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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: monika1992

superb update

wen will u update?

dear i'll update tonight,, i think may be in 1hr...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww so sweet dear...
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sirf mere liye

part 16

next morning...

geet went to meet rahul at his place, she told bindiya about it and went to meet him as she can't come with him...aadi came to breakfast table and inquired about geet,,,,,,

aadi: bindiya geet kaha hain, breakfast nahi karegi kya... maan just came in right time, and heared their conversation...but aadi and bindiya were unknown about it as they were busy in there talk...

bindiya: aadi wo apne frnd k ghar gayi hain wo kya naam tha ha RAHUL,,,,now this is a blow to maan's anger, just last night geet was there like she wanted to say something, like she was ashamed of something her eyes her tears her breath was only talking about her apology or he just imagined that???

maan couldn't stand there a next min and goes from there without listening the whole sentence of bindiya...

bindiya: wo rahul ko yehi kehne gayi k wo hamare sath wapis jayegi, un logo k sath wo nahi jasakti...

at rahul place...

geet: hey guys, hii rahul...

one of the frnd: hey geet, whats up gal, kaha thi tu itne din.. pata hain rahul tere liye kitna pareshan tha... he said without teasing smirk and looked at rahul...

rahul: shut up tony, come geet, so where is ur bags? hum kal yaha se nikal ne wale hain so tab tak yaha enjoy karlo...

actually the grp is thinking rahul n geet is a couple in love, and when geet came to her hometown rahul missed her so the teasing smile n all come out from the frnds...

geet: nahi rahul wo main yaha ye kehne aayi thi k but before geet could complete maan came there... (abb acp ainvey to nahi huya na... he can manage the adress) maan hold geet's hand, and everyone gets confused who is this guys... girls in the group was just staring at him with open mouth as they could eat him alive, maan was wearing a white shirt with 1st 3 button open... and the angry look on his face was giving him a HAWT look...

but the boys r petrified to see the anger in his eyes, they couldn't say anything...but rahul knew him so he mustered the courage to speak to him...

maan: chalo yaha se,,,,,,

geet: maan wo but maan gave a threatning to look to geet to which she got confused only as she has told bindiya why she is here, she thought maan knew about it...

rahul: hey dudu, come down...wo geet to mere sath,, before he could complete maan said...

maan: geet kahi nahi ja rahi tum logo k sath,,,, chalo yaha se abb geet...

one of the frnd: and who r u to say that? tum kon hote ho geet k jo tum decide kar rahe ho wo jayegi ya nahi?bodygaurd to nahi lagte,,,, and all the boys lauged on this line,,,

maan: main jo v hu ye tum logo ko janne ki jarurat nahi, bas geet tum logo k sath nahi ja rahi hain ye jaanlo...

geet: meri baat to suniye?

maan gave an another look which was enough to shut her mouth...rahul hold geet another hand only boil maan's blood a lil more...

maan just wanted to punch him right then...

one of the girl: geet tum usse kuch keh kyun nahi rahi ho, tum to hamare sath jane wali ho na? and who the hell is he...

geet couldn't answer her she just follow maan staring at his back... who was tightly holding her wrist,,,they came out from the bunglow but maan didn't let go her wrist...

geet: maan mujhe dard ho raha hain.. let me go...

maan: maine kaha tha na geet tum inke sath nahi jayogi fir v tum yaha agayi... tum sirf apna soch sakti ho geet dusre koi maine nahi rakhte na tumhare liye, dusre kya sochte hain kya chahte hain tumhe koi pharak nahi padhta... his each word was spit in fire...

geet: lekin main to yaha ye kehne aayai thi,,,

maan: kya huh? kya kehne aayi thi tum? yehi k tum mere sath nahi inke sath jana chahti ho, wo rahul jo tumhara sabse accha dost hain uske sath, pata nahi sirf dost hain ya,,,,,,,,,,,

geet: ya??? kya huya maan aage complete kijiye, dost hain ya? aur kuch huya v to kya, apko kya farak padhta hain?

maan: GEETTT,,,,,,,,,,,, now he was holding her arms tightly, so tight that anyone can find his marks on her like he was claiming her...

geet can see the fire in his eyes,,,,,,, like he can't tolarate anyone name with her and don't know why she feeling happy, the pain which cz of his holding doesn't matter to her... he let go her and order to sit in the car... geet noded silently and have her seat,, the journey was silent, and when they reach the cottage,, geet just goes to her room without ven looking at anyone... bindiya follow her,,,,

bindiya: geet tum maan k sath? but her eyes caught the marks on geet... she panicked...

bindiya: geettt, ye kya huya? kaise huya,, maan ko bataya tumne?

