MG FF:DISTANCE BRINGS US CLOSER (1-23) parts - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting fr next part...awesome update...
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thnx 4 pm


maan is at the side of geet for a moment there for her and the next moment ready to tease her ...ragging omg



do continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part
loved it
dying to knw wht happen next when maan wil ragg geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
just read ur ff in one go...
simply superb..
pls add me..
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Posted: 13 years ago

hello guys I am here with part 8. n this part is for just fun. Maan want to tease geet. Not a serious ragging.

chapter 8


After completion of 2 hours maan n his gang went to canteen. N here after completion of introduction class geet n her new friends went towards canteen. She saw maan there but there is no reaction from maan so she went n ordered coke for all her friends n sat on one the tables.

Here maan decided to tease geet.

Maan told to his gang : guys I think they r 1sy year students tho raggingnahi karenge aap log.

His gang is shocked to hear this.

All in unison: WHAT???

maan tum thik ho na said sameera.

Maan gave her a look n said ofcourse guys.

Woww maan tum aur ragging. Great man chal karte hain.

By this thay called geet n her gang.

Hey girls come here called pari.

Pinky n deepu were very much tensed literally they were shivering with fear. But geet n swetha were very cool.

Geet I told u na not to come to canteen. Now see what is happening said deepu.

Ha geet hame yaha aana nahi chahiye tha told pinky.

Just cool guys they r just seniors told geet.

She made a baby face at maan n he just smirked as if telling that no use of those faces now.

Soon geet deepu pinky n swetha went towards them n stood there silently.

What are ur names guys asked sameera

they all told one by one.

Geet

de..deep...deepti

swetha

pin... pinky

geet n swetha r not soo tensed as they knew maan there but didnt reveal that matter. One side swetha is drolling over maan n other side rahul is drolling over deepu by seeing her full of fear. N maan n geet having their eye war. Pari n sameera decided just to do a friendly talk. So sam asked

hey gals u all r from which group?

All in unison: electronics.

Greats guys

thanku said all in unison

Maan looking at geet: hello miss... (acting as id he didnt know the name)

geet shot an angry glare at him but he ignored.

Geet. Geet handa she said with attitude.

Seniors thought that she is showing attitude to maan. Best of luck girl.

Maan just gave a lopsided smile.

Dont u know how to give respect to your seniors.

Geet gave him a confused look like what did I do now. Here maan is having full fun by seeing her face n enjoying her plight.

Now geet is loosing her patience and asked: what did I do now.

Dont u know that u have to call ur seniors as mam n sir.

Here rahul, rohan, pari n sam r hell shocked listening to him n thought what happened to him today. He never encourages ragging but today. Something is fishy.

Now our geet is super duper angry n thought: what? I have to call him sir. What the hell.

Now she cant fight with him so with no other option she told: ok SIR. Sorry SIR.

Hmmm ok.

Here pari saw rahul drooling over deepu n signalled rohan. Rohan saw rahul n called him

rahul.

'...

he shouted RAHUL!!

he came out of his trance n looked at rohan as if n smiled at him nervously.

Rohan asked kaha ho tum.

Main kaha hu. Yaha hi hu na.

Acha n just smirked at him

rahul thought oh god kaha phas gaya hu main. Now they will tease me to hell.

They asked to tell their BD(bio-data).

Rahul asked deepti to tell first. She is very scared. N completed with great difficulty with the help of rahul. He just asured her not to be tensed. She is relieved by his support. Next pinky n swetha completed n its time for geet to tell. When others r telling maan was quiet but now nooo way to keep quiet. Poor geet she started

good morning sir.

Miss. Geet here not only me even others r also there.

She just glared at him n told

good morning mam n sir.

My name is geet handa. My father name is anand handa. My...

maan interrupted her n asked dont u give respect to ur parents complete the sentence with 'ji'

geet is fully pissed off n told my fathers name is anand handa ji n works fot KT. My mother is vijaya handa ji.n she is a house maker. Completed my schooling in ****** school.

At the same time adi came to canteen to meet maan n shocked to see geet there. As he dont know that maan is teasing geet he came n wished both maan n geet.

Hi maan. Hi geet kaise ho geet?

Geet didnt reply anything but maan told hi adi.

All other friends of maan wished adi. Pari asked

hey adi do u know geet.

Adi saw maan n maan nodded for a no.

ha yes she is my friends friend. N like my sister.

Oh said pari.

Adi just then saw swetha n pinky talking something n as he knows swetha too wished her.

Hi swetha. How r u?

Swetha replied negligibly: hi adi. I am fine.

Maan didnt like the negligence in her voice n about to say something but geet interrupted as she know that maan wont like swetha so as geet.

SIR I completed my BD can we go now.

But our maan is maan he told: oh really u completed but we didnt listen tell once again.

Once again? No I wont tell. Its ur mistake that u didnt listen.

Adi is just staring at them like whats wrong with these two. Y she is calling him sir. Then he understood that maan is ragging geet.

What do u mean by u wont tell. Is that the way to talk to ur seniors he said in a fake stern voice.

Geet is irritated, angry n as well as pissed off with his behaviour. Maan easily understood her plight by seeing her face n controlling his laughter.

When she is about to retort back just then sid entered canteen n wished maan n others (sid is maan s class mate n a big big flirt) others replied him casually as they wont like his nature.

