MG FF:DISTANCE BRINGS US CLOSER (1-23) parts - Page 7

thanks for links
great part...
pls disclose their past

Wow nice part dear.maneet's childhood seemed funny to me becoz maan,a great busns man nw with hs report card and in fifth stand...lol
anyway update was lovely.lovd the way maan and karthk celebratd geet's bday with family and lovd maan's bond with rupa.hw cutely she slept on maan's lap..aww..just lovd it.and im happy that geet also lovs maan.cant wait 4 their meeting..waitng eagerly 4 next part.

Loved the update dear

well loved the update
so i feel guess karne ki zarurat nai hai it will be maan who will teach

superb dear
continue soon

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Originally posted by: jyothinajo

Hello friends I am here with chapter 1

I want to tell u one thing both khuranas n handas used to stay in banglore but due to maan n karthik s studies they all shifted to delhi.

After 1 year even handas also shifted to delhi.

chapter 1

sept 3^th night 11 pm

Maan came from office very late. It was very tiring day for him had loads of work @ office. From past 1 month he started working on his dream project n decided to elaborate khurana technologies (KH) n started working on it. So tomorrow he is going to discuss about it with his family( khuranas n handas).

He decided to open a new branch in banglore as he spent his childhood there.

Next day morning maan woke up at his usual time 5 am n went directly to gym n started his workout(4m past 2 years it became his routine). After some time even karthik joined him. Maan n karthik r more like best friends rather than brothers. They share a friendly bond n they share every small n big thing happened in their life.

Karthik(k): good morning bro

maan(m): good morning chinna(nick name of karthik, only maan n geet will call him as chinna, n chinna means chote as they stayed in banglore they know kannada)

k: bro I think again u came late 4m office yesterday.

M: yes dear I had lot of work n I wanna discuss important matter with u all. So dont be late for breakfast. Come soon.

K: wats the matter bro.

M: I will tell. Come soon

k: ok bro. Sure.

After some time both completed their workout, n their hair is all wet due to sweat n they r in their pants n vests( omg... looking extremely hot... hayee I am drolling over them.. lol )

they both went to their respective rooms n had their shower n came out of his washroom n looked at his room.

Maan (self thought): oh soo much has changed in these 2 years.how colourfull our life was everything has changed. No one is happy. How our lives has changed. Mama papa r waiting for u. where r u?? plzz come soon. What happened y u left us n went away.

Suddenly he came out of his trance by knock at the door.

M: yes come in.

nakul(cook in khurana mansion): sir, mam is calling u 4 breakfast.

M:ok I will be there in 10min.u go.

N:ok sir

he got ready in his office attire n looking dashing n every girl will drool over him. Soon he went downstairs n he saw his parents waiting 4 him.

M: good morning dad , mom

pooja(p): good mrng beta.

rishab(r): good mrng maan. How r u?? I think now a days u r very busy with office work.

M: yes dad, loads of work is there.

p: I am happy that u r very responsible, but dont stress urself beta, have some rest.

M: its ok mom I love doing work. I want KH should be NO 1 position.

Mean while karthik also joined n wished elders.

K: good mrng dad, mom

p n r: good mrng beta.

K: so bro wats the matter that u told in the mrng that u want to discuss something important.

M: yes, mom dad I want to talk to u about the establishing a new branch of KH in banglore.

K(happy): wow thats great news bro. I am very excited about new branch.

p: beta I am very happy but y soo suddenly. N r u sure that u want to go to banglore.

M(sad n painful smile)(st:i want to go there mom n want to know wat happened 2 years back, branch office tho sirf ek bahana hain mom): yes mom I am sure.

Mean while vijaya handa came to KM n listened all.

V: maan, I am very happy with ur decision.

M: mama when u came. N took blessing from her.

V: when u were talking to bhai n bhabi I came. N all the best beta.

M:(tears in his eyes) thanks mama. N hugged her.

Breaking the hug he composed himself.

N even rishab n pooja r also very happy with maan decision.

M: so as all of u agreed I am going to banglore 2morow. Ok I am getting late I have to go to office n make arrangements. Bye all.

All: bye n all the best.

