MG FF:DISTANCE BRINGS US CLOSER (1-23) parts - Page 9

hello friends thanks a lot for ur encouragement. Now the story is taking a long leap almost geet 18 n maan 22. Both past n present will be going simultameously. From next update maneet moments will start.

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chapter 5

A LONG LEAP:

Maan n sudha di helped geet in her studies. That was very tought time for them to make her concentrate on studies coz she is very ziddi. At some times she use to get angry but maan is also very big ziddi than her. But as the time passes she too understood n all were very happy. After that day vijaya mom never became angry on her except for few things like her pranks, teasing session. She was like glow of the house. N geet love to siblings but she dont have n treats sudha di as her own sister.

Slowly their(maan n geet) friendship their bond became very strong n started understanding each other about their likes, dislikes, aims n what not. As years passed they bacame very best friends n all the other family members r very happy seeing their bond. Karthik too became a very good friend of geet. They both used to play pranks on maan. Their life was so happy. N geet too improved a lot in her studies. Maan n karthik s bond also became very strong. He use to take care of all their needs. Elders r proud of him that he understood them very well. All the 3 enjoying their life with each other. They became more comfortable with each other.

Due to business rishab decided to move to delhi n establish KHURANA TECHNOLOGIES there. So khuranas shifted to delhi it was worst part of their life for maan, geet n karthik. But they use to talk on phone daily but couldnt meet. After 1 year anand too joined in KT. They both became partners. N after one looong year again they r together.

In the school, adi is maan s best buddy since they shifted to delhi both r same school. Adi is little tensed types. Even pooja n rishab also likes adi very much. He is so simple n tries to help other in his possible ways. He is from a poor family so studying on a scholarship at the same time enjoys his life to the core. Adi after completion of his 10^th class started doing part time job inorder to help his family to little extent n also for his basic needs. Due to his simplicity maan n adi became best buddies rather than others who are after his name n money.

After completion of 12^th class maan decided to go for engineering n adi took other field in the same uni. So they both meet up daily n talk about all the matters. Now maan is in final year of engineering in ***** university. He is a very brilliant studnt n topper of the batch. All the girls drool over him n wants to be his girl friend. But our maan is maan never cares for all these matters. Maan is the favorite student for all the lecturers. Maan is very much interested in playing basker ball n his team is selected for inter college basket ball finals.

Geet n karthiik s best friend in school is shanti. These 3 r very close friends. N shanti treats maan as his own brother n calls him as maan bhai. She is active, talkitive n carefree type of girl. Maan also likes her very much. Every year she ties raksha bandhan to maan. Geet n shanti r partners in crime. But all loved them very much.

These 3(geet, karthik n shanti) completed their 12^th class n geet decided to go for engineering where as karthik decided to do MBBS n shanti decided to go for architecture. Here geet also joined in the same uni as of maan.

Geet s cousin swetha who stays in hoshiyarpur came to delhi for higher education n took admission in same college of geet. She decided to stay in hostel. She is also friendly with all but jealous of geet. As maan n geet r so close that she is not able to tolerate. She is interested in maan tries to be close to him but maan always ignores her. She loves her brother arjun a lot. Arjun is a year elder than maan. N he is an architech working for some company in bombay.

All r very happy in their life n its geet first day in college. N she is very confident. She wants to achieve something in her life n make all proud of her.

Present:

Suddenly maan comes of his memories by the sound of alarm. Its already 4 in the mrng n he have to leave for airport. So he kept those photos in the cupboard n went for shower.

On the other hand geet also comes out of her past memories n had tears flowing on her cheeks.

G: mama, papa, mom, dad, di, maan n chinna how r u all. I am missing u a lot. Once u all r my life but now I dont know whether I will meet u in my life or not. Maan always u use to tell me na that we should not depend on others n today as u wished I am successful in my career. But u r not with me to share my success, my happiness. I am feeling so lonely maan kabhi kabhi mann karta hain ki tumahre paas aajao n to be in ur arms forever meri aakhri saans tak. Kya eh kabhi ho sakta hain? kya hum kabhi mil sakte hain? Kya hum pehle jaise jee sakte hain? Kyun babajee kya kiya maine muje itni badi sazaa kyun diya aapne?

Maan its like hell for me without seeing u, without talking to u. its suffocating. I want to meet u n tell u what happened 2 years back. But muje darr hain maan ki meri wajah se wo insaan tum logo ko takleef pahunche. Main apni parivaar ko dard nahi de sakti. Because of me dad is in that condition. I dont want to loose any of u I want to kill that person with my bare hands. I am very much tired maan I am very much tired.

By this she completely broke down n sobbing like a baby. But there is no one to support her n wipe her tears. Just from outside she is strong but from inside she is completely broken. By continous crying she slept on the floor itself.

