FF'Two broken hearts fall in love' Thread 5

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*****ME fainting**** i can't believe i have reached THREAD 5!!!!

Thx for all your love and support 🤗

Story so far. . .


Maan SIngh Khurana: A 26 year old business tycoon who is very wealthy and has a huge ego. He has a huge business empire but in reality he is a very lonely and quiet guy. He hates woman after he finds out Sameera loved him only for his money. He curses woman ever now and believes that they all have cunning and evil natures behind their beautiful looks except things start to change when he meets Geet Handa.

Geet Handa: A 21- year old girl who used to truly believe in love and always had. Always wishing from her babaji that she meets her raj kumar. She gets her wish and madly falls in love, except that person, Dev, breaks her heart because he trusted some other people over her( you will find out more details later in the story don't want to spoil everyething yet).

Maan and geet are two strangers placed in each other's life by destiny. They never had anything good to say about each other, but as they started to know each other their opinion's changed. They argue/fight with each other but more than that with their own self to distance and deny their feelings for one another. Both of them have been scarred from life's game called "love". There first love left them with such deeps wounds that now none wants to become vulnerable and drink the poison that comes with love again . . .

To see if that day has finally come where they have accepted each other read the previous updates to find out 😆


Part: 52

Wanting to be held prisoner

recap:
His legs all of a sudden go numb from the rush that he was going through. He couldn't believe his eyes. It was really her. It was really his Geet.
She starts to make a run toward him. She couldn't take the distance that was between them. She wanted to feel him and make sure that this was real.
Maan spreads out his arms and she comes slamming into his chest wrapping herself around his neck finally claiming him from the world.

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None of them were letting go of each other. After such a long time they could breath. After such a long time there cold dark and alone hearts were melting. The warmth from the pumping hearts were melting and healing every ache and pain of their broken hearts. Together as one, they sewed back the pieces of their hearts. It was as if their hearts got jump-started and was given a new life. Every pain and ache had faded away from their hearts and instead was beating now for each of their respective names.



