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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

superb update
hilarious n lovely...loved nupur proposing mayank n shadi scene were amazing.
cont soon

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tukun2009

@tukun2009

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

congratualation on csi sequel😃 the chapter were like previous one rocking 👍🏼
👏 pls cont soon

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drmaha

@drmaha

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

its just amazing update dear...

i thoroughly enjoyd it...😆

nupur called him at 3 and propose kia ...wow...😊heads off to u nupur jii👏

loved it...

Mayank: kasay, yaha asy ..pagal ho gai …mein naukari kerta hoon, khana khata hoon, asay nhi bhat sakta….kafi tiring hai yeah…uncomfortable bhi…..feeling back strain yaar

Nupur: uffu mayank tumhain khabi koi baat seedhi tarah samjh nhi ata …

Mayank: seedhi seedhi baat tum tu kerati nhi, tum ny yeah kaha k mein asy nhi rah sakta tu

Nupur: I mean hum

Mayank: tum bhi….not possible nupur..tum bhi tu department tu band hojay ga…han Samrat can earn a promotion

The anger of nupur was raising n mayank was loving..it

Nupur: mayank….kya hum 24/7 ek sath nhi rah saktay ….

Mayank: ur offering me to live in…he leaned closed n asked with a naughty glint..nupur really…..

i love these lines...😆

koi moka janay nai daita mayank nupur ko tank kernai k...

amazing dear...

loved it...

awsome work...

cont soon...

love ya...

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_ArTi4ever_

@_ArTi4ever_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

fantastic...!! absolutely awesome to say the least...brilliantly written...😳 continue soon sis..🤗 keep it up...!!

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mayur_eternal

@mayur_eternal

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Hurray!!U started S2😃
cont soon dear

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: shafyyy

fabulous update..

aur unki marruage ka sequense bhi amazing...

tnks alot dear

gald u liked the wedding

Originally posted by: mayuloveu
amazing. I love it. continue soon

thnku will cont soon

Originally posted by: preety88
fabulous update...cont sooon

thnks aloot

Originally posted by: cutiepie12
i loveee nupur

thnks aloot

Originally posted by: SamiraARTiMAYUR
EID Mubarak 2 u 2 sis 🤗 Wonderful part loved Mayur thnx for the pm

thnku so much

thnks lott

Originally posted by: gopi06
sweet updt fiza
kya confession tha, kya proposal hai, kya story hai..really nupur is a single piece ..cont soon
thanks for the pm

thnku so much dear

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: DhanakZ
Chor yar Mayank bad ma shadi karta ha
oh My God 🤣Nupur is really a one piece

so beatiful and lovely Update

and I san imagin What a beautiful picture that was

Thank U so much For Pm

Or ha jab ap meri bat man kar world Ka best Ff mujha da sakti ha to ma ap ki bat ku nahi man sakti

thnku soo much dear

yes she is ..single one😉😆

glad u enjoyed it

thnku so much for calling this bst ff...n thnks fro giving me ISHQ..

lov ya

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: clustersofstar
wah wah what a proposal and what a shadi loved it... bengi ka kurta dialogue is awesome hehehe totally enjoy the update continue soon...eid mubarak to all this is my eid gift from you thank you so much😛😛😛

thnks aloot dear...

thnks for ur gift...

Originally posted by: arjun-forever
awww...that was sooo sweet...:):):)

thnku

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--
lol nupur was too funny🤣
baad me shadi karte hai...🤣

loved this update..marriage sequence was good

cont soon.

Happy Eid🤗

thnsk aloot dear

glad u liked it

thnks for wishes

Originally posted by: parul_bansal
amazing👏👏
thank god isko maine gmyh ke baad padha

otherwise i was still crying

hehehehe

may god bless u

thnks aloot

lol

yaar islyn pm mein hi asay set kya tha..

always do it like this GMYH k bad ya tu csi ya phir single read kero...lol

thnks for liking

Originally posted by: crazymayurian
amazing
u r the best writer and about dailogues u r a big competitor

lol superb

thnks lot dear

competitor...my god dear...im out of it..donot worry...

thnsk lott

Originally posted by: kirti123
lovely chp😊

thnks

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: -Faria-
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By GOD Cascade aisa shaadi + iasa dulhan maine aj tak nehi dekha...LOL
ye shaadi, ye Dulhan and i can say ye couple he unique
oye i loved the way u'e shown our Nuur
GOSh really loved this nupur yaar.
agar mujhe ladki hokar use pyaar ho sakti hai tou maynk ko tou payaar hoga he na??
fabulous update
Freaking awesome hun
u r superb Janu
love u and ur update
muahhh
keep it up

ehy faru

ayr shadi tu tujy credit jata ahi u know i wasnt adding this part initially u asked for it so its for u

lol...tu reham ker pls...larkiyoon se payr...faruuu...pls...kalyug hai😆😉

thnks janu ..

stoping passing kissses..logo ko yaqeen hojay ga😆lov ya allooot

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

Fiza, very nice update dear.

loved it a lot

kya shadi thi ...bye god ... i never ever saw this kind of shadi ...aur dulhan ki to kya kehne ...

hogi kyun nahi akhir nupur bhushan jo hay ...LOL

bdw, loved their confession ... this was the most hilarious confession i ever read ... by god ...

ye couple to unique hai boss ... but i loved them

loved mayur a lot ... i like mayank's character ... finally he was out of his shell ...only cause of nupur.

loved them a lot.

loved the picture ... it shows... how strongly they bonded ... not only in professionaly, but emotionally too ...

loved it.

love you ...