MG FF:DISTANCE BRINGS US CLOSER (1-23) parts - Page 25

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Posted: 13 years ago
Yippeee !!! The class is not yet over n priya di's situation is very interesting !!! 😊 continue soon !!!!!! ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update.
Waiting for next part.
Thanks for PM.
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Posted: 13 years ago
great part😊
Edited by Appy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
awesome
so it feels geet is falling for him
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey
awesome parts..
cont.sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Juz read ur ff in one go...its awesome...plz add me 2 ur pm list...
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Posted: 13 years ago

friends here is part 12. hope u like it.

chapter 12


maan n geet went to near by empty road n he is telling her how to start the bike. Geet sat in the front n maan on the back. Once geet started the bike maan leaned close to her n kept his hands on hers. At that time geet felt a different feeling n maan so close to her. Current passed throgh her body she just closed her eyes n feeling his touch. Her back is glued to his chest. Its very hard to control his feelings. He leaned close to her n kept his chin on her shoulders.


He was just telling how to drive but geet is not at all in a position to listen. She was lost in his touch.

She is in a new world.

This is very much new to her never felt like this before.

Her lips r shivering,

her breathing became uneven,

the fresh air in the morning n maan so close to her, she is feeling as if she is in heaven n at the same time she is nervous.

Not understanding what is going on, but she is enjoying the feeling. She leaned back more on maan. Still her eyes r closed.


Here maan came out of his trance n opened his eyes n saw geet face expressions. She is looking like a angel n due to the morning breeze her hair is playing n falling on her face. She is just smiling. But he dont know what is going on within her. He is thinking that she is enjoying the morning weather.


Here maan is controlling his feelings n

here geet is not understanding her feeling.

There is silence only silence.

Both r enjoying it, no one want to break the silence.

They r still in the same position dont want to move but they have to be.

So maan broke the silence. He whispered in her ear

geet... his voice is husky, n his lips r touching her skin.

Geet opened her eyes n faced maan.

A smile on his face, twinkle in his eyes. She just smiled at him.

He too smiled

but she is now confused n thought what happened few min back. What was that feeling. Now by thinking that moment so close to him she bacame nervous.


Geet (st): what was that? Wo kya ehsaas hain? Kya ho raha hain muje. Babaji muje kuch bhi samaj main nahi aaraha hain. Arghhh


Geet kya hua? Kaha koyi hui ho? Tume thand lag raha hain kya?

She came out of her trance.

Arey nahi maan. Main thik hu. Bas kuch sooch rahi thi.

Kya soch rahi thi?

um.. kuch nahi maan. Bas aise hi.

She is feeling bad for telling him lie. Here maan sensed somethng is wrong but dont want to preasurise her n told.

Hmm thik hain ab deere se chalao bike ko.

Hmmm.

Maan got down from the bike n told her to drive slowly n not to increase the speed.

He was just following her with little distance.

Geet slowly slowly started driving. Suddenly she increased the speed unknowingly n didnt hold the break. She dont know wat to do. N screamed

maaan.

Maan ran towards her n caught her by her waist with one hand n balanced the bike with other hand.

Geet closed her with with fear before she hit the floor maan caught her.

Maan was so worried n asked

geet tum theek tho hain na. Lagi tho nahi na.

Geet opened her eyes,n looked into his eyes which were full of concern, worry n love. Maan too looked into her eyes. Their eye lock (mahiii mahiii). After some time maan broke the eye lock n made her stand n parked the bike aside.

Maan came to her

geet tum bolti kyun nahi? Lagi tho nahi na?

Nahi maan main thik hu.

Now no need to learn bike n all I will drop u to college n pick u up. Ok understood.

Arey nahi maan. Dekho I am perfectly fine. Kuch bhi nahi hua.

Maine kaha nahi tho nahi. Thats it he said in a stern voice.

Maan plzz plzz dekho now I am just learning na ab main sambhal kechalaongi. Pretty plzz she made a cute face n pleading.

Maan didnt reply anything. He dont want to see her in pain, but she is pleading him.

Maan please please please...

now he is no other choice but to accept.

Hmm thik hain. Agar dobara tumne giri na tho... before he could complete

geet told.

