MG FF:DISTANCE BRINGS US CLOSER (1-23) parts - Page 36

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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful part dear...it was so sweet...Both Maan and Geet are realising their feelings for each other...Sudha - Yash marriage on cards...wow
You asked for some songs...well i like one in particluarly on marriage - aaye ho meri zindagi mein tum bahar banke from Raja Hindustaani
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow.. both 13 n 14 were beautiful updates !! continue soon !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry Jyothi like button is not working
lovely update so Geet is slowly realizing her feelings for maan
maaneet moments were fab kya yaar Di 5 min baad nahi aa sakthi thi
good geet and maan both are not feeling sorry for their act
continue sson
love-Piya
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally read it...all parts are awesome..

lovely family...sweet realtion b/w both families...

like the topic...distance brings us closer...sweet relation b/w kartik,,geet and maan...

woo awsesome bike driving...have lots of goosebumps when maan kissed her...haaye...

haapy for sudha n yash...shanti n kartik ko bhi mila do na...

that ragging part was cute...mam n sir...hehehe...maan is so so protective n possessive...

love their child parts...they were so cute in childhood...

confusion confusion and confusion...lots of confusion...what the feeling they have for each other...geet samjh ja u love him...uff...

thanks for the pm...continue soon...

and the song is...
sun sun goria from the movie daman(like sister n mother sing for bride..)
sajan mera uss paar hai milne ko dil bekraar hai...dont know the movie name...
aaj hai sagai sun ladki ke bhai zara nach ke humko dikha...

hope u liked it...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Love it please add me in your pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome... 😊
n plzz do pm me 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
@meena..
thanku so much dear... 😊

@ maneetlover1
aww... thanku so much mona... 😊 glad u liked it...

@ valli22
thanku so much valli... 😊

@suhaaana
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@NANDY_BRU
thanku so much nandy... 😊

@PrithviSanyo1
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@ -Nilam-
awww... that was soo sweet... 😃
thanku so much dear...😊
glad u liked it...

@minnie_tweetie
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glad u liked it..

@uteem
thanku so much dear.. 😊

@maaniqra
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@love2_soma
aww... thanku so much soma.. 😊
hayee... me too in maneet wprld... soo dreamy...

@ loving_girl
thanku so much dear... 😊

@Remya_Pillai
thanku so much dear...😊
glad u liked it...
n yes u will come to know feelings of geet in next update... 😳

@zunaiba5
thanku so much dear... 😊
glad u liked it...

@Rupal
thanku so much rupal... 😊
happy for ur appreciation...

@ World-of-Dreams
aww... thanku so much namratha... 😊
a big hug for u too... 🤗

@ renjini263
thanku so much renjini dear... 😊
u will come to know about geets feeling in next update...

@ geetsweet
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glad u loved it..

@rsroopali
aw... thanku soo much dear...😊

@ana1411
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@Mishti13
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happy u liked maneet in this ff...

@sarkh26
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@Geetmaan1234
thanku soo much dear... 😊that was soo sweey...
kissey for u too... muahhh

@Simran_14
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@ritzy09
thanku so much ritzy... 😊
glad u liked it...
n thanku very much for the song... i will sure include tht in marriage sequence...

@ shah10
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@Nivedithachand
thanku soo much dear..😊

@ piya-
thanku soo much dear... 😊
hahaha... di ko nahi pata na ki maneet kya kar rahe hain... n she is very happy n want to share... soo she screamed...

@neha5058
hey... thanku so much dear... 😊
glad u liked it... hahaha... bechari geet she is so confused.. dont worry now no more confusion...
thanku so much for the songs... i will sure include them...
yes dear i loved the songs.. 😃

@ gill123
thanku so much dear... 😊
u r added... 😃

@AIMAMSK
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@SweetestPari
thanku so much dear... 😊
ur added... 😃

@tamanna1391
awww... thats very nice...
thanku so much dear... 😊

@ spvd
will be waiting for ur comment... 😊



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Chapter 15


Next day morning


All the elders are very busy in doing preprations as today yash n his family r coming with panditji.

