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So sweet of u all to appreciate my story that much
Don't worry
Aaj next part aa jayega
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Recap: Sujal has stopped talking to Karan till he reforms. Karan goes to Nandini's house to say sorry but when she speaks something about Sujal & Karan's friendship, Karan, out of frustration, kisses her. It's Valentines Day and Kashish indirectly proposes Sujal.

LOVE ME SAB CHALTA HAI – PART 11
It takes a minute to Sujal to understand what Kashish just said.
Sujal: Iska kya matlab?
Kashish: Ab ye bhi mai samjhaoon? Yes Mr.Sujal…………I love you. And I am very serious.
Sujal gets highly disturbed and moves forward.
Kashish: Kya hua Sujal? Maine aisa kya keh diya? I thought ye baat tumhe ab tak to mehsoos ho gayi hoga!
Sujal: Please Kashish! Mujhe akela chod do! (And he leaves)
Kashish is shocked at his behaviour and as she turns, she finds Karan standing there.
Karan: Tumhe use aisa nahin kehna chahiye tha!
Kashish: Lekin maine aisa kya kaha? Use I Love You to kitni ladkiyaan bolti hain, par use is tarah upset hote hue to kabhi nahin dekha!
Karan: Un saari ladkiyon se vo pyaar nahin karta na!
Kashish: You mean he too loves me?
Karan: Agar mai use jaanta hoon to mai ye keh sakta hoon ki vo tumhaare liye feel to zaroor karta hai. Lekin……………….
Kashish: Lekin kya?
Karan: Sorry Kashish! Ye Sujal ke past ki ek aise sachchai hai jise mai kisi ke saamne bhi disclose nahin kar sakta. Please don't force me. Aur haan! Agar Sujal ko phir se normal behave karte dekhna chahti ho to use jaakar keh do ki tum mazaak kar rahi thi.
Kashish: But I'm damn serious Karan!!!! Trust me!
Karan: Please Kashish! We better not discuss this topic anymore!!!!!!
Karan leaves from there and Kashish is standing there very much disturbed and lost.
On the other side, Karan goes to Nandini.
Karan: Hi Nandini!
Nandini: Tum! Please either you leave or I will.
Karan: Kal maine jo kuch bhi kiya uske liye I'm sorry. Please Nandini! Mai to kal bhi tumhe sorry kehne hi aaya tha, vo to tumne hi mujhe gussa dilaaya!
Nandini: Acha!!!!! Gussa maine dilaaya? Gusse me koi aisa karta hai?
Karan: Lekin maine kiya kya???????
Nandini: Acha! Tumne kal mujhe……………..
Nandini is a bit embarrassed aur sharma ke vo vahan se chali jaati hai. Karan too smiles.
Sujal is sitting alone at a beach, lost in some memories.
Flashback:
Sujal ki ankhon par patti bandhi hai aur vo kisi ko dhoodh raha hai.
Sujal: Kahan ho tum? Patti kholon kya? Khushi!!!!!!!!
Khushi: Tum itne restless kyon ho? Do min ruko!
Sujal: Itni der ho gayi! Ab aur wait nahin kar sakta mai!
Khushi: Bas just a second more!!!!!!!!!! Ho gaya!
