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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

yar IF is not working😡msg window is not showing grrr so i have to go bye zee muahhh🤗


awww

guess there will be double treat for ya tomorrow...

MuahhH!!!

luv ya too!🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
take 20 minute me waitinggg
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Posted: 13 years ago


Part: 53

Adding fuel to the fire

recap:

" I don't even want to know about the bet. Tumahari bhai hai what am I going to do. And not to mention I also want to see the rest of the picture Geet" he says with a sexy smirk.

"Maan" she whines.
Maan just sideway hugs her and says, " Let's go Mrs. Khurana I want to find out what is waiting for me at home".
Geet's breathe hitched at that thought and she blushes away.

They both thanked Tina and everyone before driving home. There was no more running away from each other, but now they just couldn't keep away from each other.

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In the car, Geet couldn't control the million butterflies that were running around in her stomach. Her heart was pacing, frantic to jump out of her chest, increasing her nervousness all the more. She thought it was so embarrassingly loud and it didn't help that Vicky was sitting right in between them in the back seat. She prayed to her babaji hoping he wouldn't be able to hear her heartbeats. Maan just wanted to throw Vicky out of the car, but what choice did he have, his car hit a tree, and so they had to go with Vicky who refused to sit in the front saying he was getting car sick sitting in the front'(Zee thinking sure Vicky😉 😆'.).
Vicky decided to have some more fun seeing the state that Geet was in.
Vicky: Kya hua hai meri pyaari behen ko? Why are you feeling so nervous hmmm?
Geet: kkkuchh nnahiii
Vicky: Why are you stuttering then Geet? We are just going home. There is no special event being held there for you to feel so nervous?
The word "special event" sent a rush of sensations all the way down to her toes, her cheeks turning pink.
Geet silently praying, " babaji help me. What have I gotten myself into?".
Vicky: Geet now you're blushing and fidgeting against your dupatta too. I know who the culprit is don't worry I will deal with him.
Maan heard the entire conversation but was looking out the window, trying to control his smirk. After seeing how bold Geet could be if she wanted too, then when they were alone . . .
"oh bhai. Stop bothering my sister. Stop invading her thoughts and making her blush! Have a little mercy on her. Dekho kaisa sharma rahi hai" he says chuckling breaking Maan out of his thought.
Geet's mouth drops wide open with shock and before he knew it she punches him in the arm.
Geet: For your kind of information it is not because of Maan. He has no such effect on me!
(Zee thinking: haila Geet'yeh tumkhe kya kehdia😲'.)
Geet mentally slaps herself for saying that. She didn't mean it. It was a lie. It just slipped because that stupid Vicky! She didn't even have to see his face to know how angry he was getting. His fingers were turning into a fist, and his biceps were tightening up.
Vicky: It is not because of Maan she says. So are you marrying the right person than? You know you can always back out. I can totally understand it is not easy to love a zaalim singh Khurana.
Geet: Nahi woh woh . . .
Now his fists were trembling from the rage. Geet starts to give a pleading look to Vicky to shut up. Vicky was enjoying this very much and it took all his strength not to burst out laughing.
Just then the car comes to a stop. Maan busts out scaring the hell out of both Vicky and Geet.
Geet gives an angry glare to Vicky. He could tell he was in for it. He start's to run, but Geet starts chasing him with her chappal in her hand.
"VICKYYY!" she screams and throws the chappal, which just passes his right side.
"Haa you . . ." but then bang something hit his forehead so loud as he turned around and he scrunches and holds his head in pain.
" what missed? I don't think so," she says blowing against her fingernails.
Vicky: You know what I actually feel sorry for Maan bhai now. He is marrying a churail like you!!!
" hawww CHURAIL!!!!!" she says holding his ear.
Geet: What did you call me?
Vicky: Ouch ouch ouchhh!!! Okay I am sorry!! SOryyy, SOrryyy!!!
She let's go of him and says, "now that's a good boy".
" Whatever Geet. It was all worth it especially now that you have to do double ...no triple...no quadruple of whatever was making you nervous and blush to manofy bro" he says bursting out laughing.
But then he makes a run for it seeing Geet's anger building up.
Geet just looks up to the sky, " Hayyye babaji. Tonight is going to be a very long night. Mr. Maan Singh Khurana ko manana hoga. I HATE YOU VICKY".
Somewhere out there she hears a reply, " I love you too Geet" and then chuckling after that.
She just stomps her feet, and goes toward the outhouse.
She silently walks in and sees he was nonchalantly sitting on the sofa and watching TV acting as if everything was okay, when she knew and could see from his eyes that he was angry. He had changed into his pj's, show casing his juicy muscles, and was eating pasta as he watched TV.
"ufff he looks so cute when he is angry hayyyeee! But it's time for Geet Handa to melt it. I still have to live up to my promise so let's see how long you can resist and stay angry with me Mr. Maan Singh Khurana," she says with a naughty smirk as she walks away into her room.
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Vicky enters the Khurana Mansion with a huge smile on his face. Meera and Daadima couldn't help not smile with him.
Daadima: Arre beta, at least tell us why you so happy and smiling so big.
Meera: From the looks of it, he is up to his naughty ways again.
Daadima: Maybe that is why Maan and Geet aren't here right now. What did you do this time?
" Why is everyone pointing their finger at me. I am actually. . . no never mind. I am actually GUILTY as charged this time" he says chuckling out loud.
Meera: At least tell us what you did?
Vicky: umm oh nothing really. Just was teasing Geet and making her blush, and then something slips out of her mouth about Maan bhai, and now bhai is fuming in anger right now.
Oh gosh if I were you I would stay away from him for at least three days.
Daadi: Yeh lo, they just got back together, and now they are back to fighting with each other. It's not like I blame them this time, you added fuel to the fire. I know you that well.
Poor Geet I bet right now she is trying to calm him down. Well that is going to take all night. I really wanted to see her tonight, but thanks to you I will have to wait till morning. She has something more important to deal with right now.
I know Geet though, if she could melt his heart and make him fall in love, it shouldn't be too hard for her to melt his anger.
Vicky: I wouldn't be too sure about that if I were you.
Daadima just shakes her head and says goodnight to them.
Meera also gets up to leave, but then Vicky holds on to her wrist and pulls her back.
Vicky: Where do you think your going hmm?
Meera: Vicky you are in a very naughty mood tonight!
Vicky: kya karoon gi, it feels so good to see Maan and Geet finally together. You know how much effort and time I spent on them to make them realize their love for each other. I think I deserve a treat.
Meera: Acha and where do I come in this?
Vicky just picks her up in his arms, " you will soon find out for yourself".
Meera just giggled away.

