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Posted: 13 years ago

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Congrats for the new thread Muskan.

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updated 4parts today..

PART 52

PART 53

PART 54

part 55

Veerji put his hand around her ' tu ghar kab aa rahi hain
she kept quiet
darji ' bday ke liya paka aana teehk hain
Geet couldn't say to him.. she hugged him nodding. .. & placed a peck on his cheek.. thank you

Raj couldn't stop praising Geet all the while.
Maan was getting dam pissed off. With every word he spoke in fav to of the Geet.. or was it something else..

raj could see he was getting irritated .. had it been a normal scenario.. he would have continued pulling his leg.. but today.. he didn't want to trouble him further. From no where he asked
so puchki how was the night with that dad's fav
maans face just lit up.. he forgot all abt accident & every thing.. he chuckled
raj gauged his reaction & continued to probe on that
did u meet her after that night
Maan only smiled
raj ' so wats her name?
How does she look like
Maan just shuddered his shoulder .. I don't know.. lekin mano..

raj ' wats so difficult in that.. aabhi puch lethen hain Daadi se
she was staying here with u all only right.

maan nodded
Phir Daadi would definitely know her name right
Maan ' tu aisen kuch nahi karega.. puchna hota .. i could have asked myself
raj ' kyun?
Maan ' chodna
raj ' I want to know
Maan ' u don't have to
raj ' phir main uss se millonga kaisen
Maan ' main mila doonga
raj ' aur tu kaisen se milega
Maan ' wo sab mujh pe chod
raj ' lekin Daadi se puchne main problem kya hain
Maan ' yaar its complicated..
raj ' wat is so complicated
Maan ' pata nahi Daadi ko kya lagega
raj made weird faces.. it could be that ur frds

Maan was silent... he couldn't explain his relation with her.. exactly the way he couldn't explain why he hated this Geet.. why he gets triggered when he sees that Karan around her.. or anyone around her..
why why he gets so pissed off with dam girl. wat is abt her.. abt her care a dam attitude...

He just sat down on the floor next to his bed.. why did he kiss her.. wat is happening to him.. he just getting rotten .. & this girl just adds up to his misery.
Tu bas Geet ke baren main baat mat kar
raj looks at him amused.. we were not talking abt Geet ..maan
he just crashed on the bed .. just leave it.. yaar

raj went to the washroom & came to his changing room..
yeh kya uss deewani ka souvenir
Maan smiled in sleep ..
raj lifted the blue ear rings.. wifey ka souvenir
Maan grinned snuggling to the teddy
raj came out.. oye.. yah kaun hain..
Maan just smiled..
raj ' let me guess.. puchki
so she left her puchki for u & took ur puchka instead..
Maan tucked the pillow closer & drooled over the soft cushion.
Raj pulled the spread from the other end & slept next to him..

A week latter it was critical situation in KC with IT dept. .. the actual department formation types.. Dev & Geet were really tensed & excited. Their effort for last whole year was finally happening.. they were getting a proper department department kinda thing. It was really a big deal.. for them. Through the whole procedure.. geet realized.. this department is for the jr Khurana... she couldn't take the excitement. .. she ran to the wash room & locked herself in. she just laughed.. giggled.. she felt butterfly running down her stomach.. she was so dam anxious .. she doesn't know why she felt so so happy.. her face was glowing.. she was grinning like an idiot since the time she learned the whole stituation. Not that she didn't know from before.. but not in exact terms.. like there is only one more male khurana.. in the family.. she doubly indirectly checked with NT.. if Dev had more than one sibling... she so much wanted to ask wat his name was.. she even tried to see if his name was any where mentioned on the records.. GRR.. nothing relevant was mentioned..
waisen bhi naam main kya rahka hain...
oops puchki will be her boss.. the thought itself thrilled her.. beautiful ..feeling embraced her...endless dreams.. like her heart was beating reaching close the dream.. she just held her heart..like she was holding all the stimulation of the world inside of her until she would explode... breathing hard.. with a wide grin on her face.

precap
haila.. yeh kya hogaya!!!

-PREV PART 54 NEXT PART 56 -
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago

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Water

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Thanks Muski for being so kind and giving up multiple updates in a day.

Love u for that...u take so much time out for us.

THanks darling.

Muah🤗

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febinyusuff

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

omg.. muski...

another update... mwwwaaah !!!!!

I can't really wait till whole truth unfolds between Maan n Geet...

yaaar so many confusions to come...

continue sooon dear

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happydays30

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

congrats for new thread

awesome part

hope now they will come to know each other

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Craziest_MG

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Superb
Amazing...
But yeh game kab tak chalega...cant wait for that day jab sach pata chalega...

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Muskan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: crazzy_angel
time to meet puchki and faint ...
shock jo lagega...lol
lets see pehle kaun faint hota hai realizing her is her puchki and she is his mishtimia...i m super excited...!!!
geet is so excited...she knows puchki will b her boss
she will finally meet her puchki...
veer is awesome...loving him...he talks logic unlike sum1...huhhh
haayeee maan snuggling to puchki...
oops blue earings...ahem ahem...waise muski di dadi ne geet ko gift de diya kya ...did i miss sumthn ??
loving the progress of the story ...cont soon

no the gift.. will follow.. uff wait karo yaar😳

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Tressa

@Tressa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

wow... Thank u so much for the fab update...

It was so much more relieving than the previous one...

Eagerly waiting for them to meet...

Hope that happens soon...

Im kind of getting this feeling that... When Maan joins Geet may realise that he is only her puchki but pata nai kyun Maan may again get confused n may feel that his mistimis left office n then may be he may get more angry on Geet without even listening to fully...

Im not giving u any wrong ideas... Please dont let something like this happen... Coz we all are waiting eagerly for that time when they meet...