worry 25th ko kisi bhi tarah post kar denge.😳

hmm i understand tm loago koa update post karni hai tu tm loago kah liya tu time fast he hu gha per hm readers koa tu read karna hai nah tu hamara liya tu tym aur date dono slow hu gaya hai 😃😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SIZZZLER



Oh God 'Reminder Countdown' !!😲 U R just like Alarm Clock for us...😆 This count down build-up a very high pressure😳😆


Hahaa, I Can't Wait For Those 8 Parts =) 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi
i havent read the ff
the characters are great but as it is on the 3rd link
i need time to read the whole
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

i havent read the ff
the characters are great but as it is on the 3rd link
i need time to read the whole


Do Read It ;) 🤗 You Will Get Addicted 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: gunurlove

Hello S3 and Joseph...Again Sorry for late comment..but guys Seriously it was quite long update and i required quite free time to comment on this update...😊
First of All big big Congratulation for 3rd thread..its a Great victory haannn...ok now come to the update it was the one of fav part...i loved it alottt...u know why..bcoz after sooo many days there were Sajan's scenes in it na...😉😳
starting with Monish-Gunjan scene ..all were Superbly written...Specially Gunjan's thought and her feelings...though Monish behavior was very well and frankly with her..but still she felt uncomfortable and nervous...and still missing Samrat and her worked experience in his office...
all these thoughts were very nice..infact whole scene...😳
then Elevator scene when Gunjan sensed his Perfume's smell..(oh She still remember that he used the same perfume).so sweeet .😳..without a doubt this time Gunjan stole the whole update...i always liked Samrat's thoughts and his feelings dialogues alot...but this time Gunjan's lines were amazing...beginning with all her thinking that she thought in elevator till end...👏.
Samrat scene was Wonderful...in "C" part his whole scene was Fabulouse..i loved that Manufacture only two Mobile sets of new SPL Model😍..awww one for Samrat.n one for Gunjan..as a gift or as a compensation..whatever..but i was thinkign the same like Samrat. whether she'll accept it..😕.or not...dont think so..she'll accept so easily...she is a very self-respect oriented girl...see Samrat was also Confuse na...all the lines from "No...I mean ...I should say 'Sorry' to her... lekin... phir bhi...?? Kya woh khud realize nahin kar sakti ki, mujhe bhi bura laga hai...
to warna,woh kabhi nahin aayegi... Aur ...main usse jaane bhi toh nahin de sakta.."
were Superb... 👏👏👏
and all others thoughts after that also Fantastic...like he's planning to go to her home to say Sorry n etc etc.and yup one line which i loved the most was...
when he thought abt Monish and his Views regarding him as Gunjan's family friend..ohhh it was so cute comment..i burst out laughed suddenly when i read this.."Family Friend' !! 'Family Friend' , my foot...!! Khud ki family ka pata nahin... others ki Family ka friend bana ghoom raha hai... "😆😃...that was so sweet line... and the next few lines were also mind blowing...poor Sammy ..was so possessive for his Gunjan...😳
Conference Hall scene was Very well written...i felt so bad when he missed her beside him on the table.....and when he saw her and his reaction after seeing her were sooo beautifull...you always completely justified with each n every situation..as i always say...he was assuming to be her there for him...but when he realized that she was not there for him or behalf of his company.his depressed and upset condition made me really sad for him...but mistake was all his..so ab "Bhugtay khud hi."..
NOW NEXT PARTS Comments...i e 3 to onward...
Finally Sajan's Scenes after so long...i waited for them alottt...now finally we got this...Starting with Samrat's jealousy when he looked Gunjan and Monish so Close on table...he was fuming with anger and i was enjoying this scene alot...too much Fabulous scene...😳,,he broke Glass.. OH GOD itnaa ghussa... and OUR poor innocent Doll again started fighting with her emotions n cried...But her Reaction was Awesomely written..her thoughts , emotion everything...i told u na This Time Gunjan stole the story...(but wait..abi aagey aega best part of this story...n credit goes to all Gunjan and to u 2 S3 offcourse). 😉
U know u write in such natural or realistic way..that for a moment i felt my breath stop when Samrat was standing exactly behind her..when she ignored his msg.... oh that was so Deadly scene...afterall Samrat is Samrat or wo apni baat manwa k hi rehta he na...this whole part was also Mind blowing...👏👏
ok now came my Most fav part...i'll writing it in bold..just for showing u how much i LOVED this SCENE.Sajan scene in Elevator and Innocent chui mui , Shy , soft spoken , Sweet Gunjan Finally spoke her heart out infront of her Ex-BOSS...😳
what would i say guys..it was Just TOO GUD and stunning scene..it made me spell bound...ek to Gunjan ka itna sb kch bolna..wese kbi to ye sb bolna hi tha na us ne...2ndly Selection of Dialogues were Superb...Awesome work..in such intense situation u always maintained the intensity of situation...with suitable dialogues which exactly depict the inner most feelings of respective person...👏
how easily Samrat said to hr mene nai nikala tha tumhe..or mene kya kia he etc etc...abi b Gunjan ko blame kar rha he..hadd hi ho gai..😡...but this time Gunjan broke all the barriers of her patience...n i LOVED this Gunjan Alot...LOVELy lines when she said 'apko lgta he me peson k lye kch b kar skti hun. KYA kia he mene peson k lye..."all these lines and all lines..such like..." apko ye b lgta he me apko phansane ki koshish kar rai thi kya kia tha mene apko phansane k lye"
on this statement isimply melted like a melted ice cream guys...itnaaa Pyaar aya mujhe Gunjan pe is line k lye.. Lekin uss raat... Uss raat 'Sorry' kehne ke baad... Maine 1 baat jaan li...woh yeh ki, 'Sorry' kehne ke liye zaroori nahin ki aapne galti ki ho... agar aap majboor hain... toh bhi aapko 'Sorry' kehna aana chahiye... 'Sorry' for everthing.."
Incredible Scene...totally Awesome..loved it to the core...👏❤️👍🏼
What an Emotional and Touchy scene..after listening so much Samrat again spoke to her with much attitude..but Extreamly happy that again somewhere Gunjan found Possessivness, care i n his tone.😉😳..wo Get well soon ki line b bht great thi...hm now he hez starting to black mail her..wowww .in this matter im totally with Samrat..i want Gunjan in his office too..infact all of us..Poor Gunjan again caught in dilemma...😳
this part was tremendous no words to describe...👏

