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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: valli22




geetko bak bak karneka aadath hai..
4hrs...is very short ..








hahaha... yeh tho sach hain.. 4hrs is very short for geet but poor maan...
thanku dear... 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Rupal

Nice one..

Good job..
Keep it up👏


thanku very much rupal... 😊
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awww thanku soo much dear... 😊
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thanku soo much dear... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maneetlover1

Wow awesme superb update.waitng 4 next part


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thanku dear... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hello friends thanku very much for such wonderful comments. I have replied to all. Plzz check in before page. So here is the part 7


CHAPTER 7


past:


After 4 hours of talking they both cut the phone. Maan went to gym for work out. N geet logged on her lappy to listen songs. By listening songs she slept. At 7 am vijaya came to geet s room to see whether she got ready or not. But when she entered the room she saw geet sleeping peacefully. She was shocked to see her sleep 1st day college she will get late. She tried to wake her up.

Geet utho beta.

'.

geet uhto.

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by that she shouted GEET!!

geet woke up with a jerk.

Uu huuu kya hua mom.

Kya hua? Time dekha tumne 7 baj gaye hain tum abi tak so rahi ho. Chalo utho taiyyar ho jao. Maan will come by 8 beta.

Oh crap 7 baj gaye. thik hain abi shower leke ati hu.

Hmm jaldi.

Geet went inside washroom n mom started cleaning her room.

Yeh ladki bhi na koi kaam thik se nahi karti. Itna ghanda rakha hain room ko. Dont know when she will learn all these.

Geet shouting from washroom.

Mom towel aur koi nighty dena I forgot. Plzzz

then mom gave her n geet came out by wearing nighty. She went to her cupboard n kept all the dresses on the bed.

Yeh kya sab. Main tho abi abi saaf kiya.

Wo sab chodo mom. Muje samaj mein nahi aaraha hain kya pehnu.

Kuch bhi pehen le sab kuch acha hain na.

Nahi mom plzz help karo na.

Hmm thik hain wo blue jeans aur light green top acha hain.

Wooo.. nahi mom.

She gave her several options but she rejected all. Now mom is annoyed,

jab tumo sab kuch reject karna tha tho poocha hi kyun.

Geet made a baby face n said sorry mom.

Its already 7:50 n geet didnt decide which dress to wear. By the time maan came to her room n saw the whole in mess n geet is sitting in the middle n mom standing aside. Maan is shocked to see this n asked.

Mama yeh sab kya hain

poocho mat beta. She is not able to understand which dress to wear. Dekho kya haal kiya is room ka.

Geet... yeh sab kya hain jaldi ready ho jao. Maine kaha na 8 baje tak ready hojane ke liye.

wo... wo... sorry maan.

I dont know that u should be ready within 5 min.

5 min yeh kaise ho sakta hain maan.

No fast. Or else I will go without u only.

U cheat.

Maan just smirked n said fast geet n went out.

Geet murmured dusht danav n hurriedly picked one yellow top n blue jeans with small diamond earrings n very little makeup. She got ready n went downstairs. Its already 8:15.

maan I am ready chalo chalte hain.

Geet puttar thoda naashta karke jao beta said her dad.

Nahi dad late ho gayi main. N if I get more late this dusht danav will kill me today.

Kya? Kya kaha tumne asked maan

Main kuc.. kuch nahi geet said stamerring.

Atlest juice tho peeke jao said mom

She hurriedly went n drank juice in one go. N took blessings from mom n dad.

Mom n dad: all the best beta.

Thanku mom thanku dad.

Maan n geet went towards car n geet said

ek min maan main abi ayi.

Geet phir se kya we r already late. Only 20 min hain college jane main. U will be late on 1st day only.

Plzz maan ek min pleejjj

maan just shook his head n geet went to KM to take the blessings of pooja n rishab.

Mama papa aap log kaha ho?

Geet beta hum yaha hain came pooja s voice from hall. There in the hall rishab is checking some files n pooja is helping him.

Mama papa aaj mera 1st day collge hain. I came to take blessings of u both.

They both r very happy by her sweet nature n told all the best beta.

Thanku mama thanku papa.

Hey geetu came karthik s voice from upstairs. He came down n they both hugged each other.

Hey chinna I will talk to u later. I am already late.

Hmm ofcourse u r late. N all the best not for college, for bro s reaction now.

She made a face n said thanku.

She rushed outside n saw maan fuming.

She said cutely maan chale.

Geet tumko pata bhi hain ab time kya hain.

Maan tum watch bhool gaye kya. Ab time 8:40 hain.

Oh ya thanks for the imformation maan said sarcastically.

Its ok maan isme thanks ki baat kya hain. Chalo maan.