K: ok I too have to go to hoapital. Vijaya mama u will some with me for hospital??

v: nahi karthik I will come later. U carry on.

K: ok mama. Once u come plzz call me I will come with u.

v: ok sure I will. Karthik mmm.. umm.. I.. wa.. wan..want...

k: mama I know what u r asking. Sorry mama still no information.

v(with tears): ok beta n dont tell about this to maan.

K: (self thought: see how many r worried about u plz come back soon its almost 2 years. We all r missing u a lot see mamas n bros condition they forgot how to smile)sure mama I wont, u dont worry. Its getting late bye.

All:Bye beta.

precap: maan in office.

So friends here is the 1^st part. How is it??

guys 1^st 3 to 4 parts will be sad(NO MANEET 😆 ) after that our maneet moments will come. Plz hit LIKE button n plzz do comment. Critisizes r most welcome. N thanku very much 4 ur support.

N can anyone make VM for this FF.

part 2:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2138385&PID=49593570&#49593570

Distance brings us closer chapter 4

past continues..

v: maan u tell geet kaha hain?

M: mama muje nahi pata.

V: uska report card kaha hain karthik?

K: mama muje nahi pata.

V (thinking): kya hua inn dono ko. (loud) hmm thik hain chalo KM chalte hain bhabhi se baat karte hain.

Both shouts: NAHI...

now she understood they both r trying to save geet. N she didnt listen to them n told LETS GO.

By this they all headed to KM. Mama papa maan n karthik went to KM hall n shocked to see geet crying. Anand papa got tensed by seeing her in this conditin n took her in his arms n asked

what happened beta y u r crying?

Geet: '

bolo beta kya baat hain.

But geet didnt tell anything n stared at maan n karthik to help her.

Vijaya came to pooja n asked her

v: bhabhi yeh geet ki report hain na?

P: umm.. ha aap log baitiye na

v: bhabhi...

but pooja cut her n told children to go to their room. Geet maan n karthik went to maan s room.

In the hall:

pooja: bhabhi aap itne gusse mein kyun hain?

Vijaya: tho kya karu geet tho kuch padti hi nahi hain dekho uska result kya hua.

P: oho she is a child bhabhi. Wo samaj jayegi aap chinta mat kijiye.

V: kaise samaj jayegi. Kuch bolu tho gussa ho jayegi.

A: viji u dont worry. Ham sab hain na wo samaj jayegi.

P: ha babhi, bhai is rite. Ek kaam karte hain geet ko tution bejte hain.

V: ha we have to send her for tution then only she will concentrate.

P: yes we will do that. Ab aap shaant ho jayiye.

Meanwhile in maan s room :

As they entered the room geet sat on bed n on either side maan n karthik.

M: maan side hugged her n told her to stop crying. N wiped her tears with his thumb.

Geet looked at him n stopped crying. She made a baby face with cute pout n complained that : maan I wrote exam very well but teacher didnt give me marks.

It was hard time for maan to control his laughter n they couldnt control n both the brothers burst out into laughter.

G: (angry) here I am crying n u both r laughing. I wont talk to u.

M: acha ok sorry. We wont laugh.

G: hmmm... yeh sab kuch na iss chinna ki wajah se hua.

K: (shocked) oh hello what did I do now?

G: ( cutely complained ) u got 1^st rank na (to maan) yeh maths text book dekho na usme sab kuch problems hota hain. How can we do so many problems.

M: princess dont worry. U know u wont look nice when u cry.

G: ha dekho mera eyes red red ho gaya.

M: hmm thats y.

so maan made geet sit on his lap n told her to calm down.

G: mom will scold me this time. Muje darr lag raha hain.

M (in attitude) : maan ke hote hue darne ki koi jaroorat nahi hain. I will talk to mama. Ok? ( uff... maan u r in 5^th class n itna attitude abi se geet ke liye.. great going man)

G (cutely) : pakka??

M (smiling slightly) pakka.

N kissed on her cheek. (omg... maan abi se kissy wissy... )

K: geetu dont worry bro hain na. He will help u.

Before she could reply anything pooja n vijaya came to their room. By seeing them geet is hell scared.