On the other hand maan came out of his shower n got ready. He took his luggage n went downstairs. He all all the family members were waiting for him. He took elders blessings n bid bye too all n started to airport. Karthik also went to airport for send off n also to meet adi.

Both karthik n maan sat in the car n karthik in the drivers seat.

He started the car n headed to the airport. Whole drive was silent. N they reached the airport. Kerthik went for parking the car. After 5 min he came n both went inside the airport n saw adi n sasha r waiting for them.

Karthik went n hugged adi. N wished sasha.

Hello sasha how r u ?

I am fine sir n how r u?

I am good.

Karthik turned towards adi

So adi bhai how r u?

I am fine karthik. How r u? How is ur practice?

I am cool bhai n practice also going smoothly.(whispered) N the lady doctors in the hospital were so cool.

But maan heard this

Maan told to karthik Nautanki. Chup kar.

Both adi giggled n karthik made a baby face n once again maan n karthik hugged n bid good bye.

Bye bro. N all the best. Call me once u reach there.

Ok chinna sure I will call n u too take care. N anand papa ka khyal rakna treatment ki koi kami nahi honi chahiye. Agar koi jaroorat padi tho muje cal karna.

Sure bo I will take care of papa u dont worry.

Ok bye.

Adi bhai n sasha bye.

Both: bye

They completed their formalities n boarded the flight. After one n half hour of journey they landed in banglore airport n went out of the airport n saw a car waiting for them.

Driver: good mrng sir. Nan hesuru kishore nanu ivvatu ninda nim hosa driver (my name is kishore n from today onwards I am ur driver)

M: ok kishore luggage car naaga idu (ok kishore put the luggage in the car)

ok sir.

When all the 3 were outside suddenly maan saw n a person with her luggage n waiting for car. He was shocked to see that person here in the banglore.

Adi wait for 5 min I will come.

Ok maan.

Maan moved towards that person n called by her name. That girl was so shocked to hear him n turned around to see maan. She was surprised, happy to see him here n tears welled up n immediately hugged him.

Precap: who might be that girl???

past: college days of maan n geet

here is part 5 friends. plzz hit LIKE button n comment too... hope u all like it... (fingers crossed)

JYOTHI

part 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/49894734

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hello friends thanks a lot for ur encouragement. Now the story is taking a long leap almost geet 18 n maan 22. Both past n present will be going simultameously. From next update maneet moments will start.

Plz plz do hit LIKE button n COMMENT. They means a lot to me.

Coming to this part i am not that good in expressing the feelings but I tried my best so plzz read n comment. Critisisms r most welcome.

chapter 5

A LONG LEAP:

Maan n sudha di helped geet in her studies. That was very tought time for them to make her concentrate on studies coz she is very ziddi. At some times she use to get angry but maan is also very big ziddi than her. But as the time passes she too understood n all were very happy. After that day vijaya mom never became angry on her except for few things like her pranks, teasing session. She was like glow of the house. N geet love to siblings but she dont have n treats sudha di as her own sister.

Slowly their(maan n geet) friendship their bond became very strong n started understanding each other about their likes, dislikes, aims n what not. As years passed they bacame very best friends n all the other family members r very happy seeing their bond. Karthik too became a very good friend of geet. They both used to play pranks on maan. Their life was so happy. N geet too improved a lot in her studies. Maan n karthik s bond also became very strong. He use to take care of all their needs. Elders r proud of him that he understood them very well. All the 3 enjoying their life with each other. They became more comfortable with each other.

Due to business rishab decided to move to delhi n establish KHURANA TECHNOLOGIES there. So khuranas shifted to delhi it was worst part of their life for maan, geet n karthik. But they use to talk on phone daily but couldnt meet. After 1 year anand too joined in KT. They both became partners. N after one looong year again they r together.

In the school, adi is maan s best buddy since they shifted to delhi both r same school. Adi is little tensed types. Even pooja n rishab also likes adi very much. He is so simple n tries to help other in his possible ways. He is from a poor family so studying on a scholarship at the same time enjoys his life to the core. Adi after completion of his 10^th class started doing part time job inorder to help his family to little extent n also for his basic needs. Due to his simplicity maan n adi became best buddies rather than others who are after his name n money.

After completion of 12^th class maan decided to go for engineering n adi took other field in the same uni. So they both meet up daily n talk about all the matters. Now maan is in final year of engineering in ***** university. He is a very brilliant studnt n topper of the batch. All the girls drool over him n wants to be his girl friend. But our maan is maan never cares for all these matters. Maan is the favorite student for all the lecturers. Maan is very much interested in playing basker ball n his team is selected for inter college basket ball finals.

Geet n karthiik s best friend in school is shanti. These 3 r very close friends. N shanti treats maan as his own brother n calls him as maan bhai. She is active, talkitive n carefree type of girl. Maan also likes her very much. Every year she ties raksha bandhan to maan. Geet n shanti r partners in crime. But all loved them very much.