geet: kisse batati bindiya jo khud wajah hain isska...

bindiya: maan? usne ye sab kiya? lekin kyun?

geet: kya batati, wo to sunna hi nahi chahta the?

bindiya couldn't control herself, she immideatly went out and goes to maan's room...

bindiya: MAAN ye sab kya hain? tumne geet se kaise baat ki...

maan: kya huya bindiya?

bindiya: maan tumne geet ko kya kaha?

maan: kuch nahi, kyun usne shikayat lagayi kya?

bindiya: wo shikayat karne wali ladki nahi hain...

maan: ha sirf kisiki baat wo nahi maan sakti, jab tak apni khud ki na chalaye usko chain nahi padhta, khudgarg hain wo ladki...

bindiya: MAANNN... khudgarg ha is liye wo rahul se ye kehne gayi k wo hamare sath jayegi un logo k sath nahi, khudgarg issi liye ek ajnabe pe believe kiya apne frnd wajaye,, wo agar khudgarag hoti to kabka yaha se chali gayi hoti, tumko mere sath dekh k v tumse kuch nahi pucha, yehi khudgargi na? ek ajnabe pe itna varosa kiya k akele tumhare sath rehne chali aayi ye v khudgargi thi? aur tumne kya kiya usse takleef di? jab k wo tumse pyar karne lagi thi...

maan looked at her shocked...

bindiya: don't tell me man tumhe pata nahi chala geet v tumse pyar karti hain... aur tum usse hi itni takleef de rahe ho... manti hu k geet ne tumpe khafi iljam lagaye honge lekin anjaane me aur wo sirf uska pyar hi to tha...

maan: bindiya wo kaha hain?

bindiya: apne kamre me...

maan goes to geet room but he doesn't knock the door he just enter the room...

geet was applying a ointment where maan leaved his finger's mark...geet didn't saw him, she realize when he took the ointment and started to apply on her, geet coudn't say anything she just looked at him with all her love in her eyes,, maan was drown in them and came close to her to meet her eyes but doesn't have the courage...geet to was feeling guilty as she was doubting on him and accuse him unknowingly,,, geet look down...

SORRY both said...

maan cupped her face he wanted to kiss the eyes that was having tears only cz of him... wanted to hug her and pour all his inner turmoil that has to face all the time alone,,, wanted to cry but coudn't do anything,,, he only stairs at her with intense eyes...

geet has a weired feeling to hold him to hug him like she knew he want her... maan came close to her and kissed on her arms where the marks are... one drop of his tear fell on them and geet closed her eyes with it...

maan: bohot dard horaha hain?

geet noded her head in NO...

maan kissed her eyes following with forehead, then her cheeks... and when was close enough to kissed her lips his phone rang... (i know u all wanted to throw ur chappals on me :p :p)both came out the trance and maan attend the call... after the call maan turn to see geet but she was not there...

at rahul's place...

kya yaar rahul wo to chali gayi us admi k sath wo v tera sath chod ke, hume to laga tha tum dono sath ho aur geet tumhari baat kabhi nahi taal sakti...

rahul: aisi koi baat nahi hain tony, usse to meri baat maanni hi paregi, tabhi maine maan k samne kuch nahi kaha, waise v uss acp k samne main kuch nahi kar sakta tha, wo acp bohot akhru aur angry young man hain main ya tum kuch karte to abhi tak hospital me hote hum... gussa nahi dekha tha uska...

vikas: ha yaar, gussa to naak pe tha...

sonia: naak nahi aknho me tha wo v geet k liye. kash mujhe aisa hottyy milta, pata nahi ye geet me hain kya jo har koi uske liye pagal hain yaha ye rahul aur waha wo,,,,,,,

rahul: sonia geet to sirf meri hi banegi, aise thodi na delhi se yaha aaya hu... geet ko to main hi leke jayunga by hook or by crook. and gave a dirty smirk anyone can guess he was having a plan to set...

ok tell me howz it... i know some want to throw chappal n rotten tomato, all these r welcome hehehe, bas thoda wait karlo... waise maine aaj maan geet ko thoda sa milaya to tha na... bolo? :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful Scrap

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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
wow superb.
loved the part
oh god ye rahul kya karne waala hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
awesome update
loved maan came and took geet out of those nutankies
That Rahul 😡
cont. soon
waiting for next one
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
waiting for the next update dear
Awesome...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
thanks guys for the lovely comments,,,, sorry no update for tonight,, but isurely post tomorrow morning... love u all
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so sweettt dear,,, love u and thank u for such sweet pix
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
awesome ss read whole in one go plz add me to pm buddy request already send

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