(Romance shomance is in the air in the khurana residence😉 🤣)

Precap:
MAaneet maaneet and maaneet!!!!
They will be making you blush for sure!!!!☺️☺️☺️
Geet will be seducing Maan, but our Angry young Maan is not planning on giving in so easily.

☺️☺️☺️Hayyye I am blushing already.☺️☺️☺️


Plz like and comment!!! 😳

Edited by Mrs.ZSK - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
haye awsem vicky is so naught m aan angry and geet chappal scene kya maqst tha



Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wo hain zara khafa khafa...yaar i missed GHSP so much...now it is 10:15 pm in bangladesh...usually was for GHSP broadcasting time...missed my maaneet scenes...😔
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: paponecon

wo hain zara khafa khafa...yaar i missed GHSP so much...now it is 10:15 pm in bangladesh...usually was for GHSP broadcasting time...missed my maaneet scenes...😔


yup!!! wo hain zara khafa khafa 😉

awww let me give you a 🤗

i miss them too 😭

hopefully my update cheered you a little bit...will do my best to make you galz stay connected with maaneet through my writing
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW. So it is Woh he Zara Khafa Khafa time.
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Posted: 13 years ago
yipeee finally update
it was really good now waiting for next update
plz zey update it soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update! Can't wait to read more!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anuandavi

WOW. So it is Woh he Zara Khafa Khafa time.


exactly 😉

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