These 3(geet, karthik n shanti) completed their 12^th class n geet decided to go for engineering where as karthik decided to do MBBS n shanti decided to go for architecture. Here geet also joined in the same uni as of maan.

Geet s cousin swetha who stays in hoshiyarpur came to delhi for higher education n took admission in same college of geet. She decided to stay in hostel. She is also friendly with all but jealous of geet. As maan n geet r so close that she is not able to tolerate. She is interested in maan tries to be close to him but maan always ignores her. She loves her brother arjun a lot. Arjun is a year elder than maan. N he is an architech working for some company in bombay.

All r very happy in their life n its geet first day in college. N she is very confident. She wants to achieve something in her life n make all proud of her.

Present:

Suddenly maan comes of his memories by the sound of alarm. Its already 4 in the mrng n he have to leave for airport. So he kept those photos in the cupboard n went for shower.

On the other hand geet also comes out of her past memories n had tears flowing on her cheeks.

G: mama, papa, mom, dad, di, maan n chinna how r u all. I am missing u a lot. Once u all r my life but now I dont know whether I will meet u in my life or not. Maan always u use to tell me na that we should not depend on others n today as u wished I am successful in my career. But u r not with me to share my success, my happiness. I am feeling so lonely maan kabhi kabhi mann karta hain ki tumahre paas aajao n to be in ur arms forever meri aakhri saans tak. Kya eh kabhi ho sakta hain? kya hum kabhi mil sakte hain? Kya hum pehle jaise jee sakte hain? Kyun babajee kya kiya maine muje itni badi sazaa kyun diya aapne?

Maan its like hell for me without seeing u, without talking to u. its suffocating. I want to meet u n tell u what happened 2 years back. But muje darr hain maan ki meri wajah se wo insaan tum logo ko takleef pahunche. Main apni parivaar ko dard nahi de sakti. Because of me dad is in that condition. I dont want to loose any of u I want to kill that person with my bare hands. I am very much tired maan I am very much tired.

By this she completely broke down n sobbing like a baby. But there is no one to support her n wipe her tears. Just from outside she is strong but from inside she is completely broken. By continous crying she slept on the floor itself.

On the other hand maan came out of his shower n got ready. He took his luggage n went downstairs. He all all the family members were waiting for him. He took elders blessings n bid bye too all n started to airport. Karthik also went to airport for send off n also to meet adi.

Both karthik n maan sat in the car n karthik in the drivers seat.

He started the car n headed to the airport. Whole drive was silent. N they reached the airport. Kerthik went for parking the car. After 5 min he came n both went inside the airport n saw adi n sasha r waiting for them.

Karthik went n hugged adi. N wished sasha.

Hello sasha how r u ?

I am fine sir n how r u?

I am good.

Karthik turned towards adi

So adi bhai how r u?

I am fine karthik. How r u? How is ur practice?

I am cool bhai n practice also going smoothly.(whispered) N the lady doctors in the hospital were so cool.

But maan heard this

Maan told to karthik Nautanki. Chup kar.

Both adi giggled n karthik made a baby face n once again maan n karthik hugged n bid good bye.

Bye bro. N all the best. Call me once u reach there.

Ok chinna sure I will call n u too take care. N anand papa ka khyal rakna treatment ki koi kami nahi honi chahiye. Agar koi jaroorat padi tho muje cal karna.

Sure bo I will take care of papa u dont worry.

Ok bye.

Adi bhai n sasha bye.

Both: bye

They completed their formalities n boarded the flight. After one n half hour of journey they landed in banglore airport n went out of the airport n saw a car waiting for them.

Driver: good mrng sir. Nan hesuru kishore nanu ivvatu ninda nim hosa driver (my name is kishore n from today onwards I am ur driver)

M: ok kishore luggage car naaga idu (ok kishore put the luggage in the car)

ok sir.

When all the 3 were outside suddenly maan saw n a person with her luggage n waiting for car. He was shocked to see that person here in the banglore.

Adi wait for 5 min I will come.

Ok maan.

Maan moved towards that person n called by her name. That girl was so shocked to hear him n turned around to see maan. She was surprised, happy to see him here n tears welled up n immediately hugged him.

Precap: who might be that girl???

past: college days of maan n geet

here is part 5 friends. plzz hit LIKE button n comment too... hope u all like it... (fingers crossed)

JYOTHI

Wow awesme part dear..
Smethng seems fishy abt geet becoz she's sayng that she'l kill smepersn by herself.waitng to knw wat's the matter abt actually..hope the might be geet who hugged maan..cant wait 4 next part.

awesome update

Awesome one..

awesome upd...

she must be shanti,,,,,do add to pm