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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

superb update
hilarious n lovely...loved nupur proposing mayank n shadi scene were amazing.
cont soon

thnks aloot dear
lol glad ur enjoying it n enjoyed the marriage too

Originally posted by: tukun2009

congratualation on csi sequel😃 the chapter were like previous one rocking 👍🏼
👏 pls cont soon

thnku soo much
its all becuase of u all all the requests
thnku so much

Originally posted by: palz_ArTi4ever

fantastic...!! absolutely awesome to say the least...brilliantly written...😳 continue soon sis..🤗 keep it up...!!

thnsk dear
gald u liked it
thnku for liking my wirtingEmbarrassed😃

Originally posted by: mayur_eternal

Hurray!!U started S2😃
cont soon dear

thnku glad u said hurry means u like it
😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: drmaha

its just amazing update dear...

i thoroughly enjoyd it...😆
nupur called him at 3 and propose kia ...wow...😊heads off to u nupur jii👏
loved it...

Mayank: kasay, yaha asy ..pagal ho gai 'mein naukari kerta hoon, khana khata hoon, asay nhi bhat sakta'.kafi tiring hai yeah'uncomfortable bhi'..feeling back strain yaar

Nupur: uffu mayank tumhain khabi koi baat seedhi tarah samjh nhi ata '

Mayank: seedhi seedhi baat tum tu kerati nhi, tum ny yeah kaha k mein asy nhi rah sakta tu

Nupur: I mean hum

Mayank: tum bhi'.not possible nupur..tum bhi tu department tu band hojay ga'han Samrat can earn a promotion

The anger of nupur was raising n mayank was loving..it

Nupur: mayank'.kya hum 24/7 ek sath nhi rah saktay '.

Mayank: ur offering me to live in'he leaned closed n asked with a naughty glint..nupur really'..

i love these lines...😆
koi moka janay nai daita mayank nupur ko tank kernai k...
amazing dear...
loved it...
awsome work...
cont soon...
love ya...

thnks aloot dear
glad u enjoyed it
n like it
gald u liked tht part tooo
will cont soon
hpeu all like the main plot too
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73

Hello guys, sorry for being late, Eid days were going on. So from this chapter strts the plot. Rpld to u all.. hopefully u all r gonna enjoy…

Chapter: 3

Com: nupur , u n ur team go and check the site, than reach bureau I'll brief u about all this…..this a case of high importance, and its way complicated ….

Nupur: sir…..but isn't this case was handle my city police, rather than special branch….

Com: I know it was but now its on u guys…..check the side n I'll brief u else…but u all are under cover

Nupur: what …..oki sir…..

Samrat…..get on the link road …we have a case….ask benji to reach to……

..

Site;

A red BMW was standing at the side of road, whose two side door where open, the left side glass was broken, n a man was lying dead near the car…..

Samrat: reach inside the prohibited area…..he looked the site from bit away…

Nupur: looks like the guard was killed n the driver was neatly taking out…

Samrat: hey….bhabi..he whispered…to wch he received glare…mjhy laga aj tu BUSYY hogi….office mein kasay …..tumhary pati n jhor diya..

Nupur: Samrat tu maar kahy ga kiya….case per concentrate ker warna woh sadu hum mein se kisi ko nhi choray ga…

Samrat: chuckled…back to case…kyun k sadu kam k baray mein asa hi hai….whose car….

Nupur: the famous politician…Vikram Khurana and son of ex Minster defense Shiv Khurana

Samrat: whtt…..its critical

Nupur: dam critical……he has been kidnapped……chal site ki khaak chany….benji kaha hai…

Samrat: on his way….n mayank

Nupur: on his way too…..

Samrat: looks like , the guard was shout from side window, thn was dragged out….n the was taking away

Nupur: or maybe guard came out himself to protect him….

Samrat: hmm…shayad nhi…glass is broken…..

Mayank: whts up guys….

Samrat: hey mayank…hows the trip

Wearing cloves , he reached the site n was looking keenly at the guard shot area

Mayank: good , tiring, boring….informative…..looks like a very clean shot at the shoulder…did shot jugular vein?,,,he askd Samrat to confirm wht he was observing…

Samrat: seems….too….post mortem k baad I can confirm……but wht a combination na…trip was good , tiring , boring n informative….yeah sab ek sath kasy

Benji: mein bata hoon na…he said entering to the site….n nupur took as side to attend the call n looked the other side of car..

…...dekho good….as in it was a training program..sadu always love to attned…all giggle…tiring…reaching back there was no one to remove the tiredness naa……ohooo…samrat added…n mayank hited him….rukh rukh agay tu sun…..boring because …kis ki pyar bhari batein tu phir bhi thi..but pyar nhi tha naaa……

Mayank: benji tu maray ga…..

Samrat was laughing while taking pictures from the side of the car door….

Benji: n informative….cause imagination mein romance kasay kertay hain yeah mayank ko ab pata chala…..

