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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
thank u so much guys,, will update in few mins...
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sirf mere liye
part 18...

maan took a seat beside sheena, he began to converse with her, and geet too joined them on the dinning table...

sheena: hey maan. abhi bhi gussa ho kya?

maan looked at geet who was listening all this but didn't dare to look at maan who was smirkining now to see the affect on her...

maan: no sheena, main tumpe kaise naraz reh sakta hu, hmm lunch kare, tum v bhuki hogi itne dur se jo aayi ho, aur tumhara fav pasta v to bana hain that will be mouth watering na?

now geet is regreating about making pasta for HIM... and more over letting sheena stay over here... (ladkiya kitni jaldi jealous hoti hain 😕 ) geet took the pasta bowl to serve maan but he snatch it from her and serve sheena,, rahul has a victorious smile on his face... and bindiya aadi has a worried look on their faces...

maan: geet pehle mehman fir hum...

sheena: maan don't be formal hum isse kahi jayada close reh chuke hain,,, and this is the limit, 1st maan took the seat beside sheena instead of her, didn't let her serve him now that closeness couldn't handle by geet... she just went to the room without touching the food... bindiya gave a stern look to maan to which he just ignore... everyone gets busy in their lunch...

after lunch...

rahul gets up to take a leave, but sheena doesn't want to go...

sheena:rahul main to yaha hi rehna chahti hu,, tum jao...

rahul: lekin sheena maan ko problem hosakti hain,,,

maan: rahul u can leave and sheena tum yaha reh sakti ho...

sheena got excited and hugged him and geet saw this... geet was coming to the hall as she was feeling thirsty,,, when she saw the scenario, she became furious and made cute angry faces... maan could saw the effect and his plan was going perfectly...

geet straightly goes to bindiya, and cribed silently making few faces to which bindiya smiled and assured her through her eyes that everything will be alri8...she went to her room with the bottle but gave side look to maan...

in geet's room...
she throw herself in the bed and cried,, like a baby hiding her face in pillow,,,,

geet: khota pehla kaha wo dost nahi hain, chid v raha tha uske naam se aur abhi dekho gale laga raha hain... babajiii meri madad karo na, us chudail ko yaha se bhagao... wo micro mini skirt wali chipku... ye rahul v na,, kamina kya jarurat thi usko yaha laane ki... sorry babaji for the language ha, lekin aapko pata hain na main jab gussa karti mujhe kuch v hosh nahi rehta aur aapko kya jarurat thi wo sheena ko yaha bhejne ki,,, waise galti meri v thi na main usse rehne ko na kehti,, na ye hota... abb kya karu? ho gayi galtii,,,, plsss babaji madad karo...agar ye aisa hi chalta raha to main gusse se pagal hojayungi,,,,, aur ye to kuch din k liye rehne aayi hain, pata nahi kab tak aise chipakti rahegi... main kya karu, aisa chalega to main to uska murder v kar sakti, i hate her arrrggghh...

KYUN GEET,,,, TUMHE ITNI PROBLEM KYUN HORAHI HAIN came a deep and husky voice that was close enough to her to understand that he was very close to her and ofcourse who is the owner of this manly voice... maan was standing over the door... when geet went her rooom maan came behind her as she still not ate anything but when he heard geet was cursing him sheena and herself,, he wanted to listen more...

geet slowly turn to see him but eyes were down not looking at him... maan was leaning over her but when she turned around they were now in semi leaning position... maan came close to her

maan: kya huya geet... sheena k yaha rehne se tumhe problem hain? but tumne hi to,,,,,,,,, he said this and slowly stood up from the bed,,, geet too got up... and tried to go from there but maan hold her hand and pulled her toward him... she fell on his chest instantlly with a thud... her face was on his chest... she looked at him and frown...

geet: aap yaha kyun aaye, mehman ko bura lag jayega... unhe chodke aap yaha...

maan: ssshhh geet,, tum aise yaha agayi bina lunch kiye... chalo kuch kha lo pahle,,,,

geet: mujhe kuch nahi khana, she tried to free herself but maan's grip became tighten... aahh mujhe dard horaha hain maan, chodiye...

maan: mujhe v dard hota hain geet... geet instantly looked at him and all she can see pain and love... she leave her struggle... and looked in his eyeds intently, maan came close, his face was an ince away from her, they could hear their heartbeat,,, their sweet aroma that was filled in the room,, maan traces his index finger to milky white skin,, her stands which was diturbing him to see her face he kept this behind her ears...

