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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shobrakapooor

i juz lovd both ur parts!! couldnt comment on last parts cz i was kinda busy!! awesme update! continue soon!



thank u dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

sorry for late response dear

part 8 - awesome...Geet and Maan are lost in each other. Geet is thinking of kissing Maan and Man is thinking of confession...cool...this is amazing



its ok dear
glad u commented
thank u so much
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nic ff yar...
gone through all prt in 1 go
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shalinisaran89

nic ff yar...

gone through all prt in 1 go


thanks sweety
glad u liked it
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Posted: 13 years ago
na jane update kab milega ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Note:
i m so sorry to all 4 making u guys wait.
Well i m too busy these days
1st with studies and 2nd with family function.
But, i'll try to update as soon as i can.
Thanks 4 keeping patience
love u all
tinu
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hello friends. Here I am back with part 11.

thank you all for all your likes and comments

I know you guys were too angry on me for not updating for such long time. But seriously I am very much engaged with studies and events happening in my family. So please spare me'. Don't throw things on me for it''

Hope u will guys like this part as it is mostly abt maaneet

Geet ' you know maan, when I first saw you, I never thought you would have faced so much in your life.

Maan- geet sometimes things happen which we never dreamt of.

Geet- hmmm . ''''.. leave it. Its ur medicine time, u have ur medicine.

Geet comes forward and gets the medicine and water for maan. Maan takes water and medicine and gulps them . while returning the glass of water , it falls from maan's hand on geet's dress.

Maan- I am so sorry geet. It happen mistakenly. I m so sorry

Geet- its ok maan. I know u didn't done it knowingly .

Maan- but I ruined ur dress.

Geet- its ok maan. I'll change the dress.

Maan- but u were looking so beautiful ion this dress.

As maan said this, geet looked towards him, and they have a eye lock''''.{aaye haaye maan ' lage raho}

They both keep looking at eachother. ''''''..

kuchh toh huwa hai, kuchh ho gaya hai

do char din se lagta hai jaise

sab kuchh alag hai, sab kuchh naya hai

kuchh toh huwa hai, kuchh ho gaya hai

geet blushes and runs off from there. She comes to reception and places her stethoscope and pager there.

chije me rakh ke bhul jatee hu, bekhayalee me gungunatee huabb akele me muskuratee hu,
badalee huyee see meree ada hai

kuchh toh huwa hai, kuchh ho gaya hai

pighla pighla hai dil meraa jab se,
achcha rehta hain mood bhee tab se

haske milta hu aaj kal sab se,
khush ho gaya hai jo bhee mila hai
kuchh toh huwa hai,
kuchh ho gaya hai

she walks from there, then comes back and picks up her pager and stethoscope, and laughs at herself'

rang chamkilay sare lagte hai,
rah me bhikre tare lagte hai
phul abb jyada pyare lagte hai,
mehakee huyee see jaisee hawa hai
kuchh toh huwa hai, kuchh ho gaya hai
dhyan abb apna jyada rakhta hu,
sochta hu mai kaise lagta hu
a
aina ho toh dekh leta hu,
kaise yeh chehra aisa khila hai
kuchh toh huwa hai, kuchh ho gaya hai

here maan remembers geet's blushing face and
smiling face and says 'oh god! I so love her..

maan pov- love ye love kahan se aa gaya''par kya sach much mujhe geet se pyaar hai''..
nahi nahi aisa nahi ho sakta'' lekin agar main use pyaar nahi karta to
kyun use baar baar milne ka, baatein karne ka, sse dekhte rehne ka dil karta hai.
Kyun uske aasun mere dil ko takleef de jate hai''.
yes ye pyaar hi hai' I m in love
I m in love with geet
Geet changed her dress, while fixing her duppata .she sees maan behind her ,
she turns around smiling to find nothing.she just blushes and hides her face in her palms.
Geet ' oh god!!! I cant believe it. Ye kya ho gaya hai mujhe. Does I am in love with maan ? {haan geet u r in love}Why I am seeing him everywhere again and again.

Piya enters washroom to find geet red with blushing and
lost in herself. She smirks to herself guessing why she is lost.


Piya coughs, which brings geet back to senses.


Geet- piya tum kab aai. I didn't see u coming
Piya- wo to tum tab dekhti jab tum yaha hoti

Geet- yaha hoti matlab. Main to yahi hun
Piya comes towards geet , holds her by shoulder and says- geet tum to yahi ho,
par tumhara dil aur mann to kahi aur hi hai.
Geet-nahi piya main maan ke bare me nahi soch rahio thi'''''.. geet bits her lips thinking what she said..

Piya raises her eyebrow ' maan'. Par maine to kaha nahi kit um maan ke bare me soch raho thi'.


Geet ' wooo woo piya mujhe kaam hai , main jati hun'''
But piya stops her''

Piya- ahaha geet, itni jaldi nahi' pehle batao ye kya chal raha hai'
Geet while fidjeting with her earings- kuch to nahi chal raha hai'. Tum kis bare me baat kar rahi ho..
Piya- geet tum janti homain kis bare mein baat kar rahi hun. Chal bata ab mujhe

Geet -piya ... Kya batau main tujhe ...mujhe khud samajh nahi aa raha kya ho raha hai mujhe..
Piya- matlab?

Geet- piya , jab bhi main maan ko dekhti hun najaane mujhe kya ho jata hai...
Jee karta hai ghanto bas use dekhti rahu. Sirf use sunu.
Uske gehre aankhon me kho jau. Jab wo hasta hai to mere chehre par bhi smile
aa jati hai, aur jab uske aankhon ke aasun mujhe bhi rula jaate hai.
Uske dard ko dekh kar mujhe takleef hoti hai.
Jee chahta hai uske ek hassi par apna sab kuch nichawar kar dun...
Geet turns to piysa n says- piya tu bata na, kya hua hai mujhe.

Piya who was listening to geet says with a smile- geet tujhe maan se pyaar hogaya hai
Geet- pyaar?
Piya- haan pyaar.

Geet- oh god! Piya I can't believe it. Mujhe pyaar ho gaya hai' mujhe maan se pyaar ho gaya hai'.
Geet holds piya by her shoulder and twirls her around''Piya I am in love
I m in love with maan'''..
{finally!! U realized..
main to kabse keh rai thi}
ok ok here I end part 11.

This part is full of maaneet and finally they have realized there love. Hope u guys will like it. Do comment and don't forget to click on LIKE tab.

Love u all

tinu

Edited by tinu.jindal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

oye reserved may hilike day diya

koi gal nai !!!
sorry missed previous 4 parts !!!
cudnt cumnt coz was not available tinu😳
chalo updates waz cool 😎
so rahul and muskaan , dev and maan kopheli say hi janthay
hain 😉tats gud
looo bhai ab yeh maan geet public may hi flirt karna
shuru kar diya 😳..lovely
so geet realized she is love with maan😳
tho maan ko kab reallize karni hai 😉??
Edited by thabassum - 13 years ago

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