Nupur: mjhy bhi ….

The trio looked at her..who was talking on phone…n burst in to laugh….

Nupur: kiya hua…

Benji: nhi bhabi we don't want u to turn red…han per hum achy bachy hai tu yeah jalidi khtam kertay hai aur ap apni imagination ko reality bany …thik

Nupur: kiyaaa……n stop calling me bhabi…..com sir k sath meeting hai..collect samples n thn go there….tujhy pata hai na yeah case kitna senstitve hai…

Samrat : wht sensitive yaar…politician hai tu sensitive hogaya…..warna koi am addmi hota tu koi pochta bhi nhi…\

Mayank: true….

The search the whole side . n took the finger prints, whole loads of them….moving the body to bureau….n reaching in side the car to check it for any clues…

Benji: oye hoi…looked this baby…..he pull out an ak 47 from the car back…

Mayankk: oh man….phir bhi kidnap hogaya…..strange….

The car seat at right has marks of blood seems the body was dragged out from tht side, the left door has its locked broken but not with bullet, care was completely taken by the kidnapper to maintain safety of him…..

Com: leave the site …cum to meeting

Mayank: sir…..comon guys call from commissioner…

Commissioner :

Team it's an issue of great sensitivity, as u know all that two months back minster of defense was killed. Today in morning his son was kidnapped while he was returning from gym..

Mayank: but why we have been involved in this case ….

Com; mayank there was no progress in the case of his father..

Nupur: but it was claimed to be a terrorist attack….

Com: yes it was but my personal views are different from it ….

Samrat: means…..u think tht its was conspiracy

Com: yes….i thinks so but our problem is different ….we can only handle kidnapping not murder, the case of murder is still with the federal commission of terrorism…

Benji: means we cant get information abt murder..even if it sumhow related to the kidnap

Com: true…my team its sumhow a challenged to our team to solve this case, we have been actually challenged by terrorist commission to solve this case, lets see we can….this was there statement

Nupur: why we have been handed over this case….

Com: his sister has done a press conference …n has claimed tht government is not doing wht should be done, so she has asked the home minster to shift this case to CSI, so

So I want my team to prove itself , I know u many find loads of hurdles in it, but I want u guys to do whtever u can, n I have full faith u all will…whtever favour u guys want from me I'll provide to extend I can….

Bst of luck, n keep rocking…..

Benji: why I feeling sumting fishy fishy

Nupur: mjhy tu fishy nhi, elephant elephant lag raha hai

Samrat and mayank were playing with pencil…

Benji: ap k kiya vichar hain……he leaned down

Mayank: yaar ….koi garbar tu hai…..warna teriost brach maar k bhi humain case na forward kerti

Samrat: us ki behan se milna chaiy…wht made her force to transfer case, plus..we need information abt the murder too

Nupur:: yaar it was a dreadful murder…..he was going with his family to his relatives house, whn the terrorist stop the car…put the gun on his daughter head….killed all the gards n shout him…n left…

Mayank: means if they want to kill his son , they would have previously

Samrat: true……but maybe terriost needs money…yaar its very common thy kidnap kids of big families n ask huge ransoms…..

Benji: true n khurrana's are huge family, they have been in politics from fore fathers, plus they have huge land area in Punjab in there possession

Mayank: chalo…strt the case solving …we will find either it is fishy or elephant size conspiracy or was a smiple case….

Oki Samrat u know ur work..all clues…

Benji I need all accounts details , of whole family, any previous kidnapping , doing so join sami to help him…..

Me n Nupur, his fathers case wht information u can get n have we want…

But all this today….i know its late night but I want this case tht u all work day night n take as challenge ..n we need to solve it ASAP….

WHAT

Mayank: sorry but we need to get atleast a plot thn u can go n rest…..

Samrat: hum sab tu ghar se aay hain..janab ur the most tiered

Mayank: I am fine

Nupur: mjhy us k press conference ki copy chaiy…I wanna see her claims…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
soorryyy for late comment...lekin iss ka hargiz yeh matlab nahi ke RESSS hi comment hai😳...!

will edit later😳...!
Edited by valliyah - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
niccc update
the case seema interesting
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
osom
this is exciting and interesting
looking forward to it
with lots of twists and turns lol
do update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
fantastic update
u r soo good at writing dese types of stories yr
suc a fab case
tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Superb piece of writing
and i know about which case u are talking and I wish ka ye case reality ma bhi solve ho jay kash
Thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: DhanakZ

Superb piece of writing

and i know about which case u are talking and I wish ka ye case reality ma bhi solve ho jay kash
Thanks for pm
cont soon

thnku
but honestly i wrote this case just after CSI one...so it was nt evn in my wildest dream tht it will become sumthing real..so pls donot thk its based on tht...as agay jo hoga tu mein tu mari jao gi
😕😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
interesting updt fiza
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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