Geet's heart was going DHAK DHAK for the man named Maan Singh Khurana. Maan's heart was going DHAK DHAK for the woman named Geet Handa. They got their hearts back and if this was a price they had to pay for it they would repay it with their lives if they had to. Nothing mattered anymore, not the place they were standing, not the world they were standing in. What mattered was this very moment. . . this eternal embrace, which God knows how long it would have lasted if they weren't interrupted by the cheering and claps of the other people that finally these two lost lovers came back into the real world.
They just separated a few inches away from each other. There eyes were still drowning with in each other. . . as if seeping deep inside each other's souls.
Geet heard a wolf whistle from somewhere in the crowd and that's when her cheeks quickly burn up crimson red and she shies away bringing her face and eyes down. How she wished she were alone with him where she didn't have to control herself. She had controlled herself this whole time. . . and yet when he finally claimed her in front of the whole world she still had to control herself'BABAJI she thought to herself.
Maan: You're my Geet. You are really here.
His voice. How much he missed his voice. To hear it personally for herself and that to her name from his perfect M shaped lips. Just thinking about his lips was making her mouth water. "Control" she screamed at herself mentally.
" You're Geet?" she questioned back.
Maan felt like his heart would stop beating. Her expression and question were sending millions of questions at him.
Geet: Mein sirf Maan Singh Khurana ki Geet huin.
Maan Singh Khurana who saved my life and gave my life back.
Maan Singh Khurana who accepted me and brought me into his world when my family and the whole world had turned their backs on me.
Maan Singh Khurana who gave a lost soul a reason for existing.
She said with tears welling up in her eyes.
" I love only the Maan Singh Khurana. I only belong to him. If you are not him than I am not your Geet samjhe Aap".
She said as she scrunched his shirt and looked into his eyes with seriousness. Maan couldn't find the words to say anything. He was overwhelmed by the amount of love Geet had for him. He just stood their admiring her.
"Mein sirf Maan Singh Khurana ki Geet huin. Sirf Maan Singh Khurana ki" she said as she tugged him closer and looked straight into his eyes.
How could she easily surpass all the pain he had given to her?
He couldn't take it anymore and just brings her to his embrace again. He gives her a tight hug, making sure this is real. She is real. How could someone love him so deeply especially with all the pain he had given to her?
"I love you", he whispers into her ear.
Maan: I love you so much.
Geet: I love you too Maan.
She suddenly breaks out of the hug and blurts out, "Lekin khabar dar agar aap dobara uski bareme kuch boora bola toh mujhse boora koi nahi hoga samjhe Aap" she says pointing her finger at her.
Geet expected him to laugh or smile a bit, but he didn't. Instead there was some pain that she didn't miss in his eyes. Maan grabs her cute little finger and then her whole hand and then slides down on one knee.
His tilted his head down. He couldn't meet her eyes. The guilt was killing him. This is not what he expected from her. He wanted her to scream, to fight, slap him, and to call him names, for the pain he has caused her and then after some more manofying to forgive him. But instead she is acting as if it all never happened? She loves him so much, and he is the one who gave this person so much pain? Yes the guilt was eating him.
He bends down lower and kisses her hand. " I am sorry", he whispers. He was fighting back his tears.
Maan: I know I don't deserve you. I was stupid to run away from you. But now I can't run away anymore Geet. You eyes have held me prisoner since the first night I met you. I don't want to escape and run away anymore. I am tired of running away and I have lost. I want to be held as your prisoner forever. I am lost and I am vain. I will never be the same Without you. I can't look, I am so blind. I have lost my heart. I have lost my mind without you.
I can't take one more sleepless night without you Geet. I want to be the first prisoner to willingly be held captive. I am selfish I always have been. But will you be willing to except this Maan Singh Khurana of yours?
He says while pulling out the ring.
Geet's heart skipped a few beats. More tears were starting to well up in her eyes. She tries to cover her gasp. But the whole crowd couldn't hold their gasps in.
Will you be able to forgive your Maan Singh Khurana, your prisoner, for the pain he has caused you, but still hold him captive and spend the rest of your life with him?
He will never be the same without you. I honestly don't think he will be able to live without you Geet?
Geet's tears escaped and trickled down her face. She couldn't find her tongue. She was such a talkative person and when she needed to talk when she needed to answer she couldn't ??? (Zee thinking Kaisa din agaya hai babaji????)
She drops on her knees and nodes her head for a yes. Maan breathes out a sigh of relief.
"yes I will marry you Maan" Geet says finding her tongue and then throwing her arms around his neck and taking him in. She couldn't believe it. She was finally his forever and that to in front of the world.
Maan was on cloud nine right now. He slides the ring on her finger and then picks her up and twirls her around in happiness and screams out a "YES". Geet just held on more tightly around his neck and couldn't hold in her smile.

The crowd was literally screaming their lungs out. The couples that were present in the crowd were also hugging each other seeing the love Maan and Geet had for each other, set such an example for them plus they were overjoyed that these two lost lovers were finally going to be together FOEVER.
" FINALLY" one person screamed. Something very similar about that voice, but neither Maan and Geet turned around. They were in their own little world.
Maan stops twirling her around and slowly brings her down, Maan places his forehead against hers and was eyeing something inching closer and closer.
"Maan" geet whispered while blushing at the same time.
Maan kind of snaps out of it. ( Zee saying no not really😆)
"not here" she said blushing even more.
Maan clears his throat a little and turns his face to the side.
Geet looks up to her babaji and murmers, " What does he think. I don't want to kiss him? I have been controlling myself since the past 10 minutes and he is giving me attitude Babaji???" which Maan didn't miss.
It took every ounce of his self-control for him to control his laughter, but he wasn't going to let his faade down.
Geet moves to his left and starts to poke the left side of his shoulder, but he shows more attitude and moves his body and head to right.
Geet then moves to his right and tries again by poking the right side of his shoulder, but he moves his body and head to the left. He was having fun and could feel Geet getting irritated.
Geet pokes him on the left once again, but when Maan moves his face to the rid, he felt something warm right on his cheek, sending sensations of desire all the way down to his toes.



