OS: The Tale of a Selfish Man

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luckybin

@luckybin

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

No words can do justice to what you have written.

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Aishwarya

@malluangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

holy shit that was amazing. not just the poem, which was so simple yet intricate that it explained his turmoil...and then the written part. just wow. arnav has got to be the biggest coward ever right? na...hes just afraid...hes only human.

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..Winter_Soul..

@..Winter_Soul..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

I'm diabetic. I can't have you.

I never loved a line as much as I love this one. Darn I love the OS. It's so so beautifully written. You nailed it, girl! Keep rocking and thank you for such a master piece of writing :)

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Flame.

@Flame.

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

This was amazinggg !

What can i say? I dont have words to describe it.

and i understand. I guess everyone including me on the forum is super sad today.

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Hey Bristy.

A fab OS hun.

It was very intense. Full of pent up frustration, emotion, anger...it was a roller coaster ride to read.

At the beginning of this OS, my feelings were towards Khushi and Lavanya. But you got me to switch to Arnav 100%!

The man is in so much pain, its hard to even begin describing it.

A splendid job by you...big hugs...🤗🤗

Thanks for the PM sweety!

😊

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aakriti

@aakriti120

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

very well written

thanks for the pm..:)

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Hanieya Rehman

@Haniibee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Hey you know when I think about it this whole drama kind of reminds me of Beuaty and the Beast!

Even in your OS Khushi calls him a monster and in the end when he curls up and thinks about what he did he himslef realises that he IS a monster!

So I dunno it hust kind of reminded me of Beuaty and the Beast because in the end Khushi changes Arnav for the better like Belle does to the Beast!

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tina

@cpervaiz

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

i think u underestimate urself u have a beautiful talent of writing poetry or otherwise ...that was actually very sweet and painful ff ...just touched my heart

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AquaBluez17

@AquaBluez17

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

awww omg this made me feel like crying! it wuz so intense! thnk you for this Bristy. It wuz amazing. I don't even know what else to call it. Just fabulous!!