MJHT FF Love and Hatred part 22 a,b,c updated pg 69

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kirti123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

are u updating now

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Many more happy returns of the day to my sweet sis shaffyy

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bhargavi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

nice updt
cont soon
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dreambig

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Cute update.

Plz continue soon😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

Nice FF

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Thaks di thanks a lot...

nice update

it was really nice part

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arzzo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

wao read part 7,8nd 9 together their all are awesome no trisome :-D really all the scene starting frm sajan scene in stairs that was great and then mayur gunde scene and mayu falling in love was really gud and naina entry was nice and the way mayu reply to her abut their relation was awesome love those dialogues it was reaaly a big thing hich he says and his heart is in love with nupru frm chilhood wao aur uska reaction sah aisa kabhi pata he nai chala the convo between mayu nd his heart was gud the the table scene sam is so cool and the sweet and cute scene between sajan and their plan to separate them for some days so that atleast mayu realize his love was gud tu plan tu action mai ah gaya hai lets see kitna work karta hai the precap is gud pata nai ab inka beech kya hua

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 13 years ago

#158

waiting for the update...

please update.. di.. please

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Posted: 13 years ago

#159

isse pehle ki mujhe gaaliyo ki list sunai de a big sory for late update espicially shaffyy my sweet sis for you actually main chah kar bhi kuch reasons ki wajah se update nahin karpaayi net problem atlast i am updating