maan: geet usse tumne hi to roka abb tumhe kyun problem horahi hain, bolo? hmm?

geet: wo main,,, mujhe kya problem hogi... she didn't dare to meet his eyes...

maan: wo to mujhe dikh raha hain,, uss bechari ko kitni galiya padh rahi hain...

geet became furious now: bechari huh? wo mujhe dikh rahi thi, kaise chipak rahi thi wo khotti, aur aap ne v kuch nahi kaha... maine kaha mehman hain thodi der rahegi koi problem nahi hain lekin wo to yaha joke ki tarha chipak gayi aur aapne kya kaha wo mehman nahi huh? to kya hain wo? geet was so angry that she couldn't understand what she was doing,, she was coming towards maan and he was going backward untill he hit the wall... geet was furious and that could burn him alive,,, thats why she was not understanding the proximity... she was pointing a finger to him and took one step ahead,,,,,, ha bolo kya lagti hain wo? main ne khaya ya na khaya ye puchne ki time v nahi hain aapke pass aur wo sheena k pass baith kar khana kha rahe the aap... tab kaha thi aapki ye concern jo aab aaye hain khana khalo kehne... nahi khana mujhe...

maan: hogaya????

now geet could see how close she is, so she took two step backward but maan pulled her to him by her waist...and accidentally her lips touched his cheek... time froze for both of them... both looked at each other... both didn't know what to say,,, maan release her,,,, she wanted to go from there but couldn't move an inch from there,,,, sheena came there and saw both of them staring at each other...

sheena: maan tum yaha? mujhe tumse baat karni thi, chal sakte ho abhi?

maan: ha main aata hu tum chalo...

geet didn't liked it so she goes from there...

6pm
in the living room...

sheena: i m sorry maan, kya hum beeti baate vul ke aage nahi badh sakte? pehla jaisa sab thik nahi hosakta... geet was in the kitchen,, can see them from there, maan and geet both of them perposely stealing glances of them and both of them knew it... at a time their eyes met... geet was cutting the vegetables... but to hear the convo she stopped in her track and hold the knife in her hand closely...

maan: sheena tum kya baate kar rahi ho...

sheena: maan i know i have hurted u but believe me we could be the best pair like in our collage,,, humare bich jo kuch bhi tha wo tum kabhi nahi vul sakte ye main bhi janti hu aur tum bhi, i know u still like me like before...

geet's mind stopped working and her heartbeat thudding like a volcano, can blast in any moment,, she hold the knife in her palm tightly to stopped her rapid heartbeat which was feeling a stange pain like thousand niddle pince her hard... she was in pain but for not the cut in her palm but the words sheena was telling him... they were together sometime,,, is that possible maan has forget her and did he love her? geet eyes were clouded in tears and blood was oazing out from her palm,,,, drop by drop there was a pool of blood in the white marble floor... maan was looking at her eyes, he can feel she is in pain...

aadi came there and shouted to see the amount of blood...

aadi: geettt,,, ye kya huya. on seeing aadi geet dropped the knife from her hand but maan has seen her dropping that... he instantly goes to kitchen and wanted to take her hand but geet didn't let touch him... and leave from there...

precap: aisa kyun kiya geet?

...

thank u guys for ur support,, next update may be confession...

extremely sorry for all the mistake...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
Oh
superb
ye sheena ki to main
argh i hate her
oh poor geet
hope use jyada na laga ho
pls ab ye jaldi confes karle
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
urghhh hate this Sheena
superb update
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: tinu.jindal

Oh
superb
ye sheena ki to main
argh i hate her
oh poor geet
hope use jyada na laga ho
pls ab ye jaldi confes karle



abb agar confession hoga to sheena k wajah se hi hoga,, jealousy can do wonder
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: -maankimishti-

urghhh hate this Sheena

superb update
continue soon



thank u dear, hmm sheena ne sabke naak me dam kar diya hain
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
awesome update
Omg geet cut her hand 😲
ye maan geet ko jealous kera ne main kahi age najye ki geet ko kuch aur ker de 😕
thanks4 pm
cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: Mishti13

awesome update

Omg geet cut her hand😲
ye maan geet kojealouskera ne main kahi age najye ki geet ko kuch aur ker de😕
thanks4 pm
cont. soon



abb dard jisne diya hain dawa bhi wo hi dede to kya baat hain...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
hate this sheena😡
geet cut her hand😲
poor geet😭

loved it😳
continue soon😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
sorry no upadate for today, surely tom u all get an update of this,,

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