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Awesome update geet toh nautanki baaz haai bechari sudha di...
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Superb...Superb...Superb... šŸ‘ This ff is really amazing !!! can't wait !! i read all the parts in one go !!! Love ur writing !!! Waiting for next update !!! If u can , then plzz update daily !!! i ll b verrry happy !!!!!! šŸ˜› ā¤ļø
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hi i just read this ff
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really maan caring towards geet is awesome
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Chapter 10


All the four sat in the car. Karthik is driving the car n di sat beside him n maan n geet in back seat. The drive was so silent. On one side di is very very tensed how should tell about her love to them. How they will react. She thought its better to tell maan first that she loves him a lot. He will understand for sure. After going home she decided to tell him what ever be his reaction but its compulsory to tell.

Yes its better to tell him.

On the other hand geet is feeling very bored. Actually when they four meet together there will be full of njoyment but today all r very silent. Di is also very tensed something is wrong she thought. After a long 5 min of silence geet decided to break the silence.

Sab kuch thik hain na.

All of them turned faced her.

Ha kya hua replied maan.

Phir sab log itna chup kyun hain.

um.. kuch nahi geet told di.

Di y u r so tensed aapki tabiyat tho thik hain na.

Ha geet I am absolutely fine.

Phir... when she was about to tell something maan interrupted.

Geet thodi der chup ahi bait sakti.

She frowned n twisted her lips n sat quitely.

After some time geet rested her head on maan s shoulder. Maan got worried n asked.

Kya hua geet tum thik tho ho na?

Nahi maan muje sar dard(head ache) ho raha hain.

Then maan remembered : oh god, I forgot to give u medicine.

Geet utho take medicine. Chinna give me the tablet.

Karthik gave him the medicine.

Maan muje medicine nahi lena hain. Plz.

Nahi geet if u dont take then u will catch cold.

No maan plz n she started sneezing badly.

Now all r worried.

Geet utho plz geet said di.

Geet took medicine in one hand n water in other hand n making faces that she dont want to take medicine.

But all r no where to leave

geetu dont make faces its no use he said strenly.

With no other option geet took the medicine. But she is sneezing badly. She is very tired n slept on maan s shoulder. After sometime they reached HM n geet is in deep sleep. Di tried to wake her up.

Geet utho bacha hum ghar pahunch gaye.

But she is very tired so she didnt get up.

Maan slowly came out of car n went to geet s side. He took her in his arms. Geet circled her hands around his neck. N he went inside n saw that elders r waiting for them. They all saw geet in maan s arms n got tensed. Anand asked

geet kya hua? Maan geet ko kya hua?

Kuch nahi papa wo car mein so gayi thi. Isiliye aur kuch nahi.

By listening this all r relieved. N maan took geet to her room n made her sleep on the bed n tucked her with blanket.

Chachi we will sit with her for sometime. U all go n rest.

Ha mama usko sar dard ho raha hain. Hum yaha par rahte hain.

Sar dard ho raha hain kyun kya hua? Asked vijaya mom worriedly.

Kuch nahi mama geet icecream khayi thi isiliye. Aur humne medicines de diye hain.

Icecream? Yeh ladki bhi na. Doctor ne mana kiya na phir bhi.

Mama isme geet ki koi galti nahi hain. Humne hi usko parlour lekar gaye the.

But she is not convinced she knows how ziddi is geet. But she didnt tell anything.

Agar kuch chahiye tho muje bolna ok?

Ok chachi. Good night.

She kissed geets forehead n told good night to all n left from there.

Mama pehle hi upset thi aaj aur yeh sab told maan.

Mama upset thi kyun bro?

Umm... kuch nahi tum jao main thodi der baad ati hu.

Its ok bro. I will also stay.

U go chinna. We r there na. U go n take rest.

Ok bro. Good night di. Gud night bro.

Good night karthik.

Karthik left from there. Maan sat beside geet on her bed n made her to sleep on his lap n starting massaging her head so that she can feel relaxed. Geet cuddled up close to him n slept peacefully. Di just sat on the couch. After some time di told.

Maan u go I will look after her.

Its ok di u go n sleep I will stay with geet.

Maan u were telling that chachi is upset today. What happened?

wo.. aaj vinod bhai ke baare mein sochkar upset thi. Bohot ro rahi thi.

Di too became dull by listening this. She controlled her tears.

Maan called di.

He looked at her.

wo.. wo.. muje tumse kuch baat karni thi.

Di bohot raat ho chuki hain. Aap aaram kijiye hum kal subah baat karte hain.

Par... maan

plz di.

Ok gud night. Saying so she left the room.


Maan just staring at sleeping geet n kissed her forehead.

