MG: Shetan Ka Ghar-Thread 4 - Page 30

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

simi ... congo jaan for the new thread ... for becoming IF-Dazzler ... for giving us 4 new parts ... i read it in one go & now smiling like an idiot
you know what, i always ask you to write a big update -- to PM me whenever you update a new part -- threat you to soon update -- "no thanks" you to for those lovely works -- encourages you, supports you in every part -- give my honest comments & sometime suggestion too ... but trust me most of the time, i skip to comment the exact emotion of mine while reading your work ... that can't be put in words, you very well know that ... again, the situation is same

the instant you introduced pammi & dev (which was surely unexpected), i got the feeling that they have some damn connection to his past for sure ... and i was right ... maybe he is very much cruel here (and some of may want him to change fast or even hate him) but trust him his painful past made him like that ... i can see how much he feels hurt to recall the past -- where his own so called father betrayed his mother, killed his unborn child, having a shameful affair, how he felt when his mother gave him that shameful news, those non-emotion eyes, those heartbeat & smile of his when he felt his sister in his mother's womb ... all that & much more gave him this cruel shell ... he loves Geet, no doubt but he is not ready to tell his past for some reason ... but she too will get to know it ... overall, his pain (mixed with other emotion) & her confusion is slowly going away ... the last confession was damn cute (not a melo-drama at all) ... so, everything is sorted out except his untold past ... well, that too in que

do cont soon & do PM me