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Posted: 19 years ago
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gr888 garima 👏 ...ab write soon naa 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Recap: Sujal Kashish ko kisi se phone pe baat karte hue sun leta hai aur use pata chalta hai ki koi use blackmail kar raha hai. Ghar pahunch kar Sujal Karan ko Nandini ke saath batameezi karne ke liye thappad maarta hai. College pahunch kar Kashish accidentally Sujal ko Karna aur Niharika ke poore plan ke baare me bata deti hai.

LOVE ME SAB CHALTA HAI – PART X
Sujal is completely shocked to hear Kashish and leaves from there without reacting. Karan follows him.
Karan: Sujal please ek baar meri baat sun le phir faisla kar lena! Sujal ruk to, please Sujal, ek mauka to de mujhe? Please Sujal you can't do this to me.
Sujal: Karan! Presently I'm not in my senses so please stay away. Mujhe kuch nahin sun na aur naa hi tujhse baat karni hai samjha?
Sujal leaves the college and Karan is almost crying. Kashish comes to him.
Kashish: Ab rone se koi fayada nahin. College me tumhaari reputation ka kya hoga? Meri salah mano…………….
Karan: Shut-up! Just shut-up! Jaanti kya ho tum mere aur Sujal ke baare me? Kya jaanti ho tum humaare rishtey ke baare me? Kisi bhi Haalat me humaare dosti tutegi nahin samjhi! Vo mujhse naaraz ho sakta hai magar mujhse dosti vo kabhi nahin todega! Aur haan, tum jaise logon ki salah ki mahutaaj nahin hai humaare rishta Ms. Kashish Singhania! Better mind your own business!
And Karan leaves from there.
On the other hand, Sujal is at home and is feeling very bad. Uske zehen me reh reh kar Kashish ki kahi hui baatein ghoom rahi hain. Vo bahut pareshaan hai. Shaam ko Karan ghar aata hai to dekhta hai ki Sujal chair pe baithe-baithe hi soya hua hai. Uske chehra par sote hue bhi chain nahin tha. Karan ko apne upar sharm aati hai aur vo Sujal ke sar pe haath pherta hai. To his disappointment, Sujal ko bukhaar hai.
Karan: Arre! Ise to bahut tez bukhaar hai. Sab meri wajah se hua hai.
Karan calls a doctor. Tabhi Sujal ki neend khul jaati hai.
Karan: Chal! Let ja bed pe!
Sujal: Kyon? Aur vaise bhi mujhe tujhse koi baat nahin karni.
Karan: Mat kar mujhse baat, magar apne aap ko to saza mat de. Tune kya kiya hai? Itna tez bukhaar ha. Let ja bas ab tu chup-chap.
By this time, Karan almost rone wala hota hai ki doctor aa jata hai. Sujal ka diagnosis karke vo Karan se akele me kehta hai………
Doctor: Look Mr. Karan! Aapke friend ko bukhaar kisi tension ki wajah se aaya hai. Aisa ho jata hai kabhi-kabhi. Nothing much serious. Thode khush rahenge to theek ho jayengi. I should take a leave now, bas ye medicines time par de dena!
Karan comes in.
Karan: Tu kuch din college nahin jayega.
Sujal: I don't require your concern.
Karan: Sujal please! Tu jaanta hai ki mera tere siva is duniya me koi nahin hai, agar mai teri dosti bhi kho doonga to kaise jiyonga. Tu chahta hai na ki mai sudhar jaaon? Tu jo kahega mai karoonga! Tu please…………..
Sujal: Tujhe Nandini se maafi mangni hogi!
Karan: Kya???????
Sujal: Haan!
Karan: Theek hai!
Karan is about to leave…
Sujal: Tu abhi is waqt kahan jaa raha hai?
Karan: Teri naarazgi ka bojh ab mai aur nahin she sakta!
And he leaves. It's raining heavily outside and Karan is off to Nandini's house. Nandini is with Kashish in her room and they watch Karan standing outside in rain from the window. Kashish insists that Nandini should listen to him once and Nandini goes down.
Nandini: Kyon aaye ho yahan?
Karan: Maafi maang ne!
Nandini: Tum aur maafi! Kuch ajeeb sa lagta hai. Vo bhi mujh jaisi chashmish se? Wao! Fantastic.
Karan sits on his knees.
Karan: Us din maine jo kuch bhi tumhaare saath kiya vo Niharika ke behkaave me aakar kiya! Mai utna bura bhi nahin hoon jitna mujhe samjha jaata hai. Agar tumne mujhe maaf nahin kiya to mai Sujal ki dosti ko hamesha ke liye kho doonga aur Shayad saath hi saath apne astitva ko bhi. Please forgive me!
Nandini: Oh please Karan! Tum koi bachche nahin ho jo behek gaye. Aur rahi Sujal ki baat to uski dosti ke to tum layak bhi nahin ho!
Nandini had overcome his patience and Karan stood up in anger. He held Nandini by hand and kissed her. Nandini was so timid to do anything and as soon as Karan left her, she gave him a stern look…………
Nandini: I hate you Karan! I hate you! Bahut bure ho tum! (She's crying) I hate you! Suna tumne, get lost!
Kashish saw this from her window and is quite shocked. She is wondering ki Nandini is baat pe kaise react karegi. She is worried about her.
Karan returned home and by that time, Sujal had slept. But, neither Karan nor Nandini could sleep that night. Both of them are thinking about each other.

