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nyxx

@nyxx

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

OMG! This was by far one of the best writings ive read in my entire life. Seriously, everything was beyond PERFECTION! Right from the car ride and to coming back and crushing the glass in his hands, I could completely feel Arnav! Sames goes for Khushi, Im hoping that the words Khushi spoke in this ff, is what she says tomorrow during the car ride! Like seriously, can this really happen tomorrow! It would be by far a perfect episode...and though this is just an OS, im hoping againt hope that you continue thiss lol! But completely lovedd thiss and you as writer continue to spell bound me with every new writing peice...Marvelousss! Thank youu again for thisss! :)

Oh and lovedd the poem!

- Dee

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Bristy

@the_rain

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: -Urvi-
Okay, this almost made me cry. I was so close. Maybe it's cos I'm an emotional fool, or maybe it's cos your OS was just that good. Honestly. Wow. I cannot find a single flaw. You've captured the character's and their feelings so perfectly, it's amazing. Wow. Just wow.

Have you written more? I'd love to have a read!

Hey Urvi, thanks for commenting. Loved your response, thank you.

I've written quite a number of OS and have one continuing FF. Here's the links to all my work on ArHi,

A Father's Instinct: Click Me

And I Hug You Back: Click Me

Itne Bure Bhi Nahi: Click Me

Lost: Click Me

My Heart Goes Dheem Tana: Click Me

Rainy Night: Click Me

The Way I Feel For You: Click Me

You and Rain: Click Me

FF: His Gardening, Her Jalebi: Click Me

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HaRul-lover

@HaRul-lover

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

amazing how u portray every feelings of arnav OMG it was so sad and so poetic 😍

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

FANTASTIC!!

the poem was really good!!

you have to continue this!!

thank you so much for the pm!

loved reading!!

plzz plzz consider continuing this!!

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.Saraa.

@.Saraa.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

really tooo goood..a heart wrenching after a sad epi

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hemvb

@hemvb

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

one word..awesome!!!!

plzzz do continue this yaar...cant wait for more of arhi ;)

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moonlight99

@moonlight99

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Phenomenal!!! i just absolutely loved the way you described the feelings!...im in love with your writing!! 😊

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

This was an AMAZING update! Just loved your os. You described asr's feelings wonderfully, and i loved khushi's outburst in the car

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Marci

@Marci

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#29

*standing ovation*👏

That was brilliant, beautiful, exceptional...JUST FREAKIN AWESOME!!!!!

This OS just touched my heart, really felt Arnav and Khushi's emotional turmoil!!!

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#30

Wow, I have no words to describe how each one of your words made me feel. I have yet to watch today's episode, but this is what it should be like tomorrow, this is how it should be all played out.

I was fabulous descriptions of what they each should be feeling.

I loved it, thanks for the PM.

👏👏👏