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Posted: 13 years ago

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part 10

Yeh heart aur mind ki conversation kuch dino tak chalega but please bare me
Mayank comes home and searches fo nupur
Heart-Nupur kahaan hain
MayuUsne toh kahaan ghar pe hain pata nahin baahar gayi hogi
Heart -Jaake mom se pooch
Mayu- Mom se no way
Heart -Tu poochega warna mujhe poochna padega
Mayu- Isse better yehi hain main poochoo tu poochega toh saara baanda phoot jayega
He goes down
Nupur in home shobha comes to her room
She chats with her for sometime and sleeps resting head on her lap
She kisses her forehead and makes her sleep properly on pillow
Mayank finds shilpa at dining table
M-maa nupur kahaan hain
Shilpa-kya baat hain nupur ke baare main enquiry koi khush khabar toh nahin
M-mom woh meri wife hain isiliye poocha
Shilpa-oh wife main toh bhul gayi mera bacha kitna bada ho gaya uski shaadhi ho gayi aur aaj bhi tu mujhe bacha lag raha hain maa hoon na
M-maa aap mera mazak kyun uda rahi hain
Shilpa-main teri mazak kyun udaongi tu mera laadla hain na
M-mom main jaa raha hun gudnight
Shilpa?nupur kahaan hain yeh toh maine bataya hi nahin
M-mat bataiye main use call karke poochloonga
He turns to call her
Shilpa-koi faida nahin phone nahin utayegi sogayi hogi uske ghar main sab jaldi sote hain
M-nupur apne mom ke paas gayi hain kya
Shilpa-maan gayi tu lawyer hain itne se clue main answer dund liya
M-mom aap mera sar kyun kaa rahi hain
Shilpa-hamesha tu mujhe tang karta hain socha main bhi tujhe tang karoon
M-mom
Shilpa-beta
M-aapse baat karna bekaar hain (he was about to leave suddenly turns)
M-par mujhse pooche bagair aise kaise gayi
Shilpa-tujhse kyun poochegi tu koi pm thodi hain
M-pm nahin hun par pati hun yeh jaanna mera haq hain
Shilpa-haq teri tabiyet toh teek hain main sam ko bulaati hun pata nahin tujhe kiski nazar lagi hain
She calls sam making mayu more mad
S-kya hua mom aap bahut pareshan lag rahi hain
Shilpa-dekhna mayu kaise ajeeb baatein kar raha hain
S-ajeeb baatein (in full worry)
Shilpa-nupur ke baarein main pooch raha hain
S-nupur ke baare main pooch raha hain zaroor problem hain mayu tu tension mat le main kal tujhe mere friend ke paas lejaonga woh bahut acha cycartist hain
M-cycartist ki zaroorat mujhe nahin aap dono ko hain aap khud ki aur mom ki checkup karwaana main jaa raha hun gudnight
Shilpa-kahaan jaa raha hain nupur se milne
M-nahin apne room main
Shilpa-waise jayega toh nupur ke ghar hi pahunchega room is taraf hain
M-thanks
He goes to his room they burst out their laugh
M-pata nahin mom aur bhai ko ho kya gaya hain meri tabiyet nahin undono ki kharab hain aur iski bhi (keeping hand on his heart)
suddenly he sees their wedding photo he takes it in hand
M-yeh ladki bhi na bina bole chali gayi abhi phone karke class leta hun
He calls her she was in good sleep with great difficulty lifts phone
N-hello kaun hain akal nahin hain kya is waqt koi call karta hain kya
M-main hun
N-main matlab tum koi shahrukh ho kya jo tumhe jat se pehchanoongi
M-shahrukh nahin tumhara pati I hope tumhara ek hi hain ab phir mat poochna kaun
N-meri itni kismat kahaan agar hota toh kabki tumhein chod deti thi
M-neend main aawaaz nahin pehchana par mera mazak udaana ache se aata hain
N -ladne ke liye call kiya kya
M-ladne ke liye nahin poochne ke liye call kiya tum mujhse pooche bagair apne ghar kaise gayi
N-excuseme main apne ghar jaane ke liye tumhari permission kyun loon
M-kyunki main tumhara pati hun
N-oh really kaunse book main likha hain wife ko kahin bhi jaane ke liye pati ki permission ki zaroorat hain
M-maine apne book main specially tumhare liye likha hain koi problem hain
N-tumhara book main phir kabhi aaraam se padoongi philhaal ke liye main phone rakh rahi hun gudnight
She cuts phone without allowing him to speak
M-how dare she cut my phone
He calls her again she switches off phone
M-switch off kamini kal milegi na tab dekhloonga
In the night he was unable to sleep he was missing her badly he wakes up early in morning
Shilpa-aaj koi bade jaldi utgaya
S-shayad kisise milne ke liye bekaraar hain
M-agar tum dono ne phir se mujhe tang kiya toh bina breakfast kare hi chala jaonga
Shilpa-saaf saaf batana tujhe hamaare saath nahin kisi aur ke saath breakfast karne ka plan hain hum tujhe kyun rokhenge yeh toh tera haq hain
M-koi plan nahin hain main yehi breakfast karoonga aur aap dono please mera tang keechna band karo warna mental hospital jaana padega
He leaves after breakfast in car
M-yeh mom aur bhai bhi na haath do ke mere peeche pad gaye hain in sab problems ki jad yeh ladki hain kuch na kuch toh karna padega Mrs sharma just wait and watch