G: mom...

vijaya cut her n told in stern voice.

V: geet from 2morow onwards u r going for tution.

G: WHAT??

V: ha geet. U r going thats it.

By this karthik started giggling by seeing geet s condition. N maan gave him a stren look. N karthik went mute.

Maan: mama no need of tution she will improve I am sure.

V: nahi maan she wont listen any of us. Its better for her only.

G: (angry tone) nahi I dont want to go.

Maan gave her a look to shut up n he continued in his MSK tone.

M: mama there is no need of that. From today onwards I will take care of her studies. ( oh god maan... she is only 2^nd class yaar bachari geet.. )

At the same time sudha came there who is studying in 9^th class in the same school. She is staying with handas. Two years back her parents r died in an accident so from that time onwards sudha is staying with handas. N treats geet as his own sister.

S: ha vijaya chachi maan is telling rite we r there na. This time we will be very serious about her studies. Plzzz chachi maan jao na.

After thinking for some time she told: ok beta this time I am listening to u. but next time n gave a serious glare to geet.

N they went to hall by leaving them behind n geet is very very happy by this news.

G: wow di u r the best. I love u. n hugged her tight. Thanku di thanku very much.

Di hugged her back n happy to see her happy.

S: di ko thanks bolne ki ho tum.. hmmm??

geet broke the hug n made a sorry face. By this all the 4 shared a laugh.

S: geet this time we convinced chachi but next time no way ok?

G:(making innocent face) ok di (geet thinking: hahaha.. di n maan I can handle them easily they will do my work... yay.. )

maan saw her changed expressions.

Maan (thinking) : what is she thinking. N y is she laughing like that?

S: hmm ok I am getting late for class I will go now. Bye all.

All the 3 : bye di.

Maan geet n karthik went to garden n starting playing hide n seek. At around evening 6 they went inside n nakul bought chocolate milkshake for them. They started drinking.

Geet whispered to nakul : nakul kaka aapne mera chocolate cake banaya ??

nakul: nahi beta vijaya mam told not to prepare. She gave me other work. Sorry beta.

Geet face became dull. Just then vijaya mom entered the house hiding something. N noticed geet who is dull.

V: geet y u r soo dull.

Geet raised her head to see her mom smiling at her.

G: kuch nahi mom. N again started staring at floor.

Mom couldnt see her like this n placed a chocolate cake in front of her.

But geet is still staring floor. Than mom winked at maan n karthik.

Maan n karthik shouted : wow mama its so yummy. I loved it.

Geet curiously saw them n a cake in their hand.

Than geet made a baby face at her mom. Then mom smiled n made her sit on her lap n feeded her the cake. Geet ate happily n asked her mom.

G: mom u r still angry on me?

V: just smiled n told her: koi bhi apne bache par gussa hote hain kya.

So geet smiled widely n hugged her tightly.

After dinner maan made geet sit on his bed n asked what homework she is having.

Geet replied: maan I am sleepy.

M: geet no excuses. Finish ur homework n then sleep.

G: (very cutely) sachi maan muje neend aarahi hain.

For this maan melted but understood her drama n told in stern voice.

M: geetu u have to complete it NOW.

Geet has no other option n started doing her work n maan is helping her. After sometime she completed her homework. N said happily to maan.

G: maan see I completed.

M: umm.. thats like a good girl.

G: (sleepily) maan I will go now.

M: hmm ok. Just wait for 5 min I will come.

G: ok.

Maan went down n opened the fridge n took a chocolate for geet. When he came to his room he saw geet sleeping on his bed like a barbie doll. She is looking so cute while sleeping maan thought. He went to her n kept the chocolate on the table n tucked her with the blanket n he too slept.

Precap: past continues.

Present: maan goes to banglore n meets ???????

so guys this is part 4. so how is it?? plzz hit LIKE button n comment. Sorry for mistakes.

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thanku..

JYOTHI

part 5 :

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/49833934

aww, so sweet is that...
Geetu bohot hi shetan hai...
But Maan usse thik karega...
continue soon dear...
wud be waiting...😃

loved it dear...wanted to ask u one thing do u knw tamil