Maan (st) : kitni pyari lagti ho geet tum soote hue. I just want u to be in my arms forever. Main tumse bohot pyaar karta hu geet. Kya tumbhi mujse pyaar karti ho? Main tume takleef main nahi dekh sakta hu geet. Jab tum hasti ho na tab muje bohot khush hoti hain. Jab tum ro thi ho tab muje takleef hota hain. Aaj maine mama ko promise kiya ki main kabhi bhi tumko nahi chodungi ha geet main kabhi nahi yeh mera waada hain. Maan singh khurana ka waada. I love u geet. U r colour in my life. I cant imagine my life without u. will u ever love me kya tum apni maan se pyaar karti ho?


N he kept staring at her angelic face n left her room after sometime.

He went to his room n changed into pants n vests n went to bed. He dossed off by thinking about geet.


Next day morning he got up n went to his gym for workout. After sometime he got ready n wore his fav black shirt n black jeans looking extremely hot.

He went downstairs n saw his mom arranging for breakfast.

Arey maan aaj itni jaldi aagaye tum.

Kuch nahi mom bas aise hi.

Acha thik hain. 5 min wait karo breakfast laati hu.

Ok mom.

She went to kitchen to bring breakfast. Just rishab came there n saw maan.

Maan wished him: good mrng dad

good mrng maan.

Just then pooja came n served breakfast for both of them.

Hmmm maan future ka kya plan hain. Koi further studies asked rishab.

Hmm dad final year ke baad MS karna chati hu.

Oh wow thats great maan.

MS?? matlab u r going abroad for 2 years asked pooja.

Um.. wo... ha mom.

Kya?? 2 years.. nahi nahi tum delhi mein hi higher studies karlo.

But mom main MS karna chati hu. Plz mom just 2 years thats it. Aur just now final year started. More 1 year is there mom.

Even though 1 year ke baad tho jaana hi hain na.

Mom plzz.

Let me think.

Mama isme think karne ki koi baat nahi hain came geet s voice from back.

All of them turned back n saw her. Immediately maan went to her n asked

geet tum thik tho ho na? Sar dard kam hua na?

Ha maan ab main bilkul thik hu.

Naastha kiya tumne.

She said with a pout nahi.

Arey beta aao naastha karlo.

Aarahi hu mama. (whispered to maan) tum kaha jaa rahe ho?

He dont want to discuss about anything now so changed the topic. Pehle naastha karlo baad mein baat karte hain.

Maan (st) : all the 3 ladies in my life they wont accept for sure now I should I convince them. Atleast dad is with me. Huh!!

they all r having breakfast with geet blaberring n all r listening quitely n laughing at her jokes.

Pooja asked geet: beta kal saturday hain na koi plans hain kya.

Ha mama shopping jaa rahi hu.

Kiske saath.

Geet eyed towards maan.

Pooja iis shocked: WHAT?? maan.

For this maan made a baby face n looked at her mom as if seeking for some help.

All of them burst into laughter by seeing his face.

Aww.. maan u r looking so cute.

Maan made a weird face n told cute?? MSK n cute.

For this geet just rolled her eyes n told: oh cute nahi dusht danav hain na?

Nice one geet told pooja.

They both started giggling n maan shot them a glare.

Geet agar aaj tum late hui na tho main tumko chodkar chala jaaonga dekho.

Kya? Geet handa ko damki de rahe ho?

Ha aisa hi sochlo.

Sirf ek din uske baat hain?

Ek din matlab?

Today evng dad aur main going to buy new bike. Hahaha so only today u have to drop me.

He started laughing. They all didnt understand y he is laughing.

Geet is very angry now y u r laughing. Wat so funny in that.

He told in between his laughter: tum aur bike.

Ha kya hua.

Tumko bike chalna ata hain kya? Without knowing how to drive how can u go?

Poor geet now she realised that she dont know driving. She made a baby face to maan n asked very cutely: maan plz plz tum muje sikaona driving.

Maan (st): oh geet if u ask me so cutely how can I say no? Ofcourse I will tumari har khwaish main poora karonga.

But he want to tease her.

Dekhti hu he said with attitude.

Kya?? dekhti hu. She made a crying face n faced mama n told: dekha mama kitna attitude dikha raha hain. Pehli baar maine kuch poocha aur yeh.

Kya ?? pehli baar.. omg.. geet jhoot bolna koi tumse seekhe.

Dekha papa main aur jhoot. Main kabhi jhoot bolti hu kya?

Poor mama n papa phas gaye in dono ke jhagde mein. But they r enjoying their cute fight. After a long fight they stopped but maan enjoyed pampering her n finally told

thik hain thik hain I will help u. but 2morow mrng sharp 5 am. Thik hain?

Kya 5 am itni jaldi. She thought for sometime n told hmm thik hain I will be ready. Ab tho college chalo.


By this they both sat in the car. Maan started driving. They both went to college. 1st day no one observed them but today many students saw that maan coming with a girl. N all the girls r jealous of geet that she is coming with the hot n handsome guy of the college. All r just staring at her when she got out of car. Geet found it weird n thought y all r seeing me like this. But she just ignored n walked towards her class.