he goes to court early but she didn't come he was waiting for her
he was passing through corridor suddenly he feels something he turns she enters corridor in a beautiful blue saree looking gorgeous
he was lost in her not only he but everyone were staring at her he doesn't like it
M-court aayi hain ya date pe itna tayyar hone ki kya zaroorat thi
She was walking someone wantedly hits her
Before he reacts
N- tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhe chune ki
Guy-woh maine jaan buz kar nahin kiya
she gives a tight slap
guy-you how dare you slap me
N-tujhe maarne ke liye himmat ki zaroorat nahin hain
Shashi comes there
Shashi-kya hua
N-kuch bhi toh nahin dad
He leaves from there seeing shashi
Mayanks mouth was hung open seeing nupur shashi sees him
Shashi-mayank beta
Shashi goes towards him
Mayank to himself
M-ab aake overaction shuru karegi mayu tu use ignore karega usse bilkul bhi baat nahin karega
But to his shock something else happens
N-dad mujhe client se milna hain main aapse baad main miloongi
She leaves without even looking at him
M-kamini zara bhi tameez nahin hain atleast hi bhi nahin bola
In the court mayank was arguing his case suddenly his eyes fall on nupur he cant take off eyes from her
Mayank comes back to his senses and realises that he is in court he decides not to look at her again
Nupur didn't even know this she comes to know when her friend was teasing her in lunch and to her badluck he sits beside her as he had no other place she just leaves from there having half lunch
This makes him feel bad but during next session when she was arguing he was staring her which makes her uncomfortable
In the evening
N-chale papa
Shashi-tu apne ghar jayegi mayank ke saath
N-par aapne kal kahaan ki main kuch din aapke saath rahoongi phir ab
Shashi ?haan beta main aur mom yehi chahte the par hamaare chahne se kuch nahin hota mayank chahta hain tu uske saath ghar chale main use mana nahin kar sakta kyunki tu uski biwi hain
N-par dad aise kyun aapko mujhe apne saath lejaane ka itna bhi adhikaar nahin hain usne kahaan aur aapne maan liya
Shashi-maanna padega beta tu ab hamaari beti se pehle uski wife hain
He leaves from there with broken heart
N-is mayank ke bache ka kuch na kuch toh karna padega
She goes to his car and opens the door
He keeps earphones and starts driving both don't look at each other
She suddenly feels his hand around her bare waist he moves her closer to him
N-mayank kya kar rahe ho
He acts as if he is not listening he smiles to himself and gets her more closer looking at front
She tries to take of his hand but his grip was tight she again shouts
N-mayank main tumse kuch pooch rahi hun
She removes his earphone
M-tum mujhse baat kar rahi hao
N-tumse nahin karoongi toh aur kisse baat karoongi
M- kya baat hain lagta hain main koi sapna dekh raha hun
N-overaction band karo
M-overaction main nahin tum karti ho woh department tumhara hain isiliye toh subah se anjaan banne ki naatak kar rahi ho
N-main faaltu main baat nahin karti
M?oh aapko baat karne ke liye reason chahiye kya main jaan sakta hun achanak aisa kaunsa reason yaad aaya mujhse baat kar rahi ho
N-tumhara haat iswaqt kahaan hain
M-steering par
N-main uski nahin iski baat kar rahi ho
M?oh yeh meri biwi ko safely pakad raha hun taaki phirse bhag na jaaye
N-mayank akhri baar keh rahi hun chodo warna
M-warning de rahi ho nahin chodunga kya karlogi
N-tappad maaroongi
M- kaisi biwi ho tum pati ko tappad marogi sanskar naam ki cheez dur dur tak nahin hain
N-mayank tum
M-kya main maine sirf tumhein pakda hain usse jyada kuch nahin kiya agar jyada bak bak kiya na toh apne haq ka pura faida utana padega
She sits silently scared of his warning
After they reach home as soon as they enter she locks the door
He smiles and holds her from waist she tries to get out of his grip
M-kya baat hain sweetheart itna miss kiya jo aate hi door lock kiya
She gives angry stare he winks irritating her more
N-mayank chodo mujhe
M-nahin chodunga kya karogi
She pushes him he falls on bed
M?auch kitna zor se lagaa pata nahin kya kaati ho jhansi ki rani
N-mayank yeh kya naatak laga rakha hain subah se had ho gayi court main bhi sab ke saamne had ho gayi
M-main naatak kar raha hun tum kya kar rahi thi are usdin jab tum problem main thi tab mere paas aake ro rahi thi aur aaj toh aise anjaan maar rahi thi jaise main koi ajnabee hun atleast hai toh bolti tumhari is stupid behaviour ki wajah se main naa chahte hue bhi tumhari taraf dekh raha tha lunch main bhi aise chali gayi jaise mere saath baitne se tumhara image kharaab ho jayega kya mera tumhare life main itna value nahin hain ki main tumhare saath sabke saamne bait kar khane kaa sakoon maine tumhare liye apne life risk main rakh kar us jd se bachaye aur tum