Sujal: To ab mai apne ankhein kholon?
Khushi: Haan!
As he opens his eyes, he sees his house decorated fully.
Khushi: Kaisa laga mera surprise? Happy Valentines Day!!!!!!
Sujal: Surprise to theek-thaak hai! Vaise aaj Valentines Day hai?
Khushi: Don't tell me ki tumhe yaad nahin tha!
Sujal: Isme yaad rakhne wala kya hai? Vaise, Happy Valentines Day.
Khushi: Maine itni mehnat ki aur tum? Tumhe yaad……………
Just then Sujal presented a gift to her.
Khushi: Tumhe yaad tha! Yes, I knew ki tum nahin bhool sakte.
Sujal: But obviously Khushi! Mai ye din kaise bhool sakta hoon. Ye to pyaar karne walon ka din hai naa aur mai to is duniya me sabse bada deewaana hoon.
Khushi: Acha! To ye bhi bata deejiye ki kiske deewane hain aap.
Sujal: Hai ek pagal! Khushi naam hai uska.
And they both laugh.
End of the Flashback
Sujal is crying and Karan comes.
Sujal: Tu! Yahan kya kar raha hai? Tujhe kaise pata mai yahan hoon?
Karan: Tere baare me pata lagane ke liye mujhe kisi source ki zaroorat nahin hai. Tu phir vo sab sochna laga………Tu apne past ko bhoolna ki koshish kyon nahin karta?
Sujal: Bhool jaaon? Kaise bhool jaaon Karan? Tu bata, apni zindagi ko main kaise bhula doon?
Karan: Dekh Sujal! Past me life nahin jee jaati. Khushi tera kal thi samjha!
Sujal: Par vo meri zindagi hai. Abhi tak mai use!!!!!!!! Kaise bhool jaaon ki meri wajah se vo (He is crying bitterly and hugs Karan) Mujhe meri Khushi vapas chahiye Karan! Mai uske bina jee nahin sakta Karan. Shayad isiliye maine aaj tak kisi ladki ko apne kareeb nahin aane diya. Magar Kashish……….
Karan: Magar Kashish ki baat alag hai. Kyonki tu us se pyaar…………
Sujal: Nahin! Mai us se pyaar nahi karta! Maine pyaar sirf Khushi se kiya tha!
Karan: Khushi ab teri zindagi me nahin aa sakti. Ye ek sachchai hai. Usi tarah ye bhi ek sachchai hai ki Kashish teri zindagi me aa chuki hai. Ab tu is sachchai ko maan ya thukra. Ye teri marzi hai. Lekin! Tu Kashish ko chahta hai, ispar ab teri marzi nahin chal sakti. Kyonki pyaar kiya nahin jaata, bas ho jaata hai.
Sujal: Mai nahin manta.
Karan: Tere maan ne ya na maan ne se kya hota hai, jab tera dil Kashish ko apna maan chuka hai.
Sujal: Ye sirf teri galatfehmi hai. Mai Kashish se kabhi pyaar kar hi nahin sakta.
Karan: Tujhe mai tujhse behtar jaanta hoon. Tere baare me jis din se mujhe galatfehmiyaan hone lagi naa, us din mai marna pasand karoonga.
Sujal: Nahin! Mai sirf Khushi se pyaar karta tha.
Karan: Bilkul sahi kaha tune. Tu Khushi se pyaar karta tha, lekin tu Kashish se pyaar karta hai. Ye baat tu jitni jaldi maan le, tere liye acha hoga.
Karan leaves Sujal alone to think about his life and Sujal is simply not ready to accept the fact that he has given Khushi's place to Kashish in his life.