Geet finally opens her eyes and sees Maan's shocked face. He was just playing never really expected even a luscious kiss on his cheek, he was lost in her eyes again and drowning in the love she had for him.
She wraps her arms around him from behind and places her neck on the side of his shoulder, and seductively whispers, " You will get what you want when we go home. When we go to our home. Zaara intezar kar Mr. Maan Singh Khurana. I will make it worth the wait".

Maan's eyes popped out in shock. Wait let's back up a bit'what did she just say??? Where did all the shyness go? But he couldn't deny the fact that he loved it. She was seducing him right on the spot, once they get home what was going to happen to him. He liked that thought very much, but he looks up, and whispers for only Geet to hear, " Geet ki babaji meri raksha karna" giving a scared look.
Geet's mouth drops in anger. Yes Maan was enjoying it very much.
Just then the same familiar voice tells Tina to go to commercial. At first she was going to object, but when she sees whom it was, she complies willingly.
Geet is about to walk away in anger from Maan, but the same familiar voice stops her when she hears the person say, "Where are you going Mrs. Khurana or should I say BHABI?"
"Vicky" both Geet and say at the same time.
Vicky: The Maan Singh Khurana just proposed to you in front of the whole world and all your going to give him is a kiss on the cheek.
He faces the crowd and says "Nahi meri doston picture abi bakhi hai" and then turns to geet and says, "complete picture dekhao na Geet".
Maan whispers to Vicky for only him to hear, " What the heck are you doing Vicky?"
He replies back for only him to hear and says, " Shut up and enjoy I need to get some revenge from my future BHABI".
Maan's eyes were popping in shock and anger.
He looks to the crowd. " What say guys? Don't you want to see a real kiss?"
Everyone starts to cheer again. Some girl actually fainted in the crowd. She was happy for Maan finding the love of his life, but Maan was the fantasy of many girls and seeing him kiss someone else was kind of hard to bear.
Maan wanted to pounce on putting Geet on the spot like that, but he couldn't do that because they weren't alone and people were watching.
" WE want a kiss. KISS! KISS! KISS!" they were chanting.
Geet felt like she was melting in embarrassment.
Vicky: Don't worry I am not that zalim as your future husband. You are not on air. We are on commercials right now. So do your thing before we actually come on air Geet.
" I want to see how much you love my brother Geet?" Vicky says. Although he knew from the beginning how much she loved Maan, he only said that to make her angry and so she could do it.
Maan grabs Geet and says," You don't have to prove anything to me Geet. I know how much you love me".
With that said he grabs Geet hand so they could leave, but Geet instead pulls him and he tumbles backwards and right then and there she crushes her plump lips against his. What felt like a spark at first turned out to feel like both their bodies was on fire! Every nerve, every cell, every fiber of their bodies was screaming each other's name in desire. At first Maan wanted to protest, because of not wanting to put Geet on the spot, but that millisecond of self-control vanished into thin air. Soon Maan replied to Geet's kiss with the same passion.
Geet was the first one to back away and open her eyes. " I should have done that in the beginning. You mean everything to me Maan".
Vicky was really happy now and couldn't wipe off the grin he had on his face.
" I also knew that, before you even admitted it to yourself Geet. Next time when you plan on running away u will not forget me. You will not punish me" he said that with sadness in his voice.
" This was my revenge, my punishment for you, which I know you enjoyed. But that is beside the point. I guess you are really my Bhabi and not my sister", he says turning around.
Geet was really touched. She grabs him and gives him a tight hug,
Geet: Sach mein tum pagal ho. I will always be your sister. Don't you ever call me Bhabi again! You will be on my side, the dulhaan's side.
Geet let's go and says, "Now smile".
Vicky couldn't hold his smile in.
Vicky: You are really smart Geet. But I am smarter. How will I perform the bet that I won if I am on your side? I hope you haven't forgotten about that bet now have you?
After what i have planned for you I will be to scared to be on your side Geet. So I am going to have some fun and be on bro's side.
Geet: No no no !!! No more bet. You already got your share of fun tonight. No more.
" My sweety bhaabi. Picture abi bakhi hai" and runs away.
Geet gives a whiny look to Maan. Maan was just watching them. They were truly acting like little bickering and teasing siblings. As if one wasn't enough, that another one joined in.
" I don't even want to know about the bet. Tumahari bhai hai what am I going to do. And not to mention I also want to see the rest of the picture Geet" he says with a sexy smirk.
"Maan" she whines.
Maan just sideway hugs her and says, " Let's go Mrs. Khurana I want to find out what is waiting for me at home".
Geet's breathe hitched at that thought and she blushes away.
They both thanked Tina and everyone before driving home. There was no more running away from each other, but now they just couldn't keep away from each other.

