MG FF:DISTANCE BRINGS US CLOSER (1-23) parts - Page 17

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow awesme part dear.just lovd the way maan ragged geet.it was funny and shwetha is jealous of geet nw..and just lovd their funny fight.
Waitng eagerly 4 next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnx 4 pm


wow nice part


sid ...ughhh


do continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update jyothi.. luvd it Arey yaar ragging part ws funny nd deir Fights we\as funny 2... plzzz cont soon w8ing 4 ur update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome loved it
cont. soon
waiting for maan manofying geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update...loved it...
please continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hmm...ragging...well its banned dearie
but loved it
the concern shown by him was too good
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: minnie_tweetie

hmm...ragging...well its banned dearie
but loved it
the concern shown by him was too good
continue soon


yes dear its banned... but its just to tease geet...
thanku dear... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

hii friends I am here with part 9. thanks a lot for ur encouragement. Plzz tell me should I continue or not. N any suggestions what u want to see next.

chapter 9


recap:


maan teased geet in the college n geet is very very angry on maan. After college both came home n geet told everything happened in college with both moms. After sometime she went to meet chinna n told him about maan. He was shocked to listen her n maan came at the same time n they both started fighting. Poor karthik he was trying to stop them but no they were no where to listen.

N shouted: STOP IT U 2.

they both became silent geet stomped her foot n went to handa haveli.


She entered handa haveli n saw her dad working on some file. She went n sat beside him n wished him.

Hello dad. How was ur day?

Hello beta I was nice. N how was urs? College is good na koi problem tho nahi hain na.

Dad no problem sab kuch thik hain. College is also very nice n aaj hi ache friends mile hain. She started her blabbering n dad is patiently listening to her.

Hmm tho bohot acha hain. Meri beti khush hain. Aur muje usse jyada aur kya chahiye.

Dad wo... wo...

kya hua geet koi pareshani hain kya.

Nahi nahi dad.. muje aapse kuch poochni hain.

Ha geet bolo he was tensed now.

wo... wo... muje college jaane ke liye...

ha college jaane ke liye

ek bike chahiye dad. Plz plz mana mat kijiye na. She made a baby face

oh now how can dad say no by seeing her face.

Oh beta bas itni si baat mein tho darr gaya tha. Thik hain beta bus di din baad ok? But sambhalke chalna ok?

Ok dad u r the best. I love u dad. She said n hugged him.

Dad is very happy by seeing her happy.

After some chit chat with dad she went to her room to take shower.

When she left to her room n vijaya came there with tea n gave one cup to anand n one for her n saw him very happy.

Kya baat hain aap bohot khush hain. Koi khass baat.

Kuch nahi viji, geet ke baare mein soch raha tha.

Geet ke baare mein kyun kya hua usko? She asked tensed.

Arey inta tension mat lo. Bas hamari beti kitni badi ho gayi hain pata hi nahi chala. Main usko kabhi bhi dukh mein nahi dekh sakta wo.. hamesha khush rehna hain. N had tears in his eyes.

Vijaya had tears in her eyes n told him not to worry.

Aap chinta mat kijiye hamari geet hamesha khush rahegi.

Aur isme koi doubt hain kya came a voice from entrance. Anand n vijaya saw rishab n pooja there.

Arey aap log. Ayiye said vijaya.

They entered n sat on the sofa.

Kya hua aap pareshan lag rahe ho? Asked pooja

Arey isse kyun pooch rahe ho. Muje poocho na. yeh toh bina wajah ke pareshan leta hain said rishab.

Ha ha mazak udao. Tumko tho bas mauka chahiye said anand.

Bhai aap bilkul sahi keh rahe ho. Yeh tho bina wajah pareshan hote hain said vijaya to rishab


They all bust into laughter. Today they all were enjoying n teasing each other like teenagers. All were remembering their college life. Anand, risnab n pooja r from same college n best friends. Rishab n pooja fell in love with each other. After their studies anand n vijaya got married. After 3 years even rishab n pooja got married. Vijaya delivered a baby boy n named him as vinod. He is 3 years elder to maan. When vinod was 10 years, geet 2 years n maan 6 years at that time unfortunately vinod met with an accident n died. As geet is very small she didnt remember anything n till now she dont know anything. At that time anand n vijaya were very much deprssed with the loss of vinod but soon came out of depression because of geet. Rishab n pooja supported them a lot at that time. Suddenly anand told

agar aaj vinod hota tho kitne ache hote. Par babaji ko yeh manzoor nahi.

