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Hello guys thanku very much for ur support. So here is part 11.

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Me very sad that geet is ending this 16th. I was crying. Now maneet became a part of our life. N I wont stop this FF. We love u maneet/gurti. Plz come back soon with new show or GHSP season 2. we miss u. come back soon.


chapter 11


recap: maan n di met in coffee shop n she told him everything about her love with yash. Even maan is also very happy with her decision. As he know about malhotras n yash is also nice guy. After some time they both went to college to pick up geet n told her every thing.

She too is very happy n started teasing her. After teasing session they all headed to home.



Maan, geet n di went to KM n waiting for karthik to tell the news. Both di n geet went to one of the room in KM to fresh up. Yes both the sisters have one room at KM coz usko hi pata nahi hain ki wo log kab kaha hote hain. Its up to their mood. Maan just sat on the hall reading some magazine. Just then karthik entered the house n wished his bro.


Hey bro.

Hi chinna. Late hua aaj?

Ha bro yeh MBBS bhi na. Aaj tho extra class tha bro.

Acha... when he was about to say something just then shanti entered the house. N shouted

maan bhai.


Maan is very happy to see shanti after so many days. She went to her relatives place for marriage n came after 15 days. She missed her maan bhai, geet, di n last but not least her karthik.

Maan got up n hugged her n kissed her forehead n told

oh shanti I missed u dear. 15 days. How r u?

I am fine bhai I missed u too very much.

Shanti saw karthik n just smiled at him n wished him

hi karthik. How r u?

I am fine shanti. How was ur trip?

Ha its fine but u all r not there na. So missed u all.

Karthik (st) : yeah... u r rite.. I too missed u.

Just then geet n di came down n saw shanti. Geet is very very very happy seeing her many days n scremed in joy.

SHANTIII !!

GEETTT !!

others covered their ears by her screaming.

They both hugged each other n jumping in joy.

Geetu I missed u yaar.

Me too yaar. I was bored without u yaar.

They broke the hug. Shanti went to di n hugged her di. Di too reciprocated the hug. After the hugging session they all sat on the couch. N started her blaberring about the trip. They all just listened to her.

Maan n di thought: oh god, she is same as geet. Thats y they both became best friends.

Karthik thought: shanti, u r looking so cute I just want to hug u. (to himself) cool down karthik cool down agar bhai ya geet ko pata chala na main tho gaya.

Geet n shanti r laughing, cracking jokes n others r just enjoying. Now who can win them in blabering. Atlast their come come to end (not really but kind of.. ) n saw all r staring at them. They both smiled at them.

Ho gaya tum dono ki bak bak asked maan.

Bak bak? Geet n shanti in unison.

Ha now can I speak?

Hmm thik hain tell said geet.

Di main chathi hu ki hum mama papa ko bata dena chahiye. Aap kya bolte hain.

Yes maan muje bata dena chahiye. Par wo kaise react honge muje tho darr lag raha hain.

Dont worry di hum hain na.

Shanti n karthik: wat u both r talking about?

Oh yeah... we forgot to tell u both said geet in a chirpy voice. N our geet told the whole story to them. They both r very happy n hugged her.

Both in unison: congrats di.

When u will introduce us to jiju asked shanti

Monday evng ko.

Oh wow ok di.

But suddenly geet told: di shadi ke baad aap humko chodke chali jaoge na. N had tears.

Di just hugged her n told: arey pagli main kaha jaongi. I will be always there for u.


maan just saw geet in awe. She is so strong but yet so sensitive. The way she treats all. How can any one love so much. Really she is an angel. Now just bt thinking about to tell their parents about di's marriage only she is reacting like this. Then wat will happen when di will go to her sasural.


Bacha ab rona band karo na. Tum rote hue ache nahi lagti. N wiped her tears.

Di u will never forget us na.

Now di is becoming emotional n told her: geet tum kaise baatein kar rahi ho main kaise tum logo ko bhool sakti hu. Never in my life. U all will be my first priority.

By this all the 5 members( di, geet, shanti, maan n karthk) joined in a group hug.

They broke the hug n seated comfortably on couch chatting with each other. Just then maan got a msg to his mobile by anand papa that all of them should be in HM.

Maan informed them n they all went to HM. When they entered HM saw pooja n vijaya r watching movie n enjoying themselves. Maan saw vijaya mama smiling n happy. Maan too felt happy that she is not disturbed by yesterdays incident.

All the children wished them.

Vijaya mama, papa kaha hain. He told to come here.

Papa? wo.. tho abi tak nahi aya.

Nahi aya? Par...

just then anand entered the house n went to geet n told in stern voice: geet come with me.

All r surprised by his tone. He was never serious like this.

Vijaya asked: ji kya hua.

He didnt reply anything n dragged geet outside. Now geet is scared.

Dad... before she tell anything anand told

shhh dont talk anything.


Now all r worried. They just followed anand silently. They went near the garden n relieved. All r very happy but geet is still looking at dad. N now she saw all r smiling.


Now anand is also smiling at her but she gave him a confusing look. He signalled her to see front. She turned towards the garden n saw a beautiful red colour bike there. She is shocked n happy to see the bike. She screamed in happiness.


BIKE!!

anand asked kaise laga mera surprise?

