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Blue Rose

@uniquebluerose

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

You are just amazing...how could you!!! When we are shedding tears for Khushi, Arnav and Lavanya...

you have created a masterpiece out of that tragedy...hmmm no words

I salute you!!!!!!

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

very powerful from both khushi and arnav's side! i hope this happens but you know those damn cv's dont listen to us!

xxx

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shybabe

@shybabe

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Very well written and said😛...I think there are lots of people upset with Arnav for what he did.today...!

I think today marks the real meaning of the first promo that aired for IPKKND! We all have to wait and watch what happens tomorrow...

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meghnas

@meghnas

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly
You need to add a sequel to this!

yes pls give it a happy ending :)

it was beautifully written!! emotions expressed so well!! I'm back to loving Arnav 😳😳

Edited by meghnas - 14 years ago

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hershii

@Smileyface

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

girlfriend idk what ur talking about!! u should right more often when ur pissed off or high on emotions lol!!!

that poem was beautifull!!! and gosh i loved this part...the pain and agony he was going through you described it brilliantly!!

I liked the much needed reality check that khushi gave him...my heart went out to her...but then later even with him...i felt so bad for him <33 Even though he was "heartless" the way u portrayed his emotions was wonderful!

goshhh arnie! needs to stop taking rash decisions sheesh! i wonder whats gonna happen in the show! but whatever it is im sure it will be very dramatic and full of emotions!!

great job once again!!!

xox

hershi

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vidisha

@sweetvidisha

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Loved it...Best line of all "You are the sweetest thing in the whole world and I'm diabetic." CUTE...i dont know if i liked today's episode or not..oh well...i have stoped predecting... but i loved what u wrote...hope u continue.. and thanks for the pm

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-Urvi-

@-Urvi-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Okay, this almost made me cry. I was so close. Maybe it's cos I'm an emotional fool, or maybe it's cos your OS was just that good. Honestly. Wow. I cannot find a single flaw. You've captured the character's and their feelings so perfectly, it's amazing. Wow. Just wow.

Have you written more? I'd love to have a read!

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deepti

@deeps.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

OMG so beautifuly written.. i became very emotional after reading this.. i still am very pissed off about arnav in today's epi, but your os made me like him even more.. such a complicated character he is.. and you, you think you dont hav poetic skills? you must be kidding.. you are best at it!! pl continue if u can

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arshia

@ashvez

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

@the_rain...Too GOOD!! Just brilliant!!!

I am short of all adjectives.

Good Sweet Lord !how beautifully u have shown the pain Arnav is going through.Marvellous!!

And Khushi...OH mY!! the pain was detrimental...shattering for her soul...she just poured her self out...unbashedly!

Gurl I just have to hug u for this🤗...our state after the epi is so vulnerable...and this touched the heart..The poem is amazing.Each line is splendid.

Ash.

Edited by ashvez - 14 years ago