All had tears by listening to him. Vijaya couldnt hold back her tears n want to be alone so she told

Aap baat kijiye main aapke liye coffee lekar ati hu went to kitchen n she broke down completely. Pooja is about to go to kitchen but rishab stopped her.

Nahi pooja thodi der vijaya ko akela chod do.

Par... thik hain.

Just then geet came down n saw pooja n rishab.

Hello papa hello mama.

Hello beta.

Mom kaha hain mama.

wo.. kitchen mein hain beta.

Acha main mom se milke ati hu.

Nahi pooja literally shouted

Nahi?? kyun mama geet asked surprised

wo.. wo.. teri mom busy hain isiliye.

Acha thik hain. Maan n chinna kaha hain.

Wo dono ghar par hi hain,

thik hain mama main jake milti hu.

Thik hain beta.

Ok bye.


Geet went to KM. KM is just 5 min from HM(handa mansion) n saw nakul doing somework in kitchen.

Nakul kaka maan n chinna kaha hain.

Baby wo dono maan beta ke kamre main hain.

Thanku kaka

she just barged into maan s room n saw both watching cricket sitting comfortably on the bed n eating popcorn. They were soo engrossed in the match that, they didnt see geet has come. Just then geet saw that tv remote is on the table. She took the remote n changed the channel. Maan n karthik just turned back to see geet with remote in her hand n smiling at them.


Geet yeh tum kya kar rahi ho interesting match hain said maan

Acha interesting match. Arey yeh dekho kuch kuch hota hain movie mera fav srk. Ab tho main bilkul nahi dungi.

Plz geet just 15 min yaar said chinna.

Nahi nahi main movie complete hone ke baad dungi na.

Plzzz yaar chinna made a pleasing face

Hmm thik hain chinna tum pooch rahe ho na isiliye I am allowing u to see cricket.

Oh thanku geetu.

She just smiled n gave an angry look to maan indicating him that she is still angry on him.

Maan thought: acha madam tho abi bhi naraz hain subah ki baat ko lakar. Hmm ab tho isko manana hi hoga.

Again he started watching cricket. After 30 min match completed. India won the match n they were so happy n saw geet sat on the couch reading some magazine. Maan n chinna sat on either side of her. Maan said

kya hua abi bhi naraz ho mujse.

'...

batao na.

'...

sorry baba main tho sirf mazak kar raha tha

maan jao na geet said chinna

She nodded in a no.

main tumare saath mazak bhi nahi kar sakta kya. Maan said in a sad voice.

Geet is smiling inside but maintained a straight face.

Acha tumko kya chahiye poocho main deta hu but mujse baat karna padega. Batao kya chahiye tumko.

Geet smile became wider n asked

r u sure. Ek baar sochlo.

Pretty sure bolo.

Hmm u should come to shopping on saturday with me. N ab dinner ke liye hum baahar jayenge n muje icecream bhi khana hain.

Maan (st): kya iske saath shopping. She will but whole shop. But I have no other option I have to go. Haan chinna ko saath lekar chalti hu thoda timepass ho jaayega. Aur ab dinner thik hain. N icecream bilkul bhi nahi. Pehle hi isko sinus prob hain.

Hmm thik hain but ek shart.

She asked with a pout wo kya hain.

Hum dinner ke liye chalte hain but no icecream.

Plz maan sirf ek plz plz plz she asked very cutely.

Here maan is melting but dont want to see her sneezing whole night.

Nahi nahi icecream bilkul nahi.

Thik hain main tumse baat nahi karoongi.

Maan (st) : oho main kaha phas gaya hu yaar.

He looked at chinna helplessly. He sighed n told

thik hain chalo ready ho jao.

Geet was very very happy n hugged him tight n went to get ready.

Bro aap chinta mat kijiye.