Who is this Khushi? Sujal ki zindagi me uski kya ahmiyat hai? Kya Sujal manega ki uske dil me Khushi ki jagah Kashish le chuki hai? Kya Karan Nandini ko propose karega?

Wait naa! The Part-12 is coming soon to answer you.
Till then, Take Care and Stay Tuned.
Regards
Garima
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Desperately waiting for yr comments 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 Awesome......keep up the good work 😊 😉 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Great part Garima!!..i just love this fan fic..keep it up... 👏 👏 👏 !!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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brilliant garima 👏 kya twist tha readers increase ho jayegey 😆 waiting for next part
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Great Job
New twist
Continue soon!! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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The next part will come today. Stay Tuned.
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Recap: Kashish Sujal ko finally propose kar deti hai par Sujal ke ackward behaviour ke kaaran pareshaan ho jaati hai. Karan use samjhaata hai ki Sujal se use aisa nahin kehna chahiye tha par Kashish ke insist karna par bhi vo Sujal ka past disclose karne ko raazi nahin hota. Sujal is lost in Khushi's memories and is not ready to accept Kashish as the love of his life.

LOVE ME SAB CHALTA HAI – PART 12

Its 12:30 at night and Sujal is still sitting at the seaside. Karan comes to take him home.

Karan: Tu abhi tak yahan baitha hai! Chal, ghar chal.

Sujal: Tu jaa Karan, mujhe nahin aana.

Karan: Kyon saza de raha hai apne aap ko vo bhi ek aise gunaah ki jo tune kiya hi nahin?

Sujal: Apne hi haathon se apni zindagi ko khatam kiya hai maine, aur tu kehta hai ki maine kuch nahin kiya?

Karan: Galatfehmi hai teri Sujal! Tune jaanboojhkar to vo accident……………….. (In his mind) Ab mai tujhe kaise bataaon ki vo accident meri wajah se…….)

Sujal: Kho diya maine apni Khushi ko aur apne bachche ko bhi. Mai to do-do mautoon ka zimmedaar hoon. (And he is crying again)

Karan: Bas ab iske aage tu aur kuch nahin bolega. Ye puraana zakham tujhe dard ke sivay aur kuch nahin denge. Ghar chal mere saath. Chal Sujal.

Karan somehow manages to take Sujal home and makes him sleep. Par vo khud saari raat nahin so paaya kyonki vo apne dost ki khushi ke liye kuch karna chahta tha lekin vo kya kare use samajh me nahin aa raha tha. Subah ho jaati hai aur Karan raat ko Sujal ke baare me sochte hue khidki ke paas baithe-baithe hi so jaata hai. Subah hote hi Sujal ki ankh khulti hai. He comes towards Karan aur uske sar pe haath pherta hai.

Sujal: Bahut pareshaan kiya naa maine tujhe? Pehle hi kaha tha tujhe ki meri dosti tujhe dukh ke sivay aur kuch nahin degi. (Sujal turns back when Karan holds his hand)

Karan: Tu mujhe khushiyaan bhi de sakta hai Sujal! Khud khush reh kar. Kashish tujhe sach me bahut chahti hai. Shaayad bhagwaan ne tujhe Kashish ke liye hi banaaya tha. Shaayad isliye unhone tujhe Khushi se alag kiya!

Sujal: Hame college ke liye late ho raha hai. Tu jaldi se taiyaari ho ja mai breakfast laata hoon.

Karan: Tu mujhse chupa nahin sakta Sujal!

Sujal: Kya lega naashte me? Bread omlette ya toast?

Karan: Meri baat ko taal mat Sujal………

Sujal: Mujhe Mr. Bakshi ka lecture miss nahin karna! Tu chal uth jaldi se! (And Sujal goes to the kitchen)

Place: College

Kashish aaj jaldi aa gayi hai kyonki vo Sujal se baat karna chahti hai. As she sees Sujal entering, she stops him. Unhe dekhkar Karan aage chala jaata hai aur Sujal-Kashish ko baat karne ke liye akela chod deta hai.

Kashish: Good Morning Sujal!

Sujal: Good Morning! (He is about to move aside when Kashish stops him)

Kashish: Mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai, urgently!

Sujal: Haan vo tumhe notes chahiye the naa, ye lo!

Kashish: Mujhe koi notes nahin chahiye.

Sujal: Mera lecture hai Kashish mujhe jaana hai!

Kashish: Aaj tum mujhse baat kiye bina nahin jaa sakte!

Sujal: I'm not interested.

Kashish: Lekin I'm very much interested to know ki kal tumne mujhse itna rudely behave kyon kiya?

Sujal: I don't think I need to answer that. Tum hoti kaun ho mujhse mere behaviour ka jawab maangne wali?

Kashish: Shaayad tum abhi tak meri feelings ko nahin samjhe…….

Sujal: Mujhe samajhna bhi nahin hai Kashish.

Kashish: Ek baar yehi baat meri ankhon me ankhein daal kar keh sakte ho.

Sujal: Kashish please!!!!! Ye college hai! Tamasha mat khada karo!

Kashish: Ok fine! Chalo phir mere saath! (She takes him by hand but Sujal tries to resist)

Sujal: Haath chodo mera mujhe kahin nahin jaana.