(Zee shaking her head. That is our maaneet for us. Brings us to tears with their pain, brings us laughs with their knok jhok, and brings us to blush with their shararati)...hain na???

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Hmmm aur to kya...of course some maaneet moments...What is waiting for Maan SIngh KHurana when he gets home??? hmmm socho shocho?? 😉🤣





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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMGGG!
Hey babaji I came first i cant believe it..🤣 kaha se aagayi😆
And uff finally editing my comment lol
shame on me😆
But Yayyy
CONGOO
for the 5th Thread
You deserve it sashhaa

Anyways to the UPDATE NOW
MOST AWAITED PART😍
But i feel next one is the most coz ahem ahem☺️🤣
OMMMGGG
Hailaaa That was sooo
Romanticc hayeee

MSK finally went on his knees and PROPOSED GEET
I am gonna faint
sashaaa mujhe bachao

This update totally killeddd me
AND OMFG
Geet kisseddd him infront of the whole crowd
That was awesomeee

Hope you did not cry sasha coz someone ELSE was kissing MSK


Awww Vickyy is soo cutee☺️ I wantt him🤣
Bring a girl name SHREYA and pair her with vickyy please
i want to be Geet's Devrani
I know i have gone insane


Ohh teriiMSK ki izzat khatre main hai
Babaji what is geet going to do :O

Looks like MSK is gonna be gone in next update
Geet seducing him🤣

I canttt waitt sasha
dont tadpao us so much and give the next update fastt okie


I loveee youu[ HOMO]




Waiting to read next part
ZEE
lovee
your Tashaa <3















Edited by maangeetcrazy - 13 years ago
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congrats on new thread


superb part
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Superb . . Amazing part . :) .osum plz plz plz next part early. . Plz
Edited by ANGILS.KALI - 13 years ago
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congo shongo Zee...
superb, amazing part...loved it...
i'm speechless...lovely...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congo for the new thread...
awesome part...
loved vicky and daring geet...
plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it 😊
finally 😊
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Me Late Res😭 ==============
Edited😳
Zee My Dhunki 🤗
Are U Serious U Update?...I Cnt Believe U Really Did After A Long Time...
This Was Most Awaited Part Of Ur FF And It Was Worthed Too😍...
I Love The Confession And Spe Proposing In Coward Was MindBlowing😳...
I Love The Challenging Vicky And Geet Really Kissed Maan😲☺️😍...
As I Hv Keep On Saying The Starting Of The FF I Love Geet-Vickys Bond Love Brotherly And Sisterly Hood 😍...
Ahem Ahem Maaneet Going Home And Precap Look Interesting😆...
Nw I Want The Next Update Soon Atleast Try To Update In Weekends Instead Of Updating In Months...
ILU Zee My Dhunki .❤️...
Edited by LoNeLy..GaL - 13 years ago
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haye..hw cute romance..bilkul filmy style..
congo for the new thread dear..
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congrats on ur new thread...
awesome update...
loved the playful interaction of maaneet along with vicky

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