Kaise chinna ab usko cold hoga jaroor.

Kuch nahi hoga mein dawai lekar aaraha hu wo khane ke baad hum yeh tablet dete hain.

Maan is very happy hearing this.

Hmm thik hain. Par wo tho tablet dekhte hi baag jaayegi. Main kuch karti hu.

They both got ready n went to HM. Wished elders n imformed them that they r going out for dinner. They just nodded but maan understood that what they r thinking.

Maan asked mom vijaya mama thik hain na?

She just nodded n told wo.. kitchen main hain maan.

Maan to chinna: chinna tum geet ke saath car mein baito main abi ata hu.

Ok bro.

Immediately maan went to kitchen n saw that vijaya is crying bitterly.

Maan stood beside her n called mama

she turned to his side n hugged him n crying.

Maan didnt sopke anything just hugged her back. Maan too feeling very bad n tears welled up in his eyes but controlled infront of mama.

Mama aap shant ho jayiye. Kya main aapka beta nahi hu. Agar aap aise haalat mein ho tho papa ko kaun sambhalega n geet ko tho kuch bhi pata nahi hain. Wo kya sochegi.

She just broke the hug cupped his face n kissed his forehead. N smiled at him. Maan is relieved by seeing her smile.

Maan tum hamesha geet ke saath rahogi na.

Mama aap geet ke baare mein chinta mat kijiye. Main geet ko kabhi nahi chodungi.

Thanku maan. I am very much relieved now.

Mama hum dinner ke liye baahar jaa rahe hain kya aap bhi aaogi.

She wiped her tears n told nahi maan aap log jao. Geet bhi aarahi hain kya?

Ha mama plan tho usi ka hain.

Mama just smiled at him.

Thik hain but jaldi aayiye ga.

Ok mama. Aap aaram kijiye hum jaldi ate hain.

Thik hain beta.

Bye mama.

N he left from there.


After some time maan geet n chinna reached restaurent n sat in a corner. N enjoying teasing n talking to eachother. Just then the waiter came n took their orders. Geet ordered her fav punjabi food. Maan n karthik ordered continental n chinese.


They enjoyed their dinner n maan was just admiring geet n her childishness. Karthik is busy in his food. After dinner they went to icecream parlour.

Geet ordered her fav butterscorth n maan n karthik ordered chocolate.

She is enjoyed her each bite of icecream. She is making sounds for each bite.

Umm yummy.

She just ate like a small child. Her hands was full of icecream.

Maan told: geet small kids r better than u. they know how to eat neatly but u. oh god.

Ice cream aisa hi khana hain. Tab hi maza ayega. Tumko kaise pata.

Ha ha thik hain madam. Ab jaldi kao hame jaana hain. Der ho rahi hain.

Arey khane do muje itni jaldi bhi kya hain.

Uffo... thought maan n karthik.

After long time geet completed her icecream n they were going out. Just then they saw sudha di in the parlour with some guy.

Geet told: di yaha kya kar rahi hain.

Geet y people come to icecream parlour ofcourse to eat icecream said karthik.

Arey wah wat an analysis muje tho pata hi nahi hain. Thanks for the info retorted geet sarcastically.

But maan is least interested in their fight n thinking : di yaha kya kar rahi hain. N who is that guy? Muje di se baat karni hogi.


Just then di turned back n saw 3 of them staring at her. She is shocked to see them here.

Oh no yeh log yaha kya kar raha hain. Ab main isko kya bolu. But main kuch galat nahi kar rahi hu na. I love him. But they might have felt bad that I didnt tell them. I am afraid to tell. Ab kya karu.


She just bid good bye to that guy n came to them.

Di: tum log kab aye.

Geet said casually: bas kuch der pehle.

Acha...

di hum ghar jaa rahe hain. Will u come with us?

Ha jaroor chalo geet.

Di nervously sat in the car. Because she know she has to talk to maan.


Precap: next update 2morow mrng guys.

so friends here is part 9. hope u all liked it. Plz hit LIKE button n do COMMENT. Sorry for mistakes.


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part 10: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/50207723


Edited by jyothinajo - 13 years ago

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