Oh wow thatnku very much maan. Main sambhalke chalti hu.

Thik hain. Ab ghar chalte hain college bhi jaana hain na.

Hmm thik hain maan chalo.


They both went back home.

Went to their respective house n got ready for college.

Geet came down n saw mom n dad waiting for her.

Good mrng mom, good mrng dad.

Both: good mrng beta.

So how was ur driving class asked dad.

Thats it geet started the whole story n they both r just listening to her with a smile on their face.

She completed telling n sighes.

Huh!!

ho gaya. Ek sawal poocha papa ne tumne poora story bata di.

Ha tho batana hain na mom. Aur breakfast mein kya banaya mom.

Pasta replied mom.

Geet made a yucky face.

Pasta oh no!!!!!!!! mom aapko pata hain na muje pasta pasand nahi hain.

Phir bhi.

Arey geet ek din ki baat hain khalo.

Nahi bilkul nahi.

Just then maan entered HM n geet is arguing something.

Arey geet kya hua? Asked maan

dekho maan mom prepared pasta I dont like it.

Wow thanku mama replied maan.

Arey thanku kyun. Ab khalo. U asked me to prepare na then. Mera beta ne muje kuch poocha aur main main na mani aisa ho sakta hain kya.

Oh love u mama.

Geet is just listening to both

kya maan tumne ne mom se poocha aur kab?

Aaj subah mama ko phone kiya maine. Kitne din hogaye mama ke haath se bane hue pasta khakar.

Mom mera paratha kaha hain?

Just then pooja mom entered HM n directly went to geet. She gave her a box.

Mama kya hain yeh?

Arey open tho karo.

Geet opened the box n saw her fav aloo ke parathe.

Parathe... wow thanku mama.

Muje pata hain maan ne bhabhi ko pasta banane ke liye kaha, muje yeh bhi pata hain ki tumko pasta pasand nahi hain. Isiliye main tumare liye parathas banaya hain.

Wow.. mama love u very much n hugged her.

She broke the hug n sicked her tongue out at her mom n maan.

Dekho mama meri kitni khyal rakhegi. Aap dono khayiye pasta. Main tho mare parathe khaongi.

She took one bite n told wow mama... its sooo yummy.

They all just saw her n smiled at her childishness.

Maan wanted to tease her so

arey geet oily food khana acha nahi hain. Tum pehle hi moti ho aur ab bohot moti ho jaogi.

She made a gol gappe face n asked kya kaha tumne muje. Moti? Main moti hu?

Ha yeh koi poochne ki baat hain.

Maaannn she shouted on top of her lungs n started chasing him. But maan is too fast n he too started to run. They both were running n running. They were tired n stopped running n panting heavily.

Maaan ruko tum ruko.

Arey geet main tho sirf mazak kar raha tha.

Just then di came there n saw them panting heavily

ohoo tum dono phir se shuru ho gaye.

Di maine kuch bhi nahi kiya yeh sab maan ki wajah se.

thik hain thik hain now stop it u two. Waise college nahi jaana aaj.

Ha di we r going replied maan.

Bye di.

Bye geet.


At that time all the elders r in the hall talking to each other. Maan, geet n di came there after completing their fight. Their day start with fight n end with fight. But they enjoy each n every moment in their life.


Maan geet n di came there. They r standing in front of them maan is standing in the middle on either side geet n di.

Mama,papa, mom we need to talk to u something important tell dad to come early in the evng n papa aap bhi jaldi ayiye said maan in a serious tone.

Kya baat hain maan. Koi problem hain kya asked papa in a worried tone.

Dad aap chinta mat kijiye kuch nahi hain. Ek good news hain. Nothingserious said geet.

Good news?? ok fine we will.

Aaj dinner sab log yaha karenge. Ok?

Ok beta.


Di is silently listening to all but she didnt apeak anything. She just held maan's hand tightly.


Thik hain ab hum college chalte hain. Bye all.

Bye maan.


By this they went to college n di went to office.


Precap: NONE.😉


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part 13: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/50978816
Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

thanku dear... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb part..
so geet needs to name her new found feelings..
i hope only her di can help in ds case..

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