When sid saw geet he was drooling at her with lustful eyes n asked her

hey sexy. Whats ur name ?

Geet felt uncomfortable with the word 'sexy' n the way he is seeing her from top to bottom. Maan was hell angry with his behaviour n geet asking with her eyes to help her. Maan told to geet n her friends.

Hey dont u have class now y u r wasting ur time in canteen just go n attend ur classes.

Maan knew that first day they dont have classes except intro class n it is completed. But he dont want geet to be in trouble because of that sid.

By listening to maan first geet got angry but understood that maan is helping her to get rid of sid.

All in unison: yes sir.

They went to their class. But here sid is disappointed that he couldnt talk to geet. But couldnt ask maan anything as he knew his anger. N he went off.

Arey maan itna gussa just chill man told adi.

Agli baar uss sid ne geet ki taraf dekha na tho uske liye acha nahi hoga.

Adi sensed he is super duper anger n tried to change the topic.

Maan ek baat batao. U r doing RAGGING wo bhi geet ko.

By this maan n adi burst into laughter. N all others r seeing them like r they humans. Y they laughing without any reason.

All the four shouted in unison: stop laughing.

Maan n adi stopped laughing n saw their confused faces n again started laughing. After sometime they controlled their laughter.

What happened guys asked maan.

What happened that u r asking us said rahul.

Y u r laughing like maniacs retorted sam.

Uhhh nothing guys just like that.

Kya??? adi u tell wats the matter.

Chill guys maine kaha na ki meri ek best friend hain said maan

Ha all said in unison

wo.. koi aur nahi geet hi hain.

oh... thay said casually n then KYA?????

ha kyun kya hua??

ohhh ab humko samaj mein aya ki tumne ragging kyun kiya.

Hmmm this is just to tease her thats it. N no one should raag anyone ok?

Ok boss... n they thought acha just friend. Hame tho aisa nahi lagta. Dekte hain n they smiled at him.


On the other hand geet is happy that she is relieved from that sis but hell angry that maan teased her like anything.


Swetha is burning with jealousy that maan didnt talk to her anything he was just talking with geet. So she is planning to be close to maan n make him fall for her. Ab muje kuch karna hoga iss geet ki wajah se wo meri taraf dekhta hi nahi.


She came out of her trance when geet called her.

Swetha chalo chlate hain.

Ha geet chalo.

swetha went to her hostel n geet went out of the college n decided to take a taxi. But then she got a message to her mobile. It was from maan.


Geet wait for 5 min I will be coming.

But geet replied no need senior SIR I will go myself.

Maan read that message: tho madam is very very angry dekhte hain.


Immediately he went to parking lot n went out n saw geet waiting for a taxi still. He just stopped the car infront of her. She just ignored him. But she cant see him waiting for her on the road like that so she sat in the car. N both drove to home.

Thay both went to KM n saw that both moms r talking n enjoying. Geet went n sat in between 2 moms n told her wat happened in the college except the maan ragging part.


After some time geet went to karthik s room as she couldnt talk in the mrng. Without knocking the door she just went inside. N saw him doing some work.


Hey chinna.

Hey geet. So tell me how was ur first day.

College tho bohot acha hain. When about to tell something maan came there n sat in the couch. But geet didnt care him n continued

aur acha friends mile aur swetha bhi hamara class main hi hain.

Acha so u 2 sisters enjoyed.

Ya sort of.

Sort of y what happened?

Geet just glared at maan n told to chinna: pata nahi hamare colege mein seniors apne aap ko kya samaj the hain. Muje geet handa ko ragging kiya aur keh rahe the ki I dont have manners. How dare he.

Kya kaun hain wo??

aur kaun ho sakta hain geet se iss tarah baat karne wala.

Karthik is confused n asked arey batao na kaun hain?

Geet gave maan an angry look n told

Tumara bro MR. MAAN SINGH KHURANA.

Kya bro???

ha tumara bro kyun?? yakeen nahi hain. N he was telling that we should call him SIR.

Arey mazak nahi kar sakta main. It was just for fun told maan

Fun? Ahaaa tho u were telling that I dont have manners n all. Wo sab kya hain.

Ha main tho sach hi kaha na isme galti kya hain.

Geet opened her mouth in a big O

kya?? kya kaha tumne.

Maine kya kaha kuch bhi tho nahi.

Jhoot mat bol.

Maan singh khurana kabhi jhoot nahi bolta.

Aha bada aya. Maan singh khurana kabhi jhoot nahi bolta she immitated him.

Geeettt

N they both started fighting. Poor karthik he was trying to stop them but no they were no where to listen.

N shouted: STOP IT U 2.

they both became silent geet stomped her foot n went to handa haveli.


Precap: maan manofying geet.

Sudha di tensed... y????


so friends here is the part 8. hope u all like it(fingers crossed)

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part 9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/50169434

Edited by jyothinajo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum part...and thanx for the pm..
luvd the ragging session a lot..
but at the same tym luvd his concern too...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

awesum part...and thanx for the pm..
luvd the ragging session a lot..
but at the same tym luvd his concern too...


thanku dear... 😊
glad u liked it... any suggestions r most welcome
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved ragging part
precap is interseting
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thx for the PM.

Awesome post.Great job.
Keep it up.👏

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