Oh dad u r the best n hugged him tight.

He too hugged her back.

Papa aap tho hame dara diya said karthik.

Ha anand aap bhi na bilkul bache jaise ban gaye hain told vijaya.

He just laughed out loud n told kyun main apni beti ko surprise nahi de sakti kyun maan?

Ji papa bilkul.

Kya matlab asked karthik.

Kuch nahi karthik beta maan ne hi kaha ki geet ko surprise dene ke liye. Actually main aur geet jaane wale the but maan ne muje phone karke bataya tha ki hum surprise dete hain. Tho muje idea acha laga n bike order kar diya subah hi n kaha ki hame shaam tak HM mein chahiye. Jab bike ka delivery hua tab maine maan ko msg kiya.

All r surprised to hear this n happy too.

Oh wow thanku very much maan told geet n hugged him.

He too hugged her back. Geet felt a different feeling when she hugged him. But maan is enjoying the moment. He just want to kiss her badly n to feel her skin with his lips but he controlled himself n broke the hug.

Geet just seeing the bike she just want to learn immediately n take a ride on that.

Just then anand saw shanti n asked

arey shanti beta aap kab aye? Aur kaisa tha aapka trip.

Today mrng only I came uncle. Aur trip acha tha.

Thik hain beta. Chalo sab log andar chalte hain.

All of them went inside. N talked for some time.

Shanti told: ab main chalti hu. Mama will be waiting for me.

Ok dear. But its dark yaar kaise jaogi tu asked geet.

Main chali jaongi yaar. Tum tension mat le.

Nahi shanti tum akeli nahi jaogi said maan.

Bhai but...

karthik go n drop her said maan

ji bro.

Karthik (st): wow.. bro u r the best. Thanku very much.

Shanti chalo I will drop u said karthik.

Ok n she bid good bye to all n went.


Pooja told: bhabhi hum chalte hain.

Dinner karke jao na pooja said anand.

Nahi bhai hum chalte hain ghar mein kuch kaam hain.

Acha thik hain.

Good night mama n papa.

Good night maan.

Geet kal subah 5 ready ho jao ok no late.

She made a baby face n said ok.


Pooja n maan went to KM n after some time karthik too came back after dropping shanti. They all did dinner together n gone to their respective rooms. Night was very peaceful. Maan is sleeping peacefully n geet too sleeping peacefully. Koi bhi nhi jaanta hain ki kya hoga kal se geet ki zindagi mein. What is there in her density, in their destiny. Destiny se koi bhi nahi bhaag sakta geet bhi nahi. She has to face it may be it is good or bad.


Next day mrng maan got up at 4:30 n went to HM. N here geet is sleeping peacefully n her alarm is ringing continously. Finally she got up n got ready. She went downstairs n saw maan waiting for her in the garden. He sat on the bench in the garden. She too went there n sat beside him n kept her head on his shoulders. She was feeling so restless when she woke up but when she saw maan then she felt very pleasant. So she rested on maan s shoulder.


Geet (st) : yeh aaj muje kya ho raha hain. Y I am feeling so restless. Main tho roz maan se milti hu, jagda karti hu par aaj itna khush kyun ho raha hain. Jab maine usko dekha garden mein ek sukoon mila kya hain yah sab. Oh babaji muje kuch bhi samaj nahi aaraha hain.


She is still in her thoughts just then maan spoke.

Kya hua geet. Neend aarahi hain.

Hmm... saying so she closed her eyes holding maan tight.


They both sat there for some time feeling each other. Maan kissed her cheek n geet just smiled at him. Maan held her shoulder protectively while geet rested on his shoulders. They both in the same position for some time n maan dont want to disturb her sleep. She is looking so cute in her sleep very innocent n angelic. How can anyone be so pure from heart maan thought. After some time with no other option maan has to wake her up as it is getting late.

geetu utho na. Der ho rahi hain.

Hmmm.

Hmm kya chalo utho.

Geet got up n maan took the bike keys from her n went to an empty road so that no traffic will be there n she can learn easily. They both went to near by road. N maan started explaining how to start the bike.


Geet see here. Yeh red button hain na u have to press that then bike will start. Press the break button n then start.

Geet followed wat maan told. N she started the bike.

Geet sat in front n maan sat in the back. Her back is touching his chest n electricity passed through maan s body feeling her sooo close. He just lost in her touch.


Precap: still driving class is not over 😉


so guys here is part 11. hope u liked it. Plz hit LIKE button n do COMMENT.


N the next update will be on dec 26th sorry guys. Hope u understand. As today I was free from mrng so updated. Thanku very much friends.

part 12: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/50864247

Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
iam 1st to comment and like
awesome dear
cont soon
thank for pm
Edited by meena.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update... ohoh geet nd shanti kitne bak-bak karte hai...😆 bechaare woh log... luvd d surprise part... i thnk geet is falling 4 him plzzz continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow awesme part.so geet is falling 4 hm i thnk waitng 4 next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
so geet s falling for maan..!
karthik luvs shanthi...but wat abt shanthi??
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Posted: 13 years ago
really really amazing update
great part
loving geet maan and others bonding
cont. soon
thanks4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
new feelings started to blossom in geet..loved the part..continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
last part was so romantic

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