On the other hand maan parked the car n came out. Seeing him in black n black all the girls were drolling over him. But he ignored n went to his class. When he entered the class he just remembered about di. He msged di that he will meet her after class at coffee day. Di received the msg n read it.

She replied : ok @ 1 pm.

Maan replied : ok


after the classes got over n its almost linch time. He waited for geet to inform her that he is going out n pick her up 3. n he saw her going to canteen for lunch.


He called her: geet

she turned back n saw him : kya maan.

Main kuch jaroori kaam se baahar jaa raha hu. I will come at 3 to pick u up. Ok?

Ok maan. U carry on. Agar late hua tho phone kar dena I will come by taxi.

Koi jaroorat nahi geet I will come.

She smiled at him n told ok.


She went to canteen n maan went to coffee day to meet di.

Once he entered there saw di is already waiting for him n looking nervous. Maan went there n sat beside her. Di looked at him n smiled.

Waiter came there n took their order. Both ordered black coffee. There sat in silence for few min n di decided to break the silence.

Maan I am sorry. Muje tumse kuch chupaane ka iraada nahi tha bus muje darr lag raha tha.

Di sorry bolne ki koi jaroorat nahi hain. Main samaj sakta hu.

Thanku very much maan. wo... wo...

maan just kept his hand on hers n assured her to speak.

Maan uska naam yash hain. Hum dono ek hi college mein padte the n even classmates. Hum dono ek project mein ek saath kaam kiya aur hum ache friends bane the. We both understood each other n ek din jab hum dono bahar gaye the usne muje propose kiya. Aur mein bohot khush hui thi n I told him yes. wo.. yash malhotra MD of malhotra constructions. Wo bohot ache insaan hain aur muje bohot pyaar karta hain maan.

Maan listened quitely to di. N understood that how much they love each other. N even maan heard about malhotras they r nice people n very respecful in society. Maan is very happy for di.

Once again I am sorry maan.

Di aap shanth ho jayiye. Muje iss relation se koi problem nahi hain. N I know about yash he is a nice person even though I didnt meet him in personal.

But maan chachi aur chachu ko kaise...

u dont worry di. I will talk to them.

Di just hugged him n had tears in her eyes. Maan broke the hug n wiped her tears n told not to cry.

Di yeh good news kya aap apni behen ko nahi bataoge.

She just blushed n nodded for a no.

kyun ?

She will tease me to hell.

Ab tho batana hi padega.

Di its 2:30 chalo college chalte hain. Have to pick up geet.

ok.

so they left to college. As they reached college they saw geet waiting for him. Maan n di came out of car n geet is surprised to see di.

Wow... di aap iss waqt yaha.

Ha wo... maan se milne ayi thi.

oh.. ok di chalo ghar chalte hain.

Ek min geet tumse kuch baat karni hain told maan.

Maan abi nahi plzzz told di.

But maan is nowhere to listen. Arey di kuch nahi hoga. Agar maine usse yeh baat chupaya tho she will eat my brain.

Geet opened her mouth in a O. but ignored his statement n asked di.

Kya baat hain di she asked curiously.

Thats it maan told the whole thing. Geet is shocked, surprised, happy, sad.

Sad that di didnt tell them, shocked that she is in love n happy that she is happy. Immediately she hugged her tight n shoued congosss di.Omg... I am very very happy.

Di too hugged her back n told thanku geet.

Oho di aap tho bade chupe rustum nikle teased geet.

Di just blushed.

Ohhh abi se sharma rahe ho. Oyeee hoyeee.

Now di is blushng furiously n told chup kar geet.

Di di di muje jiju se milna hain.

Geet abi nahi pehle ghar chalo told maan.

Abi kyun nahi pouted geet.

Di told wo.. business ki kaam se aaj subah hi london gaye hain.

Acha thik hain.


By this they all headed to ghar.


Precap: driving classes for geet by maan. (ahem ahem šŸ˜‰ )

reaction of elders in di's matter. 😲


Hello friends here is part 10. hope u like it(fingers crossed)

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Edited by jyothinajo - 13 years ago
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hiii friends.
thanku very much for ur support n encouragement. 😊😃
from 2morow my semister exams r starting . 😭
so for next 10 days i cant update regularly... 😭
but i will try to give one or 2 updates in the middle ... i am very sorry friends... plz
after that i will update daily. 😊



thanku
JYOTHI

Edited by jyothinajo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnx 4 pm


me first omg yay😊

best of luck 4 ur exams


we'll wait 4 the update


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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update.
love it.
continue soon.
thx for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry dear like button is not working
I just love Maan kitna care karta hai Geet ka
i personally loved his selftalk when geet was sleeping
driving lessons by maan 😳 waiting for it
all the best for your exams jyothi
love-Piya
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanku Best of luck for your exams

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