Here geet is very excited as today she is going to talk to di in the evening n today she is going to college on her new bike. Geet took the shower n wore a light green colour top with jeans. Light makeup n small green colour tops n she wore n matching sandals without heels. As she dont like wearing heels. She took her scraf n wore it around her neck. She looked herself in the mirror n smiled. She got ready n went downstairs n saw her mom n mama r busy preparing things for guests. Pooja mama is trying to cool vijaya mom.

Bhabhi y u r so tensed be cool.

Hmmm n took a deep breath.

Just then geet came there n wished them.

Good morning mom, good morning mama.

Good morning beta. Oh u got ready. Ek min main abi nashta lagati hu.

Its ok mom. Main canteen main kuch khati hu. U dont worry.

Ok fine. Drink this juice n go.

Geet took the juice n drank it in one go. She bid good bye to them n took her bike keys n headed to college.


In KM maan n karthik both got ready for the college.

Oh mom is in HM. Ok chinna bye see u in the evening.

Fine bro. Bye.

Maan got msg to his mobile.

He opened the msg its from geet.

Maan aaj main college ko bike par jaa rahi hu :)

maan thought oh tho aaj madam bike par jaa rahi hain. Itni jaldi hi kya hain. Ab tho kisi ki baat nahi sunegi. Hmmm ziddi geet.

He replied hmmm ok.. :)

geet got the msg n smiled.

She went out n started her bike. At the same time here in KM maan too started his car. At the time he came out he saw geet n they both exchanged smiles. N her face was little nervous.

They both r driving in the same speed.

Maan talking from the car.

Hey geet kya hua? Itni tension mein kyun ho?

Geet is surprised by his question just now he saw her n how easily he understood.

Maan can see surprise in her eyes.

Kuch nahi maan. Bus thoda darr lag raha hain.

Arey geet main hu na. Darne ki koi baat nahi. U relax n drive I will be following u. ok?

Geet smiled at him n said thanku maan.

Koi baat nahi geet.

Maan decided to keep her busy by talking with her so that she wont feel nervous.

Waise geet classes kaise chal raha hain.

Ha maan classes have started. N they r good. But next week ke liye kuch assignments hain shuru karna hain.

They kept on talking till they reached college.

Parked their respective vehicles.

Oh maan muje pata hi nahi chala. Hum itni jaldi college pahunch gaye.

Ha ab maan singh khurana ka jaadu hi kuch aisa hain.

Aha.. she just slapped his shoulder playfully.

Ouch... geet.

Kya hua maan zor se laga kya? She asked innocently.

Maan saw naughtiness in her eyes.

Geet aaj tum bachogi nahi.

Now geet starting running. Maan too ran behind her. They both were chasing each other.

They were in one corner if the parking lot. Maan catched her but her wrist n pinned her to the wall.

Both r panting heavily.


He pinned her hands to the wall. He kept looking her eyes. His breath is falling on her face. She is feeling ticklish.

Geet lost in his touch. They both r lost in each other.

Maan moved close to her. Their bodies touching each other. Maan is soo muc lost in her that he dont know wat he is doing. He freed her hands n held tightly by her waist. Their faces were just few mm apart.


Geet kept her one hand on his shoulder n one hand o his chest. Her lips brushed his bare chest as his first 3 buttons r open. When her lips touched his skin he felt current passed through his spine. He felt her soft lips like a feather n rose petal. They both were so lost that they stayed in that position for long time until there was a horn sound of a car.


The sound of horn bought both back to reality. Maan freed her immediately.

She started blushing thinking what happened few moments back. She ran from there. He was just staring at her. By seeing her blush a smile formed.

Maan thought

meri geet jab wo sharmati hain tab kitni cute lagegi. God I love her very much. I am going crazy day by day.


He went to his class. He looked very happy n smiling unnecessarily.

Rohan asked hey dude r u okay?

Maan made a weird face n asked yes ofcourse. Y wat happened?

Ha nothing. Thinking y u r smiling like a mad.

Maan just glared at him n rohan shut his mouth.

Today maan the great maan is not interested in his classes thats very very strange. But bechara wat will he do. He is so much lost in geet's thoughts.


Here geet too went to her class her cheeks were red due to furious blushing. Deepti noticed her lost somewhere n asked

geet

'...

geet

'...

