OS: The Tale of a Selfish Man

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Bristy

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This is SO good. Can this happen tomorrow? 😆 you've portrayed Arnav's feelings very well & the way Khushi poured her heart out, you've penned that down beautifully! You are the sweetest thing in the whole world and I'm diabetic DAMN I LOVED THIS LINE. <3 very well thought! & the poem was so good, I really liked it.

Like Khushi says he never knows what he's doing when he's angry, yet again he proved her right! Lovely OS, really loved reading it. :)

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mimi

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Posted: 14 years ago

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i simply loved it!!!!

wud love to see some intense scenes from arnav's side tomorrow!!!!

wonderful!!!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

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AWESOME!!! 👏👏

How can you say that your poetical skills are not that great when in fact, they ROCK????!!! Wow, awesomeness overload, plus sleep deprivation, so I am sorry, but this is the best I came up with!

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Posted: 14 years ago

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You need to add a sequel to this!

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Sara

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Nice os

Thanks for the pm

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devishree

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Posted: 14 years ago

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⭐️poetic justice to the OS

i almost cried wen i read this wat a wonderful lines superb

u r too good at writing poem 👏

splendid and fantabulous 😊

no words to describe "i loved it"❤️

so emotional that will move u to tears..😭

i felt bad for arnav and kushi

awesome os

do keep writing...🤗 a tight hug for u for the nite

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Avni Raju

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hey thts cute...u justified asr's character like he was not accepting to himself tht he love khushi👏

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Posted: 14 years ago

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you should write more often when you're angry or upset...

this was fantastic ⭐️

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Aisha

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Posted: 14 years ago

That was awesome 👍🏼

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