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woho... bot have realised their love...
great part dear...
nice song selection...
continue soon... 😃
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hey friends
first of all , sorrry for updating so late.
secondly, guys i m so depressed seeing that only 29 people liked it. i sent more than 140 pms still so less likes...
plzz its a request to silent readers to at least click on like tab ...
weelll the following update for those who love my work...

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Hello all

Wish you all happy new year in advance...

And thanks a lots for keeping the patience for the update...

Here we go with part 12

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After the realisation hits the maan and geet about they being in love both are desperate to see each other and confess their love ...

Geet left the locker room full on smiling to meet maan but abhay stops her in corridor..

Abhay- geet where are you going. Come lets go to canteen

Geet- no abhay , not now, i have to go to check upon maan.

Abhay-comeon yaar.. u can check upon him later. What's the hurry. Anyways he is fine now na.

Geet- yes he is fine , but... i need to talk to him.

Abhay'talk to him? Aisa kya baat hai ki you are in such an hurry...says abhay teasingly

Geet- wo wo nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai...wo to mujhe ...haan...haan mujhe usse dawaiyan deni hai...

Abhay- dawaiyaan par wo to nurse bhi de salkti hai.. ek minute

Abhay stops a nurse and asks her to give medicine to maan...

Abhay- chalo geet ab to maan ko dawaiyaan bhi mil jayegi.. ab chale

Geet with a sad and pouting face- chalo...

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Whereas maan is also too desperate to meet geet.his eyes are sticking on the gate.

Maan's pov- geet where are you...please come yaar... i want to see you ...meet you...please jaan come here...i want to confess my love to you... i want to tell you how much i love you...

Just then the door opens. Maan gets excited thinking it must be geet but seeing nurse entering his all excitements drains away.

Maan ' nurse where is doctor geet. Why u r here. Why didn't she came

Nurse-dr. Geet , dr abhay ke saath canteen me hai, unhone hi mujhe aap ko dawayi den eke liye bola hai.

Maan felt a pang of jealousy hit him knowing that geet is with abhay. His blood boiled thinking of abhay with his geet.

Maan's pov- geet abhay ke saath kyun hai. Kahi geet abhay se...nahi nahi maan , aisa kuch nahi hai. Wo log sirf dost hai ... par phir kyun me bardaast nahi kar paa raha ki meri geet uske saath hai... ufff maan tu pagal ho gaya hai... {pagal bhi aur majnu bhi}


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Geet is sitting in canteen with abhay. Rahul, muskan and piya joins them.

Piya- arre waah aaj to sab saath me hai...

Abhay smiles widely seeing piya ... piya looks at him shyly and blushes...

Rahul ' waise abhay agar tu hume dekh kar smile karega to hum bura nahi manege... saying so hi-fives muskan...and laughs out loudly at them...

Geet who was lost in maan's thoughts had came back to senses listening to piya. Seeing abhay and piya staring..

Geet's pov= acha bachu.mujhe maan se milne jaane nhai diya aur yaha piya se ankho ankho me romance kar raha hai..abhi batati hun...just then

Abhay gets embaressed and says- wo wo mein to bas...

Geet smiles seeing abhay stammer- wow o kya abhay. Kya hua tu stammer kyun Karr aha hai.. batata kyun nahi rahul ko ki tu keval piya ko kyun smile diya

Abahy- nahi geet aisi koi baat nahi hai

Rahul- to kaisi baaat hai...

While in whole this piya is standing in a side and blushing..

Piya- wo rahul, abhay to Bas aise hi

Muskan- arre waah...laila boli apne majnu ko bachane ke liye...

Muskan and geet hi-fives...

Rahul- sahi kaha muskan ... look at them kaise laal ho gaye sharam ke mare...

Piya- ye ye tu kya bol rhai hai muskan ... aisi koi baat nahi hai

Abhay- haan guys aisi koi baat nahi hai...

Geet ' acha thik hai piya agar tu abhay se pyaar nahi karti to mein uss jai ko tere riste ke liye haan kar deti hun

Piya- abhay together---nahi geet ...aisa mat karna

Geet along with rahul muskan laughs out loudly...

Rahul- par problem kya hai piya...tu kisi se pyaar nahi karti ...aur jai bhi acha ladka hai... says rahul stretching the word kisi se and pyaar...

Muskan- aur abhay tujhe itni problem kyun ho rahi hai agar piya jai se shaadi kare to. Tu to use pyaar nahi karta...

Abhay- wo wo wo

Geet- ab wo wo wo kya laga rakha hai...bata na

Abhay- acha thik hia hai mujhe problem.nahi dekh sakta mein piya ko kisi aur se saath...haan karta hun pyaar piya se...bahut pyaar karta hun

Listening to abhay's confess...piya was in tears and was smiling too.

Geet jumps with excitement and hugs abahy tightly...

Geet- yes yes yes i knew it. I knew it... i m so happy...

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Maan is feeling restless as its been more than 3 hrs and geet haven't visited yet... he thought... kyun na main khud jakar geet se mil lun...

He gets up and walks out of his ward... a nurse stops him...

Nurse- arre aap kaha ja rahe hai.

Maan- wo haaan mein to bas thoda walk kar lun socha...

Nurse- acha thik hai

Maan just smiles and walks towards canteen...

Just when maan enters canteen he listens abahy saying bahut pyaar karta hun .. and then sees geet hussing him and saying she knew it...

Ye sun kar maan ke pairo ke neeche se shayad zameen hi hil gayi thi... use aisa laga ki uski saanse ruk gayi ho...jene ke liye maano ki wajah hi na bacha ho...

Maan waha se jaane ke liye bas muda hi tha ki...

Piya runs towards abhay- oh abhay i love u too ...main bhi tumse bahut pyaar karti hun... and hugs him..

Jaise hi maan ne ye sunna to use aisa mehsoos hua jaise kisi ne use nayi zindagi de di ho...he turns around to witness abhay and piya hugging eachother ... whereas geet was standing with rahul muskan smiling widely at them...

Maan's eyes stopped at a smiling geet.he can see the joy the happiness twinkling in her eyes...he just kept staring her.

Geet felt someone is looking at her...she looks towards maan and felt his intense gaze on her...she just gets lost in his hypnotic eyes...

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Okay okay guys i am stopping here...hope you all will like this part. I have tried to make this part quite longer...

Well for future track i need all our views...

What ypu guys want.Shall i move this story...slowly like this...or you u all want me to just move it little faster...

Do give our views and responses.

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Love

tinu



Edited by tinu.jindal - 13 years ago
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TRY AND MOVE IT A LITTLE FASTER
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Just a little bit faster would be good...
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awesum update . .
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