Place: College
It's a new day and today is Valentines Day. Everyone is exchanging cards and gifts. Kashish and Nandini enter the college and Kashish is constantly trying to cheer her up. But Nandini is there with a frowning face. Kashish ko bahut se roses aur cards milte hain and Nandini also gets a few from friends. Just then Sujal enters the college. Karan is just after him. Sujal par to jaise foolon ki baarish ho rahi ho kyonki girls are going crazy. Same is the case with Karan.
Kashish: Nandini dekh to! Bechara Sujal to jaise foolon me doob hi jayega, and this Karan I tell you…………….Ups!
Nandini: Please Kashish!
Kashish: Nandini! Come on! Cheer up! Sab khush hai aur tu udaas. Karan ne tujhe kiss hi to ki hai, tujhe maara thodi hai?
Nandini: tujhe ye choti si baat lagti hai. Aai aur baba ko pata chala na to maar hi daalenge mujhe!
Kashish: Shaayad vo tujhse pyaar……….
Nandini: Oh stop it Kashish! I hate that disgusting creature!
Kashish: Ok baba CHILL! Itna gussa!!!!!! Vo bhi apne Valentine par! Please calm down.
Nandini: Oh please Kashish don't irritate me.
Kashish: Acha tu ruk mai aati hoon!
Kashish goes towards Sujal but in such a way that it seems ki vo galati se Sujal se jaakar takraa gayi hai.
Kashish: Hi Sujal!
Sujal: Hi Kashish! Uff!!!!!!!!!!!
Kashish: Aaj itni tension kyon bhai!!!!!!! Aaj to kitna acha din hai!
Sujal: Mere liye to Rakshabandhan ka din best hota hai!
Kashish: Kyon??????
Sujal: Kyonki us din college ki koi bhi ladki mere aas paas bhi nahin dikhti!
Kashish: Oh Sujal! You have a great sense of humour!
Sujal: Schchi! That is the best day, no girls!!! Mujhe ladkiyon se chidh nahin hai. Problem tab hoti hai jab vo I Love You keh-keh kar irritate karti hain.
Kashish: Aur agar mai tumhe vohi kahoon jo tum sun na nahin chate to?
Sujal: What???????????????????


Has Kashish proposed to Sujal? Will he accept? Who is blackmailing Kashish? Are Nandini-Karan in love?
The Part 11 holds all answers for you.
Stay tuned and do comment.
Love
Garima

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Posted: 19 years ago
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I am waiting for yr comments guys
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Posted: 19 years ago
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garima ur story is getting intresting day by day 👏 ab pls kashish ko sujal ke saath karo
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Shruti wait
Kashish Sujal ki hi hai magar ek problem hai
Use sort out hone do
Pyaar me problems na ho to maza nahin aata naa
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anamika_Garima

Shruti wait
Kashish Sujal ki hi hai magar ek problem hai
Use sort out hone do
Pyaar me problems na ho to maza nahin aata naa

ok garima hum wait karney ko tayar hai waisey bhi jaha pyaar hai waha problem hoti hai 😉😉

chalo tum problem sort out karo hum wait karegey

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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 Keep up the good work.......
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Posted: 19 years ago
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garima its zabardast i was waitin 4 it ..... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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anamika yeh story to ekbare rapchik hay.Bohot bohot bohot shundar hay. Thanx nahi bola. Waiting for u r next post. Jaldi post karna. Deri mat karna.Agar kiya to 😡 😡 😡
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Nice part
I liked the part when sujal said that mere liye to rakshabandhan ka din sabse acha hain
I thought it was really funny
continue soon 😊

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