-Dhundlae aks- MaaneetFF THREAD5 - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey awesome updates yaar...when maaneet gonna know each other...
looking fwd...

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Posted: 13 years ago
me waiting
what kind of a twist ...
how come milnay say pehlay he twist...😲😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
congrats on new thread
awesome update
waiting for twist
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Posted: 13 years ago
me too waiting for the twist...;-)

pls update soon..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

oops puchki will be her boss.. the thought itself thrilled her.. beautiful ..feeling embraced her...endless dreams.. like her heart was beating reaching close the dream.. she just held her heart..like she was holding all the stimulation of the world inside of her until she would explode... breathing hard.. with a wide grin on her face.
Well now the work was more of interest to her. She was there practically the whole day ..working slogging.
Dev came around 11pm ' aaj hi IT department ko full feldged bana hain kya?
she sighed ..
Dev ' its late go home
he looked around ' Nt is not coming with u?
Geet ' uske ghar se koi aaya tha pick karne
Dev was curious ' kaun
Geet muffled her grin ..& naughtily lied .. pata nahi.. I have not seen that guy before in her family. May be some frd
devs face was worth watching..
Geet warned herself.. to stop.. she was getting really naughty now.. she chuckled & called it puchki effect..
she almost brust out laughing
then Dev straighten himself.. - tum akelen mat javo.. I will drop u
Geet nodded & followed him

holidays was fun for Maan, especially with raj around. They planned for an afternoon show.
Maan got the tickets & waited for him.. last moment raj called up & ditched him.. he got pissed off. He didn't know whether to go for the show alone or just forget it.. just then he saw prachi coming of crosswords.. Maan ran towards her calling her name.. he held her hand & dragged her to the theater..
prachi was totally taken a back ' wat r u doing.. she consciously looking around
Maan ' hum picture dehk rahen hain
prachi ' lekin
Maan ' lekin wakin kuch nahi challo.. picture start ho jayegi
in his excitement of movie.. he totally forgot.. this behaviour of his doesn't go with his seedha sadha look that he tries to maintain
prachi just pulled away her hand ' mera haat chodo koi dehklega
thats when Maan realized wat the hell he was doing.. dam she should start thinking wrong abt him now.. shit.. he just got carried away.. & the way she was reacting.. he definitely didn't want to give any ideas.. he cursed himself.. sab mistimia thodi hoten hain.. jo teren mazak ko sirf mazak hi samjhen
he didn't waste too much time thinking.. ' hum isken baren main picture ke baad baat karen
prachi ' I haven't told mom abt this movie plan
Maan sighed sadly
prachi ' aacha teehk hain.. I will cook up something latter.

It was really thrilling action packed movie.. Maan types.. he loves suspense & thriller.. he couldn't thank prachi enough for giving him company.. while coming out of the theater.. they got pushed into each other.. prachi.. chuckled pushing her hair behind looking down.
His hand went around her, rather in protective way..
when they were finally alone.. Maan slowly stepped away. .. reluctantly taking his hand off .. wo crowd tha.. he tried to make it clear
prachi was blushing.. she contemplated .. before confessing.. she was really scared abt all this
prachi - Maan
Maan ' umm
prachi ' we need to talk
Maan causally - abt wat
prachi shied ' actually its odd..
Maan ' wat is odd
prachi ' I mean us.. between us
Maan ' wat between us.. like a duh .. he was looking at the empty space between them.
Prachi waked him slowly on his arms.. Maan
Maan ' wat r u saying prachi?
Prachi ' ok listen .. we like each other as good frds..
Maan ' umm
prachi ' but I can't think of u more than that
Maan looked at her in shock.. more of .. wat the hell she is rejecting me.. without even me proposing.. isse badi insult becharen Maan ke kabhi nahi huen
prachi - u see .. ur really special to me
it will be grt
..she shied to say mention all that
actually I can't..
not u..
not anyone..
I can't get in to all this.. mama & papa ko aacha nahi lage ga
they will not approve of all this
Maan took a long breath.. wat if they approve?
(oye kothen.. stupid duffer.. this simple sentence.. means a proposal.. stop.. stop.. muskan warning.. 😡😡😡😡😡)
He was not going to let anyone just say a no to him.. dam not..
he held her arms.. wat if mama-papa approve prachi?
She looked at him once & looked down & just nodded
(hain..that was so cute proposal..muskan would have felt had it been our maaneet.. now I feel like pulling my fair out scream.. oye..ullo the patten... yeh kya kia???)

ok.. juthen's chapals.. etc awaited


precap
Maan getting possessive .. lol prachi
-PREV PART 55 NEXT PART 57-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
dis tym cant say awesome update maan n prachi yuukkk i cant believe maan told dat to prachi n specially precap i jst hate dat line maan gtin possesive abt prachi nooo ways wish u would ve written geets name instead of prachi den would luv it...
Edited by tasshuu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW WOW WOW... I m not gonna read DA till maan find out abt geet...lol... Maan prachi ...i can't even think abt it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey i thot prachi angle wud hv ended once he felt odd abt her touch.. want puchki nd mishtimia, not maan nd prachi!! :( bt i m hopin u ll mk up 4 it.. got ma fingers crossed!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
what twist maan proposs prachi😡
what about geet mistima ...
why maan ?
loved it

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