GEEET

geet came out of her dreamland. N smiled cheekily at deepti

kaho ho tum. U look so lost.

Ahhh... nothing I am not feeling well. I will go to canteen.

Arey geet u came just now...

before she complete her sentence she interrupted n told

nahi yaar aaj class main baitne ka mood nahi hain. I will come for next hour.

Ok fine as u wish.


Geet left the class n went to canteen.

Here maan too not interested in the class. Maan, rohan n pari left the class. Actually it was shock for rohan n pari that maan never misses a single class but today. Omg.. they r not able to believe this.

They 3 went to canteen n seated.


Guys muje bohot bhook lag rahi hain. Mom busy thi aaj. I will go n get something. Tum logon kuch chahiye.

Nahi nahi ek coke bus said pari n rohan.

Ok fine said maan n went to bring the order.

Just then pari noticed geet is coming to canteen. She wants to talk to geet in personal. So she told rohan to go n help maan

rohan jake maan ko help nahi kar sakte. Wo akele hain bechara.

wo.. aajayega na.

Arey jao just go.

Kya hua tumko. Y u r behaving so weird.

Pari lost her patients n shouted I told u just go. I will tell u later now u gooo.

She was literally pushing him from there.

Rohan lost it n told ok fine going.

Finally pari is sucessful. Geet entered canteen n saw pari sitting alone there. She went there n told

hi pari.

Hi geet. Tum yaha?

Ha pari aaj class mein baitne ka mood nahi hain. Isiliye yaha ayi hu. Tum akele yaha kya kar rahi ho?

ah.. kuch nahi just for time pass.

oh...

they both became silent. Geet lost in her thoughts. She was thinking of morning incident n a blush crept on her cheeks.

Pari noticed this n smiled.

Muje geet se baat karni hain. Or else again they will come here.

Umm.. geet main tumse ek baat poocho.

Geet came out of her thoughts

erm.. ha poocho pari.

Dont think otherwise just asking casually.

Its ok pari no prob just ask what u want to.

Umm.. tum kisi se pyaar karti ho? Do u love anyone?

Geet was shocked n kept staring at pari.

But geet thought oh.. pari aur rohan ek doosre se pyaar karte hain. That means she knows how will be the feeling. Agar mein pari se hi poochi tho.

GEET...

um.. um.. sorry.

Kaha ho yaar. Tumko bura tho nahi laga na.

Nahi aisi koi baat nahi. Kya main tumse ek baat poocho.

Ha ha ask.

Jab pyaar hota hain tab kaisa lagta hain. I mean u n rohan r in relation from past 2 years na. So ??

pari smiled at her n said

pyaar... its an awesome feeling geet. We dont know when it will happen but jab humko kisi se pyaar hota hain na tab we will have a different feeling. Hum ussi ke baare main sochte hain, we will be lost in his/her thoughts. When he will be there with us we will feel safe n happy. When he is away from us then we will feel restless. When we close our eyes tab usi ka chehra dikai dethi hain. Jab wo haste hain tab humko bhi muskurane ka mann karta hain, jab wo pareshan hote hain then we will feel pain.

Geet is just listening to her n lost in her words.

"When he will be there with us we will feel safe n happy. When he is away from us then we will feel restless." These words were ringing in her mind.

Pari stopped n looked at her. She again lost in her own world.

Geet (st) : what ever pari is saying I am experiencing the same. When maan is near then I will feel so safe n when he is not then I will feel so restless. Iska matlab main maan se pyaar karti hu. I love him. Omg... muje pyaar ho gaya. Par kya maan bhi mujse pyaar karta hain? What if he dontlove me. That mere thought bought tears in her eyes. She opened her eyes n smiled nervously at pari.

Geet r u alright.

Yes pari I am fine. I am going home. Aaj mood nahi hain.

Ok fine. Maan is here only I will tell him.

No no pari I will go no prob.

R u sure?

Yes I am.

Ok bye. tc..

bye.

Geet left the canteen n decided to go home.

But here maan n rohan heard the whole convo between geet n pari.


What will happen now. What do u think guys.


Precap: engagement preparations... 😳😃

surprise guest... 😕


hello guys so here is part 15. how is it guys hope u liked it...

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