ArHi FF: Highway to Hell, note pg 147 - Page 25

wow!!
your khushi is awesome...really an inspiring person!

Chp. 3

Freaking awesome! I just love the way you pen down the dialogues! Incredibly witty, humourous and apt -all at the same time! And the way Khushi has stood up to everyone is highly commendable. I'm dying to know what happened all those years ago and as for Mrs.Raizada, I'm happy!

Thanks for the PM. Great update. Really liking the story. 😃

add me to ur pm list plz i love it

Chp.4

Holy Hell!

I'm so in love with this Ms. Minne Gupta and with you for giving her such wonderful dialogues! And can I say that I love Aadit?!

I'm sooo happy to know that Khushi has two beautiful daughters! Only, I'd be happier if they were twins and six-year olds and she was lying! Sigh! It would've been worth seeing ASR struggling for the affection of not one woman but three women! Anywho, it's your story and your way to go. Loved it to the core!

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Forgot to add, the way Khushi replied to the seven year old insults of phatti saree and Hello-hi-bye-bye was unique and hilarious! And the way you dress up Khushi, I'd like to ask, 1e you by any chance related to the fashion industry? Likle a fashion designer or something? And, yeah, it's great to know that Khush-Lavs bonding still exists. Especially, the way they've portrayed them in the show, I would hate it if their friendship suffered due to the mess that's soon to happen. And I'd like it better if Khushi and Lavanya shared a true friendship and not a superficial one, in the show that is.

respect for khushi donno to feel gud or bad abt khushi tht she changed soo much...amazin part dear

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Originally posted by: ashvez

Vidhya..Phenomenal!!

The reason behind her bitterness is well justified.And Yeah!...Devi Mayya ...had to go for now.

It would be really enchanting to see how Arnav will bring the old Khushi back and her beliefs.

I really need this bitter Khushi to soften up...its quite harsh .True, she has been through many hardships..but its so difficult to see her snap at Arnav and the family. It would be quite a treat to see her slowly opening up to Arnav & shunning her defences,layer by layer.

Vidhya, I would like to see a bit of ASR to be back ..his old personality has to reflect sometimes, rt???But maybe then Khushi would be more hard on him.😕

Howlarious.!!!..the dude...doesn't have a clue about Charles in Charge & Who is the Boss?.🤣🤣🤣That was too good...seeing ASR catching up with the epis.

Good old Memories, Girl😃

Ash.

Hey Ash!

Thanks! I am hoping Arnav can find it within him to soften this KKG up..after all, if she has a soft spot its for him😊. I don't think the old ASR would work on this Khushi..shes too strong for that. He needs to really convince her f his love. Let's see how it goes.

Speaking of Who's the Boss...I always loved Tony Danza😊

Originally posted by: tes_v1

Ola Maxine!

Howdy?

I just ambled into Fan Fictions today and saw an ArHi Ff on the first page. Since I've taken a fancy to the couple lately and decided to peek in. Overall the concept seemed appealing and I decided to give it a try. And though I'd saved the page -for later reading- since I was at work, my cell phone screen the whole day open to this page, lest I forget it later. So, finally I'm home, saw today's epi and started reading it. I had initially decided to leave one long comment after reading all the parts, but just after reading the first part, I had to speak up, I just had to!

Woman, you're brilliant! I loved the charachterization and the dialogues. Taken a fancy to Aadit, already! Ms. Minnie Gupta is in a league of her own! And 25 and 37? That's almost a 12 year gap between the two! But me loves. It's fantabulous.

And one reason I love it very much more is because I had a future concept with an erect-spined Khushi in mind but there's no time to write. So, I'm enjoying what you've done with a similar concept. Totally in love with the story after just the first chapter!

Excuse my rant if it's inconvinencing but I had to speak! Off to read the other chapters.

Cheers,
Tia :)

Thanks Tia! My name is Vidhya...though I don't mind Maxine😊! Thanks so much for the long aand sweet comment..I'm glad you are liking it. I started writing this 'cos I was so sick of ASR brow-beating KKG in the show. I thought she needed to give it back to him. 😆
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Originally posted by: ipkkndank

LOVED IT ... Fab update dear

i wonder what will happen next 😆

So pls update soon...

waiting for another PM

Thanks! As far as what will happen next...wish I knew. Wherever my imagination takes me, I guess😊! I'll certainly PM you..sure!