Maan is in drivers seat n geet sat beside him n headed towards college.

Maan drove as fast as possible. 1st time in his life he drove that fast because it will take 40 min to reach college but thanks to geet as she is late. He left only with 20 min to reach college. N he dont want geet to be late so he drove as fast as possible. Just on time they reached.

Both geet n maan sighed in relief.

Thanku maan u r the best.

Maan just smiled at her. She came out of the car n headed towards her class. N maan came out of car with full attitude with his black gogles n went towards his class. As maan is final year thay have only 2 hrs a day n other time some spend their time in library

some spend their time in canteen

n some guys will be flirting with girls

some spend by chit chatting.

Maan entered class with full attitude looking extremely hot. All girls were drolling ober him n boys were jealous. Maan went towards his gang.

His gang consists of rahul, rohan, pari, sameera. They all r best buddies n read together, hangout together. They will do lot of masti. As soon as maan entered the class he saw them discussing something.

Hey buddies watz up?

wo.. maan aaj tho kuch gadbad hoga said pari.

Kyun asked maan.

Omg.. the great MAAN SINGH KHURANA is late today said rohan

rahul said wohi tho kya baat hain maan n winked at him

maan rolled his eyes n said stop it guys kabhi kabhi late hota hain.

Than all of them shouted OHHH.

Shut up guys.

Acha thik hain baitho na tum kade kyun ho said sam.

Thanks yaar. Acha aaj ka kya plan hain.

Kuch nahi said rahul.

Then rohan said aaj class ke baad canteen jaate hain waise aaj 1st year students aye hain na. Dekhte hain koi ache ladki mil jaye. Hayeee he said dreamily.

Pari slapped on his arm.

Rohan cried in pain n said kya hain.

Kuch tho sharam karo tumari GF tumare baaju mein baithi hain aur tum dusri ladki ke baare mein soch rahe ho said pari.

Pari n rohan r in relation from 2 years.

Rohan smiled at her cheekily. All the others burst out in laughter.

After 2 hrs they all went to canteen.


On the other hand, geet went to her class n saw that already many students have come. She went inside the class n sat on the 3rd bench there is already a girl sitting there. As geet sat there that girl looked at her n smiled.

Hi she told nervously.

Hi I am geet.

I am deepti.

Nice name.

Thanku said deepti.

Its ok. Where r u from?

I am from hyderabad.

Oh ok. U r looking soo tensed.

Ha I am scared. Wo kya hain na seniors juniors ko ragging karte hain na.

Oh dont worry. Nothing will happen.

Yeah n smiled nervously. By that time one of the faculty came n asked all the students to introduce themselves. After 1 hour lecturer told

ok students enough for today. From next week ur classes will start n he gave few instructions. Ok bye for today. N all the best students.

All in choros thanku sir.

N after sometime all the students r introducing themselves.

Geet n deepti were talking to each other suddenly a girl came to them. They both saw her n smiled. That girl introduced herself.

Hi I am pinky.

Hi I am geet n she is deepti.

Hi deepti told pinky.

Hi pinky.

By the time swetha(geets cousin) came n hugged geet.

Geet kaise hain tu.

I am fine swetha. Tum kaise ho?

I am fine n she introduces deepti n pinky.

They all talked for sometime n decided to go to canteen.

No no no I wont come. Waha seniors hote hain said deepu.

Arey deepu kuch nahi hoga yaar said geet.

Nahi geet plzz

kaha na kuch nahi hoga.

By this she dragged her n all went to canteen. As they entered canteen geet saw maan n his gang chatting. Maan looked at her n she gave a sweet smile but he didnt react. She frowned at his action n thoght

kya hua isko. Gusse main hain kya subah ki baat se.

maan thought: aha geet 1st day hi canteen ayi ho ab dekhna.

Geet sat with her friends in ordered coke for all.

Maan told to his gang : guys I think they r 1sy year students tho raggingnahi karenge aap log.

His gang is shocked to hear this.

All in unison: WHAT???

maan tum thik ho na said sameera.

Maan gave her a look n said ofcourse guys.

Woww maan tum aur ragging. Great man chal karte hain.

By this thay called geet n her gang.

Hey girls come here called pari.


Precap: omg.. maan ragging geet.

Geet angry... poor karthik


sorry friends for same precap.

Here is the part 7. plzz hit LIKE n do comment. Thanku veru much friends for ur encouragement. hope u all like this part(fingers crossed)

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Thanku

-JYOTHI

part 8: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/50065677


Edited by jyothinajo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oye me second
great part dear😊
maan is gonna raag geet😲🤢
sounds interesting😉
Edited by Appy - 13 years ago

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