then came Rahul..after so many Episode finally Rahul b nazar aya...these days my 6th sense is working very fast...u know before reading that part i was thinking that Rahul had had also one kind of mistake..i think..once u had mentioned na..or lo..next part me hi aa gai...attending press conference in so much Gud mood..was so hillariouse scene.😆...very intersting scene it was...hmmm to Alisha is that girl na..wo mistake wali..or Gunjan b ab tk bhool gai hogi ..aese hi kch bola tha na Rahul ne...guys plzz now u update next part veryyy soon...want to read more n more Sajan scene and all..i have commented too much late...that i was thinking k itne me to new part ready ho k ajae..so guys now plzzz update veryyy soon..thanks for the pm...



Thank U RiJA for your 'Detail' comment on the last update of the 2nd thread😳. and it is ok, do take your time to comment.V can wait to read any comment posted by our readers. Thank you for your wishes on the new thread.😊


If the SaJan scenes in this update made U happy, then the new update that V will be posting soon will definitely keep you in high spirits.😳 Don't worry...ab back to back SaJan scenes hi hain😳 Good or Bad..decide after reading😆😳

GUNJAN knows what her heart wants, her mind seconds that. So it is but obvious that she feels safe with that one person who her heart and mind, both have accepted. She senses him around. Thank U for liking the lines that depict GUNJAN's thought process.

Slowly, but surely, SAMRAT is accepting GUNJAN's importance in his life. And so not openly, but subtly, with small things that matter, he is going to move closer to her. He is not used to be all this lovey-dovey... so he often wonders, if his behavior is correct.

SAMRAT is also very innocent at heart. His innocence hidden behind that rude person, that he wants the world to see for obvious reasons, his revenge. But it is from lines like this, that his innocence is seen. Add to that, his possessiveness for GUNJAN is also increasing...He loves GUNJAN but,he can't accept his feelings,in front of her...He don't know how to express his feelings...and second side GUNJAN...she is so much soft spoken n introvert...so,woh toh kuchh kehne se rahi...They both are totally opposite from each other... and this unique thing is main USP of this Love Story.

That he has realized his mistakes and is now willing to go to any lengths to rectify those,is very evident in the 'Conference Hall' scene. He would love to erase whatever had happened, but unfortunately, that cannot happen. So when he does realize that GUNJAN is not here for him, he is upset.But,he is SAMRAT...He can't take-up this situation so easily...This anger is showing his love for her...V'll be continue this scene in next part also...😳.

Thanx for liking the 'Conference-Hall' n 'especially 'Elevator' part😳.It was tough for us B'coz,that SaJan scene was coming after a long time [except meeting in MONiSH's office] and V know,readers high expectations😳...but,main point was..this is really important sequence...that scene is base of some next scenes.

Thanx for appreciating Dio. parts of GUNJAN...Yes,1st time she broke her silence...b'coz,she was deeply hurt with SAMRAT's behavior.That whole seq. was very important for explain, view of a girl...A girl who wants to maintain her self-respect n her dignity with full of manner way. Actually,now SAMRAT understand her nature very-well...he knows her weak points also...so,tried to black-mail...and poor GUNJAN...she is confused,scared n worried after listening his threat. In next part...her problem would B more increase when, MONiSH'll B know all things.

V really loved to write RAHUL's part...he is the only one light character of this story so,V always try to maintain his 'GR8 sense of humor' in his lines. Yes, ALiSHA is that girl...now,RAHUL how to handle this situation...iske liye thoda wait karna hoga...😳B'coz V'll B write one separate part for past incident
[Related to RAHUL-GUNJAN-ALiSHA]

V are really trying hard to post new part on exact schedule time {i.e,25th Dec.11}...😊 See,Our 'Alarm-Clock' is on😳😆.

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