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Posted: 13 years ago
i c a green light. i know u have been updating like crazy per dil hai ke maanta naheen.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Is he going to loose his eye sight?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Umm..okay..wow!! That was sudden and fast!! Good to know atleast they are fine ... 😊 nice update...continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.

Is he going to loose his eye sight?

GOOD option.. then shall request sweety keyma.. to continue.. with mehsoos effect.. 😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Updating ?! .. Yayy!! 😆.. hurry hurry.. m dying for you to finish at least 15 more parts so I can start reading..

so YAYYY! update !🥳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

GOOD option.. then shall request sweety keyma.. to continue.. with mehsoos effect.. 😆😆😆


hehe

lolz u cracked me up
well what cud i do, just the way u wrote the last 2-3 sentences...ab kya karoon
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Posted: 13 years ago
mindblowing..
Plz maaneet ko mila do plz plz..
By d way u n firesafire r frnds?? I mean u both r updatin same time. Lyk u both cmplted 50 parts on may b same day... Just asking..
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he got up screaming.. restlessly looking for her.. she came in worriedly
he hugged her tightly.. tum teehk hona..
she nodded in his arms
shoo.. its ok.. its ok.. she patted his back
he closed his eyes sighing in relief. His raised breath ...settled with his heart beat..
then suddenly he was getting aware of his surrounding.. whom was he holding..
cops.. dr.. nurse.. where the hell is he.. wat is happening. .. he pushed her away in disgust.
She looked down stepped away. Every one was taken a back with his odd behavior with her. He too was surprised that he actually was concerned abt that creature. She could feel the hatered vibrating through every pores of his.
Cop to the dr ' we need to take his statement
dr ' let me just check him first
Geet left from there leaving a word with PA of darji who came there to help her sort out the police case.
She knew she had a big answering to be done to darji now.
Dr did the initial bit of examination & gave go to the cops.
Cops had his vehicle documentation & license in their hand
cop ' u r Mr.. he looked at the license
Maan offered Maan Singh Khurana
Maan wondered .. dad se aaj bahut jaad padegi
cop ' Maan Singh Khurana..
u shouldn't have let Geet drive the car u know

Maan's eyes widen in shock.. she was not driving
cop looked at the Constable & gave a impudent grin
constable ' u don't have to lie to us.. she told us the truth
Maan wondered wat the hell did she tell them..
by then cop got a call from the commissioner to leave the kids alone & just make a normal FIR. Cop smirked .. bedi ghar ke bachen.. & left..
by then yash, Dev & Daadi came rushing in.
Dev spoke to the police & found out wat happened.
Cops reassured every thing was fine. & told them to collect the copy of the FIR the next day.
Yash shouted on top of his voice ' tum sharab peken gadi challa rahen the?
Dev just walked in .. nahi dad.. his frd was driving the car
Maan koi galthi nahi hain. She was inexperienced driver
Yash ' why the hell did he give the wheels to her then?
Maan was mute spectator of all this.. he never could answer back his dad. He was guilty..or not.. well yanha pe tho.. he was in total soup...
yash ' wat the hell was he doing with a girl.. at that hr.. that too drunk
Dev ' dad .dad . Aap issen galat samjh rahen ho
he probably just had a drink or so..
I guess he requested his frd to drive.. but I guess it just got messed up.

Yash ' wat abt the her? Where is she?
Dev ' I guess uski family wallen ussen lekar challen gayen. I think they didn't want her name involved in police thing.
maan wondered how typical low class mentality she has..
dev - Merin police wallon se baat hogayen hain. She has accepted it was her mistake.
by then raj came in.
yash gave a nice lecture to him too.
After all the jaad session..
raj sneaked close to Maan & asked curiously ' wo ladki kaun thi?
Maan rolled his eyes
raj ' wow.. I still can't believe it ki koi ladki was driving ur car.. woo jeep wali bhootni thi kya?
Maan irritatedly looked at him ' Geet!!
raj looked little lost their.. ek min.. college wali.. wo..chikna studious wali..
Maan frowned ' who else can put me in trouble
raj ' waisen .. aaj usne hi tujhe bachayen hain
Maan ' wat crap
raj ' sach sach bhol.. tu hi gadi chala raha tha na
Maan ' haan tho
raj ' oo.. hello.. u have polished 4 large pegs ok
seedha drunken drive ka case banta .. wo bachi hain ..issen liya sabne chot diya
Maan ' bachi aur woo..
she is challo cheeze
I don't know wat she told this cops.. they r giving me all kind of looks

raj ' kya bola hoga..
max.. she would have said ur her BF

Maan just pulled off the drips from his hands.. & slipped the t-shirt on.. chal yanha se.. mera dam ghut raha hain yanha
he hated to be associated with her.
Geet reached her flat with armaan. Darji & brij was already waiting for her.
Geet sighed ..
darji ' sab teehk hain na
Geet nodded
brij ' why did u take the blame on ur self
Geet ' veer ji.. drunken drive ka case banta uspe
pata nahi uske parents kaisen react karthen
armaan irritatedly ' tune kya puren zamane ka teehka liya hain kya
if he is drinking & driving then his parents should know abt it & stop him

Geet ' he is not like that
humre college ka hi ladka hain

veerji ' waisen I found out he is ok.. uske parents have come to take him home. They were really worried I believe.. PA was saying.. they gave him nicely
geet mumbled.. loo.. aab uske liyen bhi mujhe hi blame karega
darji smiled sweetly
Veerji put his hand around her ' tu ghar kab aa rahi hain
she kept quiet
darji ' bday ke liya paka aana teehk hain
Geet couldn't say to him.. she hugged him nodding. .. & placed a peck on his cheek.. thank you

precap
raj getting some idea abt puchki stuff
-PREV PART 53 NEXT PART 55-

thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update..loved they kissed and their fights also..
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow Muskaan, loved the snapping that Geet gave Maan in chap 52 ( abt getting lost and not needing the lift). Frankly, I was getting quite disturbed with Maan's temper alone😊

Well well, you manage to spin the most unusual of things and I loved the chap53 - the kiss !! - the accident well - thats Geet - the kind hearted girl that she is - i loved her protective attitude and Maan's sense of knowing her in his subconscious 😃

You cut short the hospital scene😕 You cannot leave us like this in so much suspense

Pls one more update ?

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