Kashish: Tumhe kasam hai uski jis se tum pyaar karte ho.

Sujal, after hearing this is not in his senses and Kashish makes him sit in her car. Kashish is driving and Sujal is lost again in Khushi's thoughts. Since Kashish is driving very fast in anger, Sujal is reminded of the accident which took everything away from him. Fear and worry starts overcoming his face and as Kashish escaped an accident with a truck, Sujal shouted loudly………

Sujal: Khushiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kashish stopped the car and is surprised to see Sujal sweating badly. He is damn worried and is crying.

Kashish: Sujal!!!!!

Sujal: Maine maar daala apni Khushi ko! Apne hi bachche ka kaatil hoon mai! Apne hi haathon se maine apni zindagi barbaad kar daali!!!!!!

Kashish is shocked to hear Sujal's words and is not able to speak even a words for some time. The quietness of the place heard only cries of Sujal and nothing else. Kashish was too worried to even console him and she thought she should better contact Karan. She tries but fails. Then she decides to talk to him.

Kashish: Khushi kaun hai Sujal?

Sujal: Khushi! My love, my wife!!!!!!!!!!

Kashish is stunned to hear this. She couldn't stop her tears now. But still, she managed to ask him.

Kashish: Kya hua use?

Sujal: Chali gayi vo mujhe chod kar……… (Sujal had gone too emotional to control himself and he told everything to Kashish)

Khushi's History: Khushi was Sujal's wife, his life. Both of them were madly in love for one year and they decided to give their relationship a concrete shape by marrying. Their love story was too good to be true. At that time also, Karan and Sujal were friends but Karan lived with his family and Sujal with Khushi (Imagine Pallavi i.e. first Nikki of Kya Haadsa Kya Haqeeqat as Khushi). After about one and a half month of their marriage, Sujal and Khushi came to know that they were gonnabe parents. They were like the happiest souls on earth, but shaayad unki jodi ko kisi ki nazar lag gayi. Pehli baar Sujal aur Khushi me ek serious jhagda ho gaya because Khushi ki zidd thi ki vo apni beemar didi se hospital milne jaana chahti thi but uski tabiyat kharaab hone ki wajah se Sujal use mana kar raha tha. Khushi ko uski didi ka phone bhi aaya ki vo ab theek hain par phir bhi vo nahin maani. Sujal ko aakhirkaar uski zidd ke aage jhukna pada aur vo jab use hospital lejaa raha tha to vo gusse me tha. He was driving fast despite of Khushi's warning (If you guys are thinking ki tab Sujal ke paas car kahan se aayi to aapko bata doon ki vo uske neighbour ki car thi kyonki vo apne pregnant wife ko bike pe nahin le jaa sakta tha). Usi raste me Sujal ki car ka ek truck ke saath accident ho gaya. Ye accident Karan ki Step-momne karwaya tha kyonki unhe Karan aur Sujal ki friendship bardaasht nahin thi. Unhone to socha tha ki Sujal mar jaye ga par Khushi ki maut ho gayi. Karan apni Step-Mom ka ye plan jaanta tha. He tried to save them but thoda late ho gaya. Aaj tak Sujal apne aap ko us accident ka zimmedaar manta hai jisne us se uski wife aur baby ko cheen liya. Karan ne use kabhi nahin bataya ki ye uski Step-Mom ka plan tha kyonki use darr hai ki kahin vo Sujal ki friendship kho na de. Usne apne papa ko bataya ki uski Step-Mom ne kya kiya lekin uski baat par gharwalon ne vishwaas nahin kiya. Usne tab hi apna ghar chod diya aur Sujal ke saath aakar rehne laga.

Kya Sujal kabhi Kashish ko apna payega? Kya Karan kabhi Sujal ko sachchai batayega? Sach jaanne ke baad bhi kya Kashish Sujal ki hona chahegi?

Arre!!!!!!! Part-13 aa raha hai naa. Usi me saare answers dhoodhna. Itni bhi kya jaldi hai???

Stay Tuned

Love

Garima

Edited by Anamika_Garima - 19 years ago
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