N-maine tumse nahin kahaan tha meri help karne ke liye
M-nahin kahaan par aadi raat ko mujhe pakad ke ro rahi thi uska kya maine tumhari help sirf isliye ki kyunki tum meri wife ho par main bhi kitna bevakuf hun tumhari itna fikar karta hun you don't deserve it tum ladkiyan na itna stupid hoti ho ladko ka attention kaise paana ache se aate hain ek toh kal bina bole chali gayi aur aaj aise anjaan maar rahi thi ki main tumhari taraf dekhoon sabke saamne mujhe cartoon banaya
N-jab tumhein mujhse problem hain toh mujhse kaho saari ladkiyon ko beech main kyun laa rahi ho maine tumhein ignore nahin kiya mujhe tumse baat karne ka reason nahin mila pehle bhi main aise hi thi tab toh tumhein bura nahin lagaa ab kyun lagaa lunch main wahaan se sirf isliye chali gayi kyunki sab humein ajeeb tarah se dekh rahe the mujhe acha nahin lagta bahaar waale mere personal life main interfere kare tum meri life main important ho isiliye jab mujhe problem aaya tum par barosa kiya tumhein agar mujhse problem hain toh mujhse directly ghar pe baat karo sabke saamne tamasha mat banao
M-main tamasha bana raha hun tum toh bahut achi ho na kya zamaana aagaya hain main meri biwi ki taraf dekhta hun toh meri biwi ko problem hain kyunki sabko problem hain I think ab mujhe ankhon main patti baand kar chalna hoga taaki main sabke saamne aapko na dekhoon
N-mera woh matlab nahin tha
M-phir kya matlab tha
N-jo na samaj hain unhein samja sakte hain par tumhari tarah sab samajte hue na samaj banne waalo ko samjaana na mumkin hain mujhe lagaa tum jaise bhi ho dil ke ache ho par main galat thi tumhare paas dil hi nahin hain you are just disgusting mujhe tumse koi baat nahin karni go to hell
M-mat karo main tumse baat karne ke liye mar nahin raha hun just get lost
They go down for dinner
S-are waah aap badi jaldi aayi aapki di toh keh rahi thi aap kuch din apne mom ke paas rahengi
N-mujhe bhi wohi lagaa par kuch log nahin chahte ki main apne mom ke paas rahoon (looking at mayank) isiliye aana pada
S-oh kya baat hain mujhe nahin pata tha tu nupur ke bina do din nahin reh sakta
M-haan main use tang kare bina ek din bhi nahin reh sakta uska yeh irritated chehra bada miss kar raha tha
After dinner in sajan room
G-kya soch rahe ho
S-is mayu ke bare main kitna plan karke humne nupur ko tumhare mom ke paas bheja par end main dono ne phirse ladai ki samaj nahin aaraha indono ko paas kaise lao
G-tumhein jab dekho sabki padi hain mere baare main toh bhul hi gaye
Keeping hands on her waist getting her closer
S-main apni wife ko kaise bhul sakta hoon kya baat hain aaj koi romantic ho raha hain
G-jab tum nahin honge toh mujhe hi woh department sambhalna hoga main tumse bahut naaraaz hun
S-ab humne aisa kya kiya ki aap humse naaraz hain
G-tumne kitne din pehle kahaan tha ki hum baahar chalenge lekin ab tak nahin ggaye
S-toh mere wife ko honeymoon pe jaana hain
She blushes
S-waise idea acha hain mayank aur nupur ko bhi bhejna hoga taaki kuch din saath main rahenge toh sab teek hojaega
G-sam phirse(in anger)
S-tum gussa kyun horahi ho tum nahin chahti ki nupur apne life main khush rahe
G-main chahti hun isiliye toh tumhein rok rahi ho sam mujhe yeh sab teek nahin lag raha tumhare in plans se pyar nahin hoga pyar bas ho jaata hain undono ko apne haal pe chod do dono bahut samajdaar hain dona apne aap unke beech ke differences ko mitadenge unhein kisi ke help ki zaroorat nahin hain just leave them
S-shayad tum sahi ho
G-main hamesha sahi hun
S-acha yeh batao hum kahaan chalenge honeymoon pe
She blushes
S-tumhein pata hain tum blush karte waqt aur bhi sundar lagti ho
G-sam chodo na
S-nahin
Before she opens her mouth he kisses her lips
In mayur room
Both of them were siting on bed doing some paper work her hairs were flyiing and disturbing him moving over his face he starts staring at her she gets irritated in anger goes to close window her pallu flies in air he was looking at her she feels embarrased He goes near her she feels tensed
M-jab sambhalna nahin aata pehanti kyun ho
(setting her pallu nicely)
M-ek help karogi
She looks questioningly
M-court ko phir saadi pehan ke mat aana wahaan ache log nahin aate aur koi tumhein buri nazar se dekhe toh mujhe acha nahin lagta
N-woh mere saare dresses yehi hain isiliye main mom ki saadi pehan kar aayi phir aisa nahin hoga
M-thanks
he kisses her cheek shocking her
he realises
M-sorry woh anjaane main ho gaya
(she silently goes to bed and closes her eyes confused with her relation
he sleeps on sofa staring at her suddenly